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Topic: [75791] Revenge, the Madness Continues........
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 10, 2012, 11:59 p.m.
King Doom back with another story, the 4th installment of Revenge. time to begin shall we?
Part 1........ We meet a kid shorter than Carson.
Snow was falling this way and that way out of the sky. A ice cold wind was blowing to the north, and streetlights were on. Winter had officially hit Dynito City, and everything was freezing butt cold. There was a blizzard warning issues on all country, and it was supposed to last from 7:00pm, to 1:00am; and it would bring lots of snow with it. But that didn't stop a couple of school teachers, who were really trying to rehearse their kids for the upcoming Christmas Play.........
"Why do i have to be Rudolph?! I hate the glowing red nose reindeer!" Carson complained, itching himself in his costume. "Oh come on Carson, you look swell in that, um, furry fluffy costume of yours." Tearoy smiled, patting Carson on his head. "Yeah man, it's not that bad. You can blind people with that nose!" Jason chipped in. Ray just nodded affectionately at Carson. Or course, his part was no better in the play, he was Vixen the reindeer. Tearoy was the lucky punk, playing the part of jolly old Santa Claus. Jason was a elf, no big deal about that. Though he is the tallest elf in the bunch. And who do you think was the most humiliated in this play? Me. Kate Mc FlowerTooter. I was playing the part of Mrs. Claus, and honestly, I didn't like it one bit. That means I was Tearoys wife! BLEAH BLAK! GAK! and PATOWWIE! Oh hello, i didn't see you there did I? Well it's true! I hate this part in the stupid play.
But nooooo, Mr. Vine said that I had to play the part since no other girl in the 11th grade would take it. And I could see why they didn't. Being dressed in a fat red dress wioth a green apron, with pillows stuffed on you belly to make yourself look fatter; wearing a itchy white wig and annoying round glasses, and wearing uncomfortable 2 sizes too small red high heals isn't exactly enjoyable. "Oh Carson you look fine in that costume. But me? Well I look like a fat old lady!" I growled, tugging at the fat red dress. They busted out laughing. Tearoy stoked his white beard and playfuly said "but my darling Mrs. Claus, you look lovely!" But he barely managed to choke it out before he laughed again. Carson mumbles "Rudolph is still a dork though." The stage lights dimmed. "All right kids, it's time to rehearse!" Mr. Vine called from backstage.
Great. Time for rehearsal for the billionth time this week. Frankly I was quite tired of it. Saying lines over and over that you memorized is just dull. So i'll skip the rehearsal until we get to the part of the story when the play gets............ well better not tell you that right now. So we rehearsed, and afterwards Carson was really glad to be out of that itchy reindeer costume. Ray was just as happy. We were all a very close knit group of friends, so we always walked home together. Tearoy always lead the way. Outside was much colder and windy and it was snowing than it was inside the school building. It was 8:30 at night, been rehearsing since 6:00 on a school day and I really wanted to get home. I kicked at the snow on the ground. There was supposed to be a blizzard coming very soon. The meteorologists changed the time of it's arrival, it's supposed to arrive at 9:00. Which was in 30 minutes.
"Dang i'm freezing my butt of here!" Jason grumbled, pulling the hood of his jacket tighter around his head. "Yeah no kiddin? Looks like we picked a bad day to walk home." Tearoy agreed. Carson shrugged his shoulders and shivered a bit. He tucked something under his jacket so that it wouldn't get frozen. Jason, Ray and Tearoy didn't notice what he tucked under his jacket, or even what it was for that matter. But I knew what it was. It was Carson's Thousand Triangle. It held the mysterious and frankly quite powerful in my opinion, spirit called Kami. He knew nothing of his past, what his name was, or who he was for that matter. All he knew was that he was stuck in some sort of item, and he shared a body with his look alike Carson. I could barely tell those two apart sometimes. You see, Carson is a short kid (about 4'' 9') with shaggy blond, blue, and purple hair and purple eyes.
Kami is similar, only he's about 5'' '7' ish i think, has the same shaggy hair but with a green stripe running down through his bangs, and he had fierce, determined, sparking blue eyes. His voice was also a lot deeper than Carson, more brave sounding. Carson's voice was light and a little high but not chipmunk high. I could barely tell the difference in some situations, especially when they have their backs turned toward me. "Kate pay attention to the sidewalk or else your going to end up falling into that cold water puddle." Tearoy suddenly said, scooping me up with his bag arms and setting me down firmly in the middle of the sidewalk. "Oh uh, right. Thanks Tea. I guess I wasn't paying attention." I smiled, showing my white teeth. He just laughed and kept walking. Sheesh, I hate being surrounded by a group of friends that are all male. I wish i had a female friend. But that didn't work out so well last time.
Last fall a week before Halloween, we ran into this girl named Victoria. Kami saved ehr from a big bully, then she wanted to hang out with us. But she ended up betraying, kidnapping Carson, and sending us on a wild goose chase to the Dark Hills. We had to go into a cave that was cursed, and save Carson, and get out of there before sunrise or else we would drown. I hated the curse part of that whole adventure( Kami ended up getting a whole wardrobe change, vampire like fangs, and werewolf looking ears and tail), and the Dark Swamp, and Victoria's secret powers (which i'm not even going to mention). She was the 1st member of Leon Neon's gang. Anyways, enough of story time! Back to business. We were all walking, cold and miserable until we came to a familiar intersection. It was the intersection of Ruth and Oaksburrow. I lived on Ruth Street, and the boys always dropped me off first.
My house was also facing towards the Tye Mountains and a now frozen lake. As we walked down my street towards my pink house. When suddenly I heard a voice pleading "HELP! SOMEONE HELP ME!" Turning around to the guys I said "Did you hear that?" "I sure did Kate!" Tearoy agreed "It was coming from that lake up there in front of your house! Come on!" Sprinting into a full run we raced across the frozen street towards the lake that was facing my house (it was about 60 paces away). Looking across the ice water, I could see, someone had fallen in the ice! "HELP!" he screamed "HELP I CAN'T SWIM!" He was really struggling far off in the lake, and well I wasn't taking the chance of falling in. "What are we going to do, hey Carson! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" Tearoy began when suddenly Carson (the idiot) jumped over the frozen cattails and onto the icy lake!
"CARSON!" I yelled, but it was too late. He was way too far out on the ice. what was he doing?! Skating on the ice, Carson slid over to the drowning kid. I could hear the ice creaking beneath him from here. He better not fall in! The next scene was a blur, there was frantic splashing from the kid, and Carson bent over to pull him out of the water. When BLAM! The ice suddenly gave way under him, and SPLASH! Water spray went up everywhere as he fell in! "OH MY GOD!" Ray yelled. "HE FELL IN!" Jason screamed. minutes dragged by as me and the others starred out onto the ice. Then the next moment, water again went up everywhere as Carson surface with the kid in his arms. We breathed a sigh of relief. Carson slid the kid onto the ice and started to pull himself out of the water. Carefully pulling himself up, Carson climbed back onto the fragile ice. He then scooped up the kid again and walked back (As though nothing had happened) across the ice and back to us.
"YOU MORON! You could have gotten yourself killed!" I yelled at him while Tearoy, Ray, and Jason tended to the little kid who Carson rescued. "Funny thing to say Kate. He would have been dead if I didn't go out there." He answered back in a deep, determined voice. Wait a sec....... Carson brushed his wet bangs backwards to reveal piercing, but soft, blue eyes. It was Kami! Not Carson! Gosh dang it! I should have known Carson wouldn't do anything that stupid. Hey, he did have his back turned toward me. Kami smiled at me, and I just hit him on the arm. "Your still a moron!" But then we turned our attention back to the kid Kami said. But judging my the look of him, he was only 3 foot 4, way shorter than Carson! Who was this kid anyways?
part 2 coming up next. Hows this so far? I'm also going to try to write another story at the same time as this. But how's it so far? KING DOOOOOOOOOM!
