Forum: empire-en

Board: [586] Off Topic

Topic: [75237] The Goodgame Empire

[1365840] doglider [None] :: July 14, 2012, 3:34 p.m.

I think you (like me, since I'm not that much older than you and like writing even if I don't do it too much) could become a quite good author, but I think that this story is a little......too close to the game. Like for example, I've read a couple books about a game I like, and it uses the sort of thing in the game, but it makes it much more realistic. Like for example instead of showing the level requirement mechanic, you could say that the castle is not prepare to support a settlement so far away and in such conditions, which is a very realistic problem.

[1366475] Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1] :: July 17, 2012, 5:55 a.m.

Thanks doglider, and, sorry guys, but I will not be continuing this story. But do not despair! I shall make another story that I will post the name of on this thread.

[1366480] WisePrakhar [None] :: July 17, 2012, 8:06 a.m.

why not continuing? it was awesome

[1366495] Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1] :: July 17, 2012, 12:09 p.m.

I just don't have the . . . feel you need, like the motivation. But the next one will be more modern, in our day, or in the future.

[1366514] King Fear ME [None] :: July 17, 2012, 3:38 p.m.

ha ha i know how you feel cyclone. I get unmotivated myself when i write. But i tell you, compliments your story than negative talk on your story makes the writer feel a lot better about writing it. So compliments are the greatest pick me uppers. That is a lesson for the day, says KING FEAR ME!!!!!!!!!!

[1366517] King Avalon 2 [None] :: July 17, 2012, 4:01 p.m.

I blame the people who were negative on this thread. Hope ur next stories r as good as this one was!!!

[1366693] WisePrakhar [None] :: July 18, 2012, 9:01 a.m.

Agreed avaton. He is just 10 guys. He is not matureed. He need some encouragement. Also if you say this bad than show me something better than this you wrote.

[1366786] King Avalon 2 [None] :: July 18, 2012, 7:56 p.m.

I liked these stories! What is ur next story thread going to be called Cyclone?

[1366787] EthanHayes [None] :: July 18, 2012, 8:16 p.m.

This is great. Keep writing. For your age, You are AMAZING!!!

[1366788] King Avalon 2 [None] :: July 18, 2012, 8:22 p.m.

I know he is right? hehe

[1366792] huzaifa memon (INT1) [None] :: July 18, 2012, 9:16 p.m.

Damn the story is awsome! its almost as good as King DOOOOOOM!

[1366801] King Avalon 2 [None] :: July 18, 2012, 9:44 p.m.

I would say it is better than King Doooooom's

[1366814] ThornPrickley [None] :: July 18, 2012, 11:46 p.m.

Hey, this is awesome! You, my friend have the best potential of an author! There are some pretty good stories out there, most of them unfinished, because the amature authors didn't bother to finish them. I will spread the word of this story! Keep up the good work!

[1366847] Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1] :: July 19, 2012, 6:33 a.m.

Hmm . . . Weird comment.

[1366855] WisePrakhar [None] :: July 19, 2012, 8:19 a.m.

is city escape started????

[1367008] Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1] :: July 20, 2012, 6:31 a.m.

No, sorry, delayed.

[1367020] WisePrakhar [None] :: July 20, 2012, 8:21 a.m.

okk. hey cyclone can you send me a private message stating your link of your new story?

[1367039] Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1] :: July 20, 2012, 10:48 a.m.

Yes, WisePrakhar. By the way, I've changed the name to THIS STORY IS NOW DELETD, SO DON'T BOTHER READING IT
!.

[1367121] King Avalon 2 [None] :: July 20, 2012, 8:56 p.m.

Send me a link to please!

[1367139] Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1] :: July 20, 2012, 9:42 p.m.

Okay, I am starting later today.