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Topic: [74898] Revenge, it just doesn't end.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: June 9, 2012, 2:31 a.m.
Dynito City was calm and quiet. Mostly because all the kids were back in school. It was now the month of October, and all the kids had started school early in September. Fall was now here, and all the trees were turning colors. The sky was all clear and bright, the sun was shining even thought the temperature was cool. Everything seemed pretty desolate and calm. Nothing but silence, except for the songs of the birds, was heard. That is until, one kid in Dynito High School screamed................
"AN F?! I GOT AN F ON MY PHYSICS TEST?! COME ON I STUDIED HARD LAST NIGHT!" Tearoy screamed at the top of his lungs in the lunchroom, embarrassing everyone of us at the lunch table. "by studied hard you mean you put it off till 4 in the morning. And instead of studying you watched the SpongeBob SquarePants marathon right?" i teased him, while taking a last tasty bite of my banana and cranberry jelly sandwich. "Hey! Do not knock the sponge! he's awesome! and totally appropriate for my age." Tearoy snapped back. All of us busted out laughing. So it was true that he watched the marathon of Spongebob.
Hey, it's me Kate once again. Tearoy is stupid isn't he? Course, i never say it out loud because i know i'll get my butt kicked and handed to me. Carson suddenly nudged me in the shoulder, "I think he's just like Patrick eh Kate?" that made me laugh even harder. "Carson your a riot!" Ray heaved, he was laughing so hard he couldn't even breathe! Carson laughed so much, he was banging his fist on the table. Even Jason was laughing, and he fell backwards out of the lunch table.Tearoy just stared at us all angrily. Ah well let him. So far i got 3 F's in my classes, and you don't see me complaining do you? School is for chumps, that's my motto. You remember my motto right? Yep. F is for Fantastic. Anyways, once we all got done laughing our butts off, Tearoy grumbled "At least i am not short."
That comment made Carson wince a little bit. He didn't like be called short. Last week at the school field trip to the Dynito Museam of Nature and Science, the tour guide wanted to put him with the elementary students. Boy did Carson blush so much he was practically pure red. So he snapped at the women "For your information, i am a high school student! I may look like a elementary kid but i'm not ok?!" I just laughed to myself. When he's angry he can be cute. Oh what am i saying? BLEAH! You take that back Kate! Oh forget it. Right now i got to get ready for math class, the most boring class of the day.
Like i said, it was boring. Algabra 3 is no big whoop. But i am good at it. Carson was in my class and he was lucky because he could get help from Kami. Kami hasn't been out for a while now. I guess he's still resting up. Or he's just letting Carson enjoy himself. He'll be out soon enough though. strangely, i have feelings for the guy. He is as cute as Carson. KATE SHUT UP! I HATE MY FEELINGS! Uhhgh. Hopefully school gets out soon. I think it's messing with my brain so that's why. "All right class. you are dismissed." my teacher Mrs. Bunn said. RIIIIINNNNGGG! with that the final bell rang.
Quickly rushing out the classroom, i made my way to Hallway 15. Which the location of my locker. what really was cool was that all of my friends lockers were also on Hallway 12. That was nice considering we don't have to wait 10 minutes after school to meet up with each other. There were lots of kids attending here. When they rush out the door its like a stampede of cows! In fact, they were stampeding right now. But i could see Tearoy towering above all of them with Ray, Carson, and Jason next to him. I made my way over there, then all of us headed out the school doors. That's when some trouble started though.
someone was yelling "HELP! HELP! STOP IT STOP IT!" "HA HA HA HA! SQUIRM KID! SQUIRM!" "what in the blazes is that?" Jason asked, looking frantically in all directions. "I have no idea., lets follow the voices." i suggested. Tearoy, and Ray nodded. Carson had a concerned on his face, and looked at me suggestively. So i lead the group in the direction of the voices. as we were running with our backpacks over our shoulders the voiced got louder. "LET ME GO!" "GIVE ME YOUR MONEY KID!" Suddenly Tearoy stopped in his tracks, and grabbed me by my backpack. He dragged me backwards and pointed ahead. There were two kids, one was a girl and the other was a boy. The boy was a lot bigger than the girl, and the girl looked about my size. The boy had the girl in a head lock, and was punching her in her ribs and in her face.
I didn't know what to do. I did not want to get involved in any fights. I could get in trouble. Tearoy agreed with me by the look on his face. So did Ray and Jason. That did not stop Carson though. He ran up to the boy, and did a high kick to his face, knocking the boy down and freeing the girl. "Hey man! this is non of your business! Get a move on!" the boy said to Carsons face. "I think it is my business to protect kids from bullies!" Carson growled in a deep determined voice. Wait a second, that's not Carson. When the boy made a charge at him, Carson dodged to the left and whirred around to kick the boy in his butt. When he did i could see that Carson had blue eyes. OH duh, its Kami! After that, Kami proceeded to pick the boy up my his shirt collar, and he lifted him into the air. "PUT ME DOWN!" he whined. But Kami did not take any pity.
With his blue eyes glowing furiously, he hurled the boy down the school yard. once the boy got up and saw Kami making a charge at him, he turned around and high tailed it out of the school yard. "That's right! RUN! And i hope you learned your lesson!" Kami yelled, as he made his way back to us. Meanwhile, Tearoy went to check on the girl who was being bullied. I followed. Hopefully that boy didn't hurt her too much. And who was this girl anyway? I never seen here before in the school. I bet she is new. Well i guess we'll have to find out now won't we? Hopefully she is nice and not crazy like Leon was. After all he was a new student also. I just hope this isn't another physio.
this is part one of this story. What do you think so far?:huh:
"AN F?! I GOT AN F ON MY PHYSICS TEST?! COME ON I STUDIED HARD LAST NIGHT!" Tearoy screamed at the top of his lungs in the lunchroom, embarrassing everyone of us at the lunch table. "by studied hard you mean you put it off till 4 in the morning. And instead of studying you watched the SpongeBob SquarePants marathon right?" i teased him, while taking a last tasty bite of my banana and cranberry jelly sandwich. "Hey! Do not knock the sponge! he's awesome! and totally appropriate for my age." Tearoy snapped back. All of us busted out laughing. So it was true that he watched the marathon of Spongebob.