Part 1........ We meet a kid shorter than Carson.
Snow was falling this way and that way out of the sky. A ice cold wind was blowing to the north, and streetlights were on. Winter had officially hit Dynito City, and everything was freezing butt cold. There was a blizzard warning issues on all country, and it was supposed to last from 7:00pm, to 1:00am; and it would bring lots of snow with it. But that didn't stop a couple of school teachers, who were really trying to rehearse their kids for the upcoming Christmas Play.........
"Why do i have to be Rudolph?! I hate the glowing red nose reindeer!" Carson complained, itching himself in his costume. "Oh come on Carson, you look swell in that, um, furry fluffy costume of yours." Tearoy smiled, patting Carson on his head. "Yeah man, it's not that bad. You can blind people with that nose!" Jason chipped in. Ray just nodded affectionately at Carson. Or course, his part was no better in the play, he was Vixen the reindeer. Tearoy was the lucky punk, playing the part of jolly old Santa Claus. Jason was a elf, no big deal about that. Though he is the tallest elf in the bunch. And who do you think was the most humiliated in this play? Me. Kate Mc FlowerTooter. I was playing the part of Mrs. Claus, and honestly, I didn't like it one bit. That means I was Tearoys wife! BLEAH BLAK! GAK! and PATOWWIE! Oh hello, i didn't see you there did I? Well it's true! I hate this part in the stupid play.
But nooooo, Mr. Vine said that I had to play the part since no other girl in the 11th grade would take it. And I could see why they didn't. Being dressed in a fat red dress wioth a green apron, with pillows stuffed on you belly to make yourself look fatter; wearing a itchy white wig and annoying round glasses, and wearing uncomfortable 2 sizes too small red high heals isn't exactly enjoyable. "Oh Carson you look fine in that costume. But me? Well I look like a fat old lady!" I growled, tugging at the fat red dress. They busted out laughing. Tearoy stoked his white beard and playfuly said "but my darling Mrs. Claus, you look lovely!" But he barely managed to choke it out before he laughed again. Carson mumbles "Rudolph is still a dork though." The stage lights dimmed. "All right kids, it's time to rehearse!" Mr. Vine called from backstage.
Great. Time for rehearsal for the billionth time this week. Frankly I was quite tired of it. Saying lines over and over that you memorized is just dull. So i'll skip the rehearsal until we get to the part of the story when the play gets............ well better not tell you that right now. So we rehearsed, and afterwards Carson was really glad to be out of that itchy reindeer costume. Ray was just as happy. We were all a very close knit group of friends, so we always walked home together. Tearoy always lead the way. Outside was much colder and windy and it was snowing than it was inside the school building. It was 8:30 at night, been rehearsing since 6:00 on a school day and I really wanted to get home. I kicked at the snow on the ground. There was supposed to be a blizzard coming very soon. The meteorologists changed the time of it's arrival, it's supposed to arrive at 9:00. Which was in 30 minutes.
"Dang i'm freezing my butt of here!" Jason grumbled, pulling the hood of his jacket tighter around his head. "Yeah no kiddin? Looks like we picked a bad day to walk home." Tearoy agreed. Carson shrugged his shoulders and shivered a bit. He tucked something under his jacket so that it wouldn't get frozen. Jason, Ray and Tearoy didn't notice what he tucked under his jacket, or even what it was for that matter. But I knew what it was. It was Carson's Thousand Triangle. It held the mysterious and frankly quite powerful in my opinion, spirit called Kami. He knew nothing of his past, what his name was, or who he was for that matter. All he knew was that he was stuck in some sort of item, and he shared a body with his look alike Carson. I could barely tell those two apart sometimes. You see, Carson is a short kid (about 4'' 9') with shaggy blond, blue, and purple hair and purple eyes.
Kami is similar, only he's about 5'' '7' ish i think, has the same shaggy hair but with a green stripe running down through his bangs, and he had fierce, determined, sparking blue eyes. His voice was also a lot deeper than Carson, more brave sounding. Carson's voice was light and a little high but not chipmunk high. I could barely tell the difference in some situations, especially when they have their backs turned toward me. "Kate pay attention to the sidewalk or else your going to end up falling into that cold water puddle." Tearoy suddenly said, scooping me up with his bag arms and setting me down firmly in the middle of the sidewalk. "Oh uh, right. Thanks Tea. I guess I wasn't paying attention." I smiled, showing my white teeth. He just laughed and kept walking. Sheesh, I hate being surrounded by a group of friends that are all male. I wish i had a female friend. But that didn't work out so well last time.
Last fall a week before Halloween, we ran into this girl named Victoria. Kami saved ehr from a big bully, then she wanted to hang out with us. But she ended up betraying, kidnapping Carson, and sending us on a wild goose chase to the Dark Hills. We had to go into a cave that was cursed, and save Carson, and get out of there before sunrise or else we would drown. I hated the curse part of that whole adventure( Kami ended up getting a whole wardrobe change, vampire like fangs, and werewolf looking ears and tail), and the Dark Swamp, and Victoria's secret powers (which i'm not even going to mention). She was the 1st member of Leon Neon's gang. Anyways, enough of story time! Back to business. We were all walking, cold and miserable until we came to a familiar intersection. It was the intersection of Ruth and Oaksburrow. I lived on Ruth Street, and the boys always dropped me off first.
My house was also facing towards the Tye Mountains and a now frozen lake. As we walked down my street towards my pink house. When suddenly I heard a voice pleading "HELP! SOMEONE HELP ME!" Turning around to the guys I said "Did you hear that?" "I sure did Kate!" Tearoy agreed "It was coming from that lake up there in front of your house! Come on!" Sprinting into a full run we raced across the frozen street towards the lake that was facing my house (it was about 60 paces away). Looking across the ice water, I could see, someone had fallen in the ice! "HELP!" he screamed "HELP I CAN'T SWIM!" He was really struggling far off in the lake, and well I wasn't taking the chance of falling in. "What are we going to do, hey Carson! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" Tearoy began when suddenly Carson (the idiot) jumped over the frozen cattails and onto the icy lake!
"CARSON!" I yelled, but it was too late. He was way too far out on the ice. what was he doing?! Skating on the ice, Carson slid over to the drowning kid. I could hear the ice creaking beneath him from here. He better not fall in! The next scene was a blur, there was frantic splashing from the kid, and Carson bent over to pull him out of the water. When BLAM! The ice suddenly gave way under him, and SPLASH! Water spray went up everywhere as he fell in! "OH MY GOD!" Ray yelled. "HE FELL IN!" Jason screamed. minutes dragged by as me and the others starred out onto the ice. Then the next moment, water again went up everywhere as Carson surface with the kid in his arms. We breathed a sigh of relief. Carson slid the kid onto the ice and started to pull himself out of the water. Carefully pulling himself up, Carson climbed back onto the fragile ice. He then scooped up the kid again and walked back (As though nothing had happened) across the ice and back to us.
"YOU MORON! You could have gotten yourself killed!" I yelled at him while Tearoy, Ray, and Jason tended to the little kid who Carson rescued. "Funny thing to say Kate. He would have been dead if I didn't go out there." He answered back in a deep, determined voice. Wait a sec....... Carson brushed his wet bangs backwards to reveal piercing, but soft, blue eyes. It was Kami! Not Carson! Gosh dang it! I should have known Carson wouldn't do anything that stupid. Hey, he did have his back turned toward me. Kami smiled at me, and I just hit him on the arm. "Your still a moron!" But then we turned our attention back to the kid Kami said. But judging my the look of him, he was only 3 foot 4, way shorter than Carson! Who was this kid anyways?
part 2 coming up next. Hows this so far? I'm also going to try to write another story at the same time as this. But how's it so far? KING DOOOOOOOOOM!
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Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1]
:: Aug. 11, 2012, 2:01 