Hey, it's me Kate once again. Tearoy is stupid isn't he? Course, i never say it out loud because i know i'll get my butt kicked and handed to me. Carson suddenly nudged me in the shoulder, "I think he's just like Patrick eh Kate?" that made me laugh even harder. "Carson your a riot!" Ray heaved, he was laughing so hard he couldn't even breathe! Carson laughed so much, he was banging his fist on the table. Even Jason was laughing, and he fell backwards out of the lunch table.Tearoy just stared at us all angrily. Ah well let him. So far i got 3 F's in my classes, and you don't see me complaining do you? School is for chumps, that's my motto. You remember my motto right? Yep. F is for Fantastic. Anyways, once we all got done laughing our butts off, Tearoy grumbled "At least i am not short."
That comment made Carson wince a little bit. He didn't like be called short. Last week at the school field trip to the Dynito Museam of Nature and Science, the tour guide wanted to put him with the elementary students. Boy did Carson blush so much he was practically pure red. So he snapped at the women "For your information, i am a high school student! I may look like a elementary kid but i'm not ok?!" I just laughed to myself. When he's angry he can be cute. Oh what am i saying? BLEAH! You take that back Kate! Oh forget it. Right now i got to get ready for math class, the most boring class of the day.
Like i said, it was boring. Algabra 3 is no big whoop. But i am good at it. Carson was in my class and he was lucky because he could get help from Kami. Kami hasn't been out for a while now. I guess he's still resting up. Or he's just letting Carson enjoy himself. He'll be out soon enough though. strangely, i have feelings for the guy. He is as cute as Carson. KATE SHUT UP! I HATE MY FEELINGS! Uhhgh. Hopefully school gets out soon. I think it's messing with my brain so that's why. "All right class. you are dismissed." my teacher Mrs. Bunn said. RIIIIINNNNGGG! with that the final bell rang.
Quickly rushing out the classroom, i made my way to Hallway 15. Which the location of my locker. what really was cool was that all of my friends lockers were also on Hallway 12. That was nice considering we don't have to wait 10 minutes after school to meet up with each other. There were lots of kids attending here. When they rush out the door its like a stampede of cows! In fact, they were stampeding right now. But i could see Tearoy towering above all of them with Ray, Carson, and Jason next to him. I made my way over there, then all of us headed out the school doors. That's when some trouble started though.
someone was yelling "HELP! HELP! STOP IT STOP IT!" "HA HA HA HA! SQUIRM KID! SQUIRM!" "what in the blazes is that?" Jason asked, looking frantically in all directions. "I have no idea., lets follow the voices." i suggested. Tearoy, and Ray nodded. Carson had a concerned on his face, and looked at me suggestively. So i lead the group in the direction of the voices. as we were running with our backpacks over our shoulders the voiced got louder. "LET ME GO!" "GIVE ME YOUR MONEY KID!" Suddenly Tearoy stopped in his tracks, and grabbed me by my backpack. He dragged me backwards and pointed ahead. There were two kids, one was a girl and the other was a boy. The boy was a lot bigger than the girl, and the girl looked about my size. The boy had the girl in a head lock, and was punching her in her ribs and in her face.
I didn't know what to do. I did not want to get involved in any fights. I could get in trouble. Tearoy agreed with me by the look on his face. So did Ray and Jason. That did not stop Carson though. He ran up to the boy, and did a high kick to his face, knocking the boy down and freeing the girl. "Hey man! this is non of your business! Get a move on!" the boy said to Carsons face. "I think it is my business to protect kids from bullies!" Carson growled in a deep determined voice. Wait a second, that's not Carson. When the boy made a charge at him, Carson dodged to the left and whirred around to kick the boy in his butt. When he did i could see that Carson had blue eyes. OH duh, its Kami! After that, Kami proceeded to pick the boy up my his shirt collar, and he lifted him into the air. "PUT ME DOWN!" he whined. But Kami did not take any pity.
With his blue eyes glowing furiously, he hurled the boy down the school yard. once the boy got up and saw Kami making a charge at him, he turned around and high tailed it out of the school yard. "That's right! RUN! And i hope you learned your lesson!" Kami yelled, as he made his way back to us. Meanwhile, Tearoy went to check on the girl who was being bullied. I followed. Hopefully that boy didn't hurt her too much. And who was this girl anyway? I never seen here before in the school. I bet she is new. Well i guess we'll have to find out now won't we? Hopefully she is nice and not crazy like Leon was. After all he was a new student also. I just hope this isn't another physio.
this is part one of this story. What do you think so far?:huh:
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albastrel6 [None]
:: June 9, 2012, 4:49 a.m.
ohhh i know the bullie is from leons gang !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: June 9, 2012, 4:51 a.m.
Neat.!Cool.!AMAZING.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@ Albastrel I don't think so!
@ Albastrel I don't think so!
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doglider [None]
:: June 9, 2012, 9:57 p.m.
Tell me before you start another story. it's getting annoying.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: June 9, 2012, 10:01 p.m.
ok ok, you mean about how Kate survived the cut in the last one right? well that was just luck i guess. i can't make the main character of the story die ha ha.
And writing just comes natural i guess. I like to write.
those were the answers to your previous questions in Cry for Mercy, but as of now in the new one i can't just reveal what is going to happen. It's all part of the story;) otherwise it wouldn't be as interesting now would it? You will have to see later on. for i am writing part 2, and it will come later today.
And writing just comes natural i guess. I like to write.
those were the answers to your previous questions in Cry for Mercy, but as of now in the new one i can't just reveal what is going to happen. It's all part of the story;) otherwise it wouldn't be as interesting now would it? You will have to see later on. for i am writing part 2, and it will come later today.
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doglider [None]
:: June 9, 2012, 10:11 p.m.
I only realized you had started Cry For Mercy when you said you had Part 3.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: June 10, 2012, 2:56 a.m.
Ah ok. So your still reading the 2nd one? Cool. sorry i might be going a little fast for some people but i have a lot of free time with summer break off from school so i use that time to write. And part two of this story will be tomorrow. I have to go to bed.
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: June 10, 2012, 3:16 a.m.
+ once you end the story , don't forget 2 mention the nxt story's title! I have to search 'King Dooooooom' the ur started threads , theeeen revenge,-series!
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: June 10, 2012, 5:01 p.m.
Alright, i did manage to post in Cry For Mercy where to find this third story. I shall do that from now on, and thanks for bringing the issue up to me 
. so here is
Part 2..............
Me, Jason, Ray, Tearoy, and closely followed up by Kami, surrounded the girl that the boy had beat up. Kami helped her up to her feet. Once she was fine and dandy, she said "Thank you. You saved my from that annoying bully Raymond Rivers. Oh how rude of me! I haven't even told you my name. I am Victoria Winters. I am new here and i just moved into town" .Afterwards she began to dust off her pink dress and fix her dark blonde hair. HA! i knew it! she is a newbie! And hopefully not a crazy bent on Revenge newbie."You really took some hits back there." Tearoy said, as he looked kindly into Victorias eyes. Victoria just smiled back, and gave him a wink. " Oh it was nothing handsome. I took many more hits from other bullies at my old tow. So this was just another scratch on my big book of bullies.". Then Victoria put her hand up to her red lips, and blew Tearoy a kiss.
This made Tearoy smile affectionately. But i was now happy. Oh my god girl are you kidding me? You are flirting with my friend? Your definitely not from around here are you? That wasn't the worst of it though. Victoria walked slowly and daintily over to Kami (who was indeed a lot taller than she was). She stood up on her tippy toes, and then touched her nose to his. I could tell this was making Kami seriously uncomfortable, and he started to back up a bit. But Victoria managed to hold her nose to his the whole time he stepped backward. "thanks for saving me big guy." Victoria winked, rubbing her nose back and forth on Kamis and then kissed him on the cheek! Woah Nelly girl we just met! Slow down, and stop flirting! It's really irritating me. I quickly looked over to Kami. He was blushing and turning red with embarrassment as Victoria winked again and finally backed off. Heh, it was funny the way he blushed though. It was just like Carson when he encountered a women.
Wow, is Kami very similar to Carson now. But right now i was feeling a wee bit angry with this Victoria girl to even think about that now. Flirting with my friends, HA! Oh you have no idea who your messing with do you Victoria? "Can i hang out with you guys?" Victoria suddenly asked Tearoy (which interrupted my angry thoughts). Imminently i flashed a angry look at Tearoy; which meant "NO BLEEPING WAY!". As usual i was ignored and Tearoy said "Sure thing. We're playing Dark Seek tonight want to join us?" my mouth dropped open. Tearoy your asking her? Miss pretty newbie to play Dark Seek with us? OH wait that is it right there!
Looks like big guy Tearoy has a little crush on the new girl eh? Figures. From my viewpoint, it looked like Ray, and Jason were also giving Victoria the "I'm so interested in you" look as well. Kami was just standing there, blushing red still and rubbing the back of his neck. At least one boy isn't interested in her. OK then, i think i would rather have another physio path than miss Flirts a Lot. Now i was just feeling even more enraged. she's going to take away my friends! Oh Kate don't be overdramatic now. Give her a chance tonight, and see how things go from there.
"Great! Sounds like fun! where do we meet at?" Victoria said, sounding very enthused when i knew she was just messing with Tearoy's head. "At Central Park. Dusk. 6:00 pm." Tearoy grinned, winking at her and giving her the thumbs up sign. Oh brother i think i am going to puke here! Someone give me a bucket!! "Alright! i'll meet you all there. you can tell me your names then. Bye!" She smiled, as she winked again and started to walk off. Before she left though, Victoria walked over to Kami and gave him another peck on the cheek. This made Kami groan with even more embarrassment. His cheeks were so red now they matched the color of his shirt perfectly. And it made me feel hot all over. Hot with the feeling of anger, speciousness, and i think a wee bit of jealously.
As we departed, i could see Tearoy, Jason, and Ray were still hypnotized by Victorias beauty. whats the big deal? So what? Oh now i see. They liked here because she was a dark blonde, had a tight skinned pink dress on, and she was wearing make up. BIG FRIKEN DEAL! she looked like more of a prom queen than a regular new school girl. By the time i had noticed that i had spent too much time thinking to myself Tearoy, Jason, and Ray already left. Without giving me a single good bye, or instructions for tonight's Dark Seek game! And i was used to that! Oh geez they must be really hypnotized by her beauty. Only Kami was left standing next to me, readjusting his backpack, and still red around the cheeks.
"You ok there Kami?" I asked him, putting my hand on his shoulder. Kami nodded and said "I wall, i um, well i, um, i am just not used to girls doing that!" "Doing what?" i insisted. "Kissing me that's what! I haven't experienced that in like, forever! Ever since i died, i haven't been around girls that do that." Hearing this reply i suddenly felt bad for Kami. He was a dead spirit hanging around and sharing Carson's body from what i could tell with that Thousand Triangle thing that let them switch back and forth from time to time. Mostly when Carson was in need though i have noticed. But he looked so similar to Carson in so many ways. Pretty much only his eye color, eye shape, voice, and his blonde bangs with the green streak in them were the only differences And i was thinking to myself, was there a connection? Hmmm.
Ah well i'll deal with the Kami and Carson deal later. Right now i had to focus on tonight's game of Dark Seek with the new girl Victoria. Or should i say, miss Flirts a lot. "Come on Kami, i'll walk with you home." I suggested to him to try to make him feel better after flirting with a girl. "It's ok Kate. I'll let you do that with Carson." Kami winked, as he glowed and then Carson came back. He seemed to be just as uncomfortable as Kami was. As we were walking down Main Street to get to the street connection of OaksBurrow and Holly, Carson said to me "Kate, i think i don't like Victoria. She seems quite, suspicious in a way." "I know Carson. did you see how she had Tearoy, Ray, and Jason looking at her? It made me angry!" Carson just smiled and replied before he left "Don't worry Kate. Me and Kami will think of a plan and or stragity to keep a close eye on Victoria. And you can help. Oh and instead of heading toward Central Park right away like you always do, meet me at my house at 5:30." Before i could ask why, Carson waved good bye to me, and ran down OaksBurrow street to get to his house. It's just like Carson to leave me hanging. So i shrugged and headed down Holy Street to my house.
I arrived, opened the front door of the house, and went inside. Once again my parents left me a note saying they were out. So there home for one day, and now there off to work again eh? Looks like the overtime shift too. Sigh. It made me feel a little sad. For my mom had promised to take a walk with me around own, and then help me plant a garden. Another thing to add to my worry list. Oh well. Might as well do my homework, and then relax for 2 hours before i go out again. And that's exactly what i did.
It was 5:00 when i looked up from the computer screen. I could tell because of the computer clock, and by the setting sun. the living room was ablaze in the color orange from it. I was playing "Puzzle Bobble" and i had the high score already beaten. A great accomplishment for the day. Turning off the computer, i then ran up the stairs to my room. I headed straight for my dresser. I pulled out my black long sleeve shirt and black jeans, my usual attire for Dark Seek. I got dressed, and put on my black sneakers. Before i rushed down the stairs again, i grabbed my trusty Silent Master 4000 pistol and extra ammo to go with it. I don't trust the Dark Forest at all anymore, so bringing a weapon make me feel safe.
Hopefully Leon is dead, and won't surprise us in there again. And also i hope we don't go near the Dark River again. I can't risk Kami and Carson drowning again. So petting my cat Spot goodbye for the night, i exited my house and locked the front door behind me. Its a good thing i have the house keys with me. Instead of heading straight for Central Park like usual, i headed for OaksBurrow street to meet up with Carson. I wonder what he had planned for tonight.
part 3 coming up later. how was this?
. so here isPart 2..............
Me, Jason, Ray, Tearoy, and closely followed up by Kami, surrounded the girl that the boy had beat up. Kami helped her up to her feet. Once she was fine and dandy, she said "Thank you. You saved my from that annoying bully Raymond Rivers. Oh how rude of me! I haven't even told you my name. I am Victoria Winters. I am new here and i just moved into town" .Afterwards she began to dust off her pink dress and fix her dark blonde hair. HA! i knew it! she is a newbie! And hopefully not a crazy bent on Revenge newbie."You really took some hits back there." Tearoy said, as he looked kindly into Victorias eyes. Victoria just smiled back, and gave him a wink. " Oh it was nothing handsome. I took many more hits from other bullies at my old tow. So this was just another scratch on my big book of bullies.". Then Victoria put her hand up to her red lips, and blew Tearoy a kiss.
This made Tearoy smile affectionately. But i was now happy. Oh my god girl are you kidding me? You are flirting with my friend? Your definitely not from around here are you? That wasn't the worst of it though. Victoria walked slowly and daintily over to Kami (who was indeed a lot taller than she was). She stood up on her tippy toes, and then touched her nose to his. I could tell this was making Kami seriously uncomfortable, and he started to back up a bit. But Victoria managed to hold her nose to his the whole time he stepped backward. "thanks for saving me big guy." Victoria winked, rubbing her nose back and forth on Kamis and then kissed him on the cheek! Woah Nelly girl we just met! Slow down, and stop flirting! It's really irritating me. I quickly looked over to Kami. He was blushing and turning red with embarrassment as Victoria winked again and finally backed off. Heh, it was funny the way he blushed though. It was just like Carson when he encountered a women.
Wow, is Kami very similar to Carson now. But right now i was feeling a wee bit angry with this Victoria girl to even think about that now. Flirting with my friends, HA! Oh you have no idea who your messing with do you Victoria? "Can i hang out with you guys?" Victoria suddenly asked Tearoy (which interrupted my angry thoughts). Imminently i flashed a angry look at Tearoy; which meant "NO BLEEPING WAY!". As usual i was ignored and Tearoy said "Sure thing. We're playing Dark Seek tonight want to join us?" my mouth dropped open. Tearoy your asking her? Miss pretty newbie to play Dark Seek with us? OH wait that is it right there!
Looks like big guy Tearoy has a little crush on the new girl eh? Figures. From my viewpoint, it looked like Ray, and Jason were also giving Victoria the "I'm so interested in you" look as well. Kami was just standing there, blushing red still and rubbing the back of his neck. At least one boy isn't interested in her. OK then, i think i would rather have another physio path than miss Flirts a Lot. Now i was just feeling even more enraged. she's going to take away my friends! Oh Kate don't be overdramatic now. Give her a chance tonight, and see how things go from there.
"Great! Sounds like fun! where do we meet at?" Victoria said, sounding very enthused when i knew she was just messing with Tearoy's head. "At Central Park. Dusk. 6:00 pm." Tearoy grinned, winking at her and giving her the thumbs up sign. Oh brother i think i am going to puke here! Someone give me a bucket!! "Alright! i'll meet you all there. you can tell me your names then. Bye!" She smiled, as she winked again and started to walk off. Before she left though, Victoria walked over to Kami and gave him another peck on the cheek. This made Kami groan with even more embarrassment. His cheeks were so red now they matched the color of his shirt perfectly. And it made me feel hot all over. Hot with the feeling of anger, speciousness, and i think a wee bit of jealously.
As we departed, i could see Tearoy, Jason, and Ray were still hypnotized by Victorias beauty. whats the big deal? So what? Oh now i see. They liked here because she was a dark blonde, had a tight skinned pink dress on, and she was wearing make up. BIG FRIKEN DEAL! she looked like more of a prom queen than a regular new school girl. By the time i had noticed that i had spent too much time thinking to myself Tearoy, Jason, and Ray already left. Without giving me a single good bye, or instructions for tonight's Dark Seek game! And i was used to that! Oh geez they must be really hypnotized by her beauty. Only Kami was left standing next to me, readjusting his backpack, and still red around the cheeks.
"You ok there Kami?" I asked him, putting my hand on his shoulder. Kami nodded and said "I wall, i um, well i, um, i am just not used to girls doing that!" "Doing what?" i insisted. "Kissing me that's what! I haven't experienced that in like, forever! Ever since i died, i haven't been around girls that do that." Hearing this reply i suddenly felt bad for Kami. He was a dead spirit hanging around and sharing Carson's body from what i could tell with that Thousand Triangle thing that let them switch back and forth from time to time. Mostly when Carson was in need though i have noticed. But he looked so similar to Carson in so many ways. Pretty much only his eye color, eye shape, voice, and his blonde bangs with the green streak in them were the only differences And i was thinking to myself, was there a connection? Hmmm.
Ah well i'll deal with the Kami and Carson deal later. Right now i had to focus on tonight's game of Dark Seek with the new girl Victoria. Or should i say, miss Flirts a lot. "Come on Kami, i'll walk with you home." I suggested to him to try to make him feel better after flirting with a girl. "It's ok Kate. I'll let you do that with Carson." Kami winked, as he glowed and then Carson came back. He seemed to be just as uncomfortable as Kami was. As we were walking down Main Street to get to the street connection of OaksBurrow and Holly, Carson said to me "Kate, i think i don't like Victoria. She seems quite, suspicious in a way." "I know Carson. did you see how she had Tearoy, Ray, and Jason looking at her? It made me angry!" Carson just smiled and replied before he left "Don't worry Kate. Me and Kami will think of a plan and or stragity to keep a close eye on Victoria. And you can help. Oh and instead of heading toward Central Park right away like you always do, meet me at my house at 5:30." Before i could ask why, Carson waved good bye to me, and ran down OaksBurrow street to get to his house. It's just like Carson to leave me hanging. So i shrugged and headed down Holy Street to my house.
I arrived, opened the front door of the house, and went inside. Once again my parents left me a note saying they were out. So there home for one day, and now there off to work again eh? Looks like the overtime shift too. Sigh. It made me feel a little sad. For my mom had promised to take a walk with me around own, and then help me plant a garden. Another thing to add to my worry list. Oh well. Might as well do my homework, and then relax for 2 hours before i go out again. And that's exactly what i did.
It was 5:00 when i looked up from the computer screen. I could tell because of the computer clock, and by the setting sun. the living room was ablaze in the color orange from it. I was playing "Puzzle Bobble" and i had the high score already beaten. A great accomplishment for the day. Turning off the computer, i then ran up the stairs to my room. I headed straight for my dresser. I pulled out my black long sleeve shirt and black jeans, my usual attire for Dark Seek. I got dressed, and put on my black sneakers. Before i rushed down the stairs again, i grabbed my trusty Silent Master 4000 pistol and extra ammo to go with it. I don't trust the Dark Forest at all anymore, so bringing a weapon make me feel safe.
Hopefully Leon is dead, and won't surprise us in there again. And also i hope we don't go near the Dark River again. I can't risk Kami and Carson drowning again. So petting my cat Spot goodbye for the night, i exited my house and locked the front door behind me. Its a good thing i have the house keys with me. Instead of heading straight for Central Park like usual, i headed for OaksBurrow street to meet up with Carson. I wonder what he had planned for tonight.
part 3 coming up later. how was this?
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UltimateJhon [None]
:: June 10, 2012, 5:15 p.m.
to long for my liking and if you are a kid you are doing well..
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albastrel6 [None]
:: June 10, 2012, 5:46 p.m.
oh then the girl is in leon's gang OR THE GIRL IS POSESSED BY LEON
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Unknown
:: June 10, 2012, 6:13 p.m.
very good,.
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flashstriker [None]
:: June 10, 2012, 7:27 p.m.
that girl is weird lol
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xl5box [None]
:: June 10, 2012, 8:13 p.m.
Your an amazing writer, with a bit better punctuation and spelling and more storys this can be a nice, short book about kates advenures with her friends id buy it.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: June 11, 2012, 1:39 a.m.
thanks 
part 3 will be coming tomorrow.
part 3 will be coming tomorrow. [1360261]
doglider [None]
:: June 11, 2012, 4:25 a.m.
Pretty much the agreedYour an amazing writer, with a bit better punctuation and spelling and more storys this can be a nice, short book about kates advenures with her friends id buy it.
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Engard [None]
:: June 11, 2012, 2:13 p.m.
well your no Tolkien but your still pretty good
ps PLEACE PLEACE PLEACE right more:) i like your books sooooo much!!!
ps PLEACE PLEACE PLEACE right more:) i like your books sooooo much!!!
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flashstriker [None]
:: June 11, 2012, 4:44 p.m.
nice new sig doom
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: June 11, 2012, 8:19 p.m.
thanks. I like it too. As long as it doesn't disappear again.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: June 12, 2012, 12:10 a.m.
Now then, time for Part 3..............
The air was cold and chilly. But it is normal for this time of year. It is fall after all, and the middle of October as well. Oooooo, that means Halloween is coming up next week! I can't wait! I just love to get free candy from complete strangers who just love your costumes. Though normally my costumes consist of a card board box, and some plastic bags. My parents are cheap so they always want me to make my own costume. One time i went as a house bugler, and ended up getting thrown into the Dynito Juvenile Prison for the rest of the night because my neighbor thought i actually was a bugler. My neighbors are just dumb anyways. Another time i made a cardboard trashcan and i went as Kate the Trash Monster. That's what i called myself. The people thought i was just oh so cute. the fools. Who would think a kid, who is dressed up like a cardboard garbage can, is cute on Halloween? Unless the people thought i was dressed as Oscar the Grouch from Sesame Street or something. Anyways, i was just walking on the sidewalk to Carsons' house. The cold wind was blowing straight in my face so it was a rather unpleasant to walk. I could get frost bite out here! Nah that's too over dramatic.
Just then, i saw a familiar face running up to me. It was Carson. He was wearing his usual black cargo pants, and black Converse One Star brand shoes with white socks from what i could see. Instead of his usual baggy short sleeved shirt he was wearing a long sleeved black one; except his shirt had cuffs on the wrists, while mine did not. With his blonde, blue, and purple hair waving in the breeze Carson said to me "Are you ready to go?" I nodded. "Took you long enough. I am freezing my booty off!" Carson laughed as we walked together back up OaksBurrow street. "Your booty huh? Isn't it called your butt? Or how about the Gluteus Maxi-mus? Ha ha ha!" he laughed at me, as he gave my shoulder a playful punch. I just shook my head and smiled. "No Carson. How about i just call it the thing that i sit on?" i teased back. That just made him laugh even more. sigh, oh well i like his laugh. Its a good hearty laugh. Plus, since he had a little bit of a high voice, that just makes his laugh even funny to listen to.
So me and Carson laughed and joked and just talked about random stuff until we were nearing the entrance to Central Park. then Carson got down to business. "Ok Kate. Me and Kami have been talking things over and we have a bit of a plan." Carson whispered to me . I looked at him, and said "Yeah? well what are you two planning?" It felt weird saying "what are you two planning" because i was still creeped out by the fact that Carson had two sides to him.Carson shoved his hands into his cargo pants pockets. Then he motioned me to stop. I did. Then he continued "Since this Victoria girl seems a bit suspicious, me and Kami thought that we would spy on her. This is her first game of Dark Seek so it shouldn't be so hard to follow her anyways. She doesn't know the Dark Forest territory, and so she'll probably go for the first easy hiding spot she sees. Mostly likely it will be behind a big shrub, bush or tree. Therefore it'll be easy to track her movements, and see what she's up too. After all a girl who flirts like that can mean nothing but trouble." I took this information in for a second. Then i nodded my head and agreed to the plan that Carson proposed.
As we entered Central Park, i noticed that the wind was considerably stronger; and colder for that matter. Oh well, i have been through worse than this. Plus the weather is always weirder at night in Dynito than during the day. The sun had already set anyways, so that's why the temperature dropped i guessed. Just then i noticed Tearoy, Jason, and Ray talking and laughing with Victoria. Tearoy didn't even give me his usual pick me up by the hips and swing me around greeting. Not that i missed it or anything. I was just used to it. Instead, Tearoy just smiled and waved at me and Carson. Once we were in the group, Tearoy said "Alright lets get going to the Dark Forest." "YAY! this is going to be fun! right Handsome?" Victoria squealed. When she said handsome i noticed it was directed not at Tearoy, but at Carson. Carson just blushed a little and rolled his eyes. I tell you, if Victoria lays one finger on Carson, i swear, she will feel my wrath! Kate what are you saying? Your not saying you like him do you? Nope, i am just saying that i am concerned from his safety. yep that's it. And boy i need to stop talking to myself. Any way, the name of the Dark Forest just shuddered through me. I am surprised that i am still even going there. I have been through 2 painful and creepy adventures there, and i for one am not up for a third.
So reluctantly i followed Tearoy, Jason, Ray, and Victoria down the path leading to the Dark Forest with Carson right behind me. We arrived there in no time, and i could see the big fallen tree with the gigantic tunnel size hole in it from last time me and Carson were here.I guess it was the new entrance to the Dark Forest now. And to this day i still don't know how Kami kicked a hole in that size of a tree trunk. That's not humanly possible. "Alright who is going to be it?" Tearoy grinned, as he looked at Victoria. I guess he wanted her to be it. But Ray yipped that he wanted to be It, so it was decided.
I just noticed before i dashed into the Dark Forest, that Victoria was still wearing her tight skinned pink dress. Boy that is just stupid. Didn't Tearoy tell her to wear all black? I guess he forgot to. She'll be a way easy target to find. my thoughts were disturbed once again when Carson tapped me on the shoulder and motioned me with his arm to follow. Oh goody, now the fun of following Miss Flirts A Lot can begin! me and Carson dashed under the big tree tunnel, and we managed to keep on Victoria for a good 40 paces. Then i realized we had to fake like we were going off somewhere so we wouldn't be caught. so i motioned Carson to follow me, and we ran off 30 paces to the right. Afterwards we doubled back on our tracks and we went back to the stop were we once were. "Kate i see her over in those bushes." Carson whispered while pointing. I looked over to where he was pointing, and saw he was right. it was her pink dress that gave it away. Even in the dark she was still noticeable. Boy that is one neon pink dress!
Quickly i dove onto my belly and made myself into an army crawl position. I saw in my side vision that Carson jumped up onto a low pine tree branch noiselessly. Then he jumped kicked from the pine tree in front of him, and back onto the tree he was just on. He did that till i could see he was on the branch right above Victoria. Good. He could get a birds eye view of her. Suddenly i heard Ray yell "120! Here i come guys!" Hopefully Victoria knows that in Dark Seek the it player counts to 120 before they come to find you. right now i gotta camouflage.
Crawling deeper into the bushes in front of me, i managed to crawl through them until i was a few feet away from Victoria. I could see her perfectly. She was messing with her nails. CRUNCH CRUNCH CRUNCH! Well there goes Ray bounding off into the Dark Forest behind me. The moron forgot to move silently so the players won't be able to hear him coming toward them. but it sounded like he was moving away from me, Carson, and Victoria. He's probably going off to find Tearoy or Jason first. then he'll probably rebound and come back over here.
Turning my attention back to Victoria i noticed that she wasn't just playing with her nails, she was also playing with something else. And that something was a cell phone. I could see the screen light glowing in the darkness. It was a weird looking cell screen though. It had a red circle symbol in the middle of it, and she was texting words in black dots? Wait a second, it must be Morse code or something. But why was she texting in Morse code? And to who? There was no name in the send to box. I looked up toward the branch Carson was in. I could see that he was just as puzzled as i was. Suddenly she stopped. Then she blinded me with her cell phone light and said "Oh hi Kate! I didn't know that you were here!"
Crap. why do i always get caught when i try to spy? That just proves the point that i am the most easiest person to find i guess. "Hi Victoria. I didn't know you were hiding here either." i smiled back, as i crawled next to her. I sat up straight and looked her in the eyes. "Oh please Kate i already know that you and handsome boy up there followed me. I heard you guys fake going off somewhere, and then double back on your tracks. the fallen leaves provide such a good security system don't they?" "Um, sure Victoria. Sorry then. Well i guess i'll have to find a new hiding place eh?" i suggested, as i prepared to crawl away. But i guess Victoria had other plans.
First of all, she shook the tree that Carson was in. Carson fell down with a BAM! "YEOW! oh uh, hi Victoria, fancy meeting you here?" Carson grinned, as he rubbed the back of his neck. Victoria looked really annoyed though. "Look you two. I don't need you guys to follow me. I am not a weirdo! Geez. Your just like all the other kids. always thinking i am suspicious!" she was about to continue yelling more, when she stopped. I could see she had spotted Carsons Thousand Triangle necklace. The fall had caused the necklace to pop out from underneath Carsons shirt collar. He usually kept it in there so no one would look at it, or try to take it. Plus, he said it felt "safer and lighter" in there. I couldn't see how it could be lighter, it was a medium sized pure gold triangle with a blue triangle outlining the inside of it. It shone for a second in the moonlight.
Victoria scooted up to Carson, and pressed her nose against his again. " So YOUR the one eh?" she growled. Carson gave me a confused look for a second as. she proceeded to reach at the Thousand Triangle. She held the ancient looking amulet in her hand and inspected it; she then smiled evilly for a second. She was just about to pull something out of her pink purse (why did she even bring a purse anyways? We're in a forest!) when a voice hollered "AH HA! I found all 3 of you!"
That voice was Ray. He pulled aside the giant bushes we were behind, and slapped me on the back. "YES! i finally completed a round of Dark Seek! WOOOOOOO!" i looked over back at Victoria. She growled at Carson "I'll deal with you later." Carson still looked confused as Victoria greeted ray "Aw man! you found us! we were having a little camp out darling!" Ok, those little acts made me even more suspicious of her. what did she want with Carson? Then Tearoy yelled "Time for round 2 of Dark Seek! Back to the entrance! let's decide who will be It this time!" "Wait for me handsome!" Victoria smiled, running off to catch up with the giant.
Ray and Jason followed. I just stood there mystified at the way Victoria behaved toward Carson. I heard him walk over and stand next to me. Looking at him i could see he just as confused as i was. "What is with her?" he asked me. "I don't know Carson. I don't know." was all i had to say at that moment. I guess we'll have to find out in the next round of Dark Seek i guess. But Carson was right. What was the deal with Victoria?
part 4 is next. How was this part? If you have any questions or issues fell free to tell me. Sorry about punctuation or spelling/grammar errors.
The air was cold and chilly. But it is normal for this time of year. It is fall after all, and the middle of October as well. Oooooo, that means Halloween is coming up next week! I can't wait! I just love to get free candy from complete strangers who just love your costumes. Though normally my costumes consist of a card board box, and some plastic bags. My parents are cheap so they always want me to make my own costume. One time i went as a house bugler, and ended up getting thrown into the Dynito Juvenile Prison for the rest of the night because my neighbor thought i actually was a bugler. My neighbors are just dumb anyways. Another time i made a cardboard trashcan and i went as Kate the Trash Monster. That's what i called myself. The people thought i was just oh so cute. the fools. Who would think a kid, who is dressed up like a cardboard garbage can, is cute on Halloween? Unless the people thought i was dressed as Oscar the Grouch from Sesame Street or something. Anyways, i was just walking on the sidewalk to Carsons' house. The cold wind was blowing straight in my face so it was a rather unpleasant to walk. I could get frost bite out here! Nah that's too over dramatic.
Just then, i saw a familiar face running up to me. It was Carson. He was wearing his usual black cargo pants, and black Converse One Star brand shoes with white socks from what i could see. Instead of his usual baggy short sleeved shirt he was wearing a long sleeved black one; except his shirt had cuffs on the wrists, while mine did not. With his blonde, blue, and purple hair waving in the breeze Carson said to me "Are you ready to go?" I nodded. "Took you long enough. I am freezing my booty off!" Carson laughed as we walked together back up OaksBurrow street. "Your booty huh? Isn't it called your butt? Or how about the Gluteus Maxi-mus? Ha ha ha!" he laughed at me, as he gave my shoulder a playful punch. I just shook my head and smiled. "No Carson. How about i just call it the thing that i sit on?" i teased back. That just made him laugh even more. sigh, oh well i like his laugh. Its a good hearty laugh. Plus, since he had a little bit of a high voice, that just makes his laugh even funny to listen to.
So me and Carson laughed and joked and just talked about random stuff until we were nearing the entrance to Central Park. then Carson got down to business. "Ok Kate. Me and Kami have been talking things over and we have a bit of a plan." Carson whispered to me . I looked at him, and said "Yeah? well what are you two planning?" It felt weird saying "what are you two planning" because i was still creeped out by the fact that Carson had two sides to him.Carson shoved his hands into his cargo pants pockets. Then he motioned me to stop. I did. Then he continued "Since this Victoria girl seems a bit suspicious, me and Kami thought that we would spy on her. This is her first game of Dark Seek so it shouldn't be so hard to follow her anyways. She doesn't know the Dark Forest territory, and so she'll probably go for the first easy hiding spot she sees. Mostly likely it will be behind a big shrub, bush or tree. Therefore it'll be easy to track her movements, and see what she's up too. After all a girl who flirts like that can mean nothing but trouble." I took this information in for a second. Then i nodded my head and agreed to the plan that Carson proposed.
As we entered Central Park, i noticed that the wind was considerably stronger; and colder for that matter. Oh well, i have been through worse than this. Plus the weather is always weirder at night in Dynito than during the day. The sun had already set anyways, so that's why the temperature dropped i guessed. Just then i noticed Tearoy, Jason, and Ray talking and laughing with Victoria. Tearoy didn't even give me his usual pick me up by the hips and swing me around greeting. Not that i missed it or anything. I was just used to it. Instead, Tearoy just smiled and waved at me and Carson. Once we were in the group, Tearoy said "Alright lets get going to the Dark Forest." "YAY! this is going to be fun! right Handsome?" Victoria squealed. When she said handsome i noticed it was directed not at Tearoy, but at Carson. Carson just blushed a little and rolled his eyes. I tell you, if Victoria lays one finger on Carson, i swear, she will feel my wrath! Kate what are you saying? Your not saying you like him do you? Nope, i am just saying that i am concerned from his safety. yep that's it. And boy i need to stop talking to myself. Any way, the name of the Dark Forest just shuddered through me. I am surprised that i am still even going there. I have been through 2 painful and creepy adventures there, and i for one am not up for a third.
So reluctantly i followed Tearoy, Jason, Ray, and Victoria down the path leading to the Dark Forest with Carson right behind me. We arrived there in no time, and i could see the big fallen tree with the gigantic tunnel size hole in it from last time me and Carson were here.I guess it was the new entrance to the Dark Forest now. And to this day i still don't know how Kami kicked a hole in that size of a tree trunk. That's not humanly possible. "Alright who is going to be it?" Tearoy grinned, as he looked at Victoria. I guess he wanted her to be it. But Ray yipped that he wanted to be It, so it was decided.
I just noticed before i dashed into the Dark Forest, that Victoria was still wearing her tight skinned pink dress. Boy that is just stupid. Didn't Tearoy tell her to wear all black? I guess he forgot to. She'll be a way easy target to find. my thoughts were disturbed once again when Carson tapped me on the shoulder and motioned me with his arm to follow. Oh goody, now the fun of following Miss Flirts A Lot can begin! me and Carson dashed under the big tree tunnel, and we managed to keep on Victoria for a good 40 paces. Then i realized we had to fake like we were going off somewhere so we wouldn't be caught. so i motioned Carson to follow me, and we ran off 30 paces to the right. Afterwards we doubled back on our tracks and we went back to the stop were we once were. "Kate i see her over in those bushes." Carson whispered while pointing. I looked over to where he was pointing, and saw he was right. it was her pink dress that gave it away. Even in the dark she was still noticeable. Boy that is one neon pink dress!
Quickly i dove onto my belly and made myself into an army crawl position. I saw in my side vision that Carson jumped up onto a low pine tree branch noiselessly. Then he jumped kicked from the pine tree in front of him, and back onto the tree he was just on. He did that till i could see he was on the branch right above Victoria. Good. He could get a birds eye view of her. Suddenly i heard Ray yell "120! Here i come guys!" Hopefully Victoria knows that in Dark Seek the it player counts to 120 before they come to find you. right now i gotta camouflage.
Crawling deeper into the bushes in front of me, i managed to crawl through them until i was a few feet away from Victoria. I could see her perfectly. She was messing with her nails. CRUNCH CRUNCH CRUNCH! Well there goes Ray bounding off into the Dark Forest behind me. The moron forgot to move silently so the players won't be able to hear him coming toward them. but it sounded like he was moving away from me, Carson, and Victoria. He's probably going off to find Tearoy or Jason first. then he'll probably rebound and come back over here.
Turning my attention back to Victoria i noticed that she wasn't just playing with her nails, she was also playing with something else. And that something was a cell phone. I could see the screen light glowing in the darkness. It was a weird looking cell screen though. It had a red circle symbol in the middle of it, and she was texting words in black dots? Wait a second, it must be Morse code or something. But why was she texting in Morse code? And to who? There was no name in the send to box. I looked up toward the branch Carson was in. I could see that he was just as puzzled as i was. Suddenly she stopped. Then she blinded me with her cell phone light and said "Oh hi Kate! I didn't know that you were here!"
Crap. why do i always get caught when i try to spy? That just proves the point that i am the most easiest person to find i guess. "Hi Victoria. I didn't know you were hiding here either." i smiled back, as i crawled next to her. I sat up straight and looked her in the eyes. "Oh please Kate i already know that you and handsome boy up there followed me. I heard you guys fake going off somewhere, and then double back on your tracks. the fallen leaves provide such a good security system don't they?" "Um, sure Victoria. Sorry then. Well i guess i'll have to find a new hiding place eh?" i suggested, as i prepared to crawl away. But i guess Victoria had other plans.
First of all, she shook the tree that Carson was in. Carson fell down with a BAM! "YEOW! oh uh, hi Victoria, fancy meeting you here?" Carson grinned, as he rubbed the back of his neck. Victoria looked really annoyed though. "Look you two. I don't need you guys to follow me. I am not a weirdo! Geez. Your just like all the other kids. always thinking i am suspicious!" she was about to continue yelling more, when she stopped. I could see she had spotted Carsons Thousand Triangle necklace. The fall had caused the necklace to pop out from underneath Carsons shirt collar. He usually kept it in there so no one would look at it, or try to take it. Plus, he said it felt "safer and lighter" in there. I couldn't see how it could be lighter, it was a medium sized pure gold triangle with a blue triangle outlining the inside of it. It shone for a second in the moonlight.
Victoria scooted up to Carson, and pressed her nose against his again. " So YOUR the one eh?" she growled. Carson gave me a confused look for a second as. she proceeded to reach at the Thousand Triangle. She held the ancient looking amulet in her hand and inspected it; she then smiled evilly for a second. She was just about to pull something out of her pink purse (why did she even bring a purse anyways? We're in a forest!) when a voice hollered "AH HA! I found all 3 of you!"
That voice was Ray. He pulled aside the giant bushes we were behind, and slapped me on the back. "YES! i finally completed a round of Dark Seek! WOOOOOOO!" i looked over back at Victoria. She growled at Carson "I'll deal with you later." Carson still looked confused as Victoria greeted ray "Aw man! you found us! we were having a little camp out darling!" Ok, those little acts made me even more suspicious of her. what did she want with Carson? Then Tearoy yelled "Time for round 2 of Dark Seek! Back to the entrance! let's decide who will be It this time!" "Wait for me handsome!" Victoria smiled, running off to catch up with the giant.
Ray and Jason followed. I just stood there mystified at the way Victoria behaved toward Carson. I heard him walk over and stand next to me. Looking at him i could see he just as confused as i was. "What is with her?" he asked me. "I don't know Carson. I don't know." was all i had to say at that moment. I guess we'll have to find out in the next round of Dark Seek i guess. But Carson was right. What was the deal with Victoria?
part 4 is next. How was this part? If you have any questions or issues fell free to tell me. Sorry about punctuation or spelling/grammar errors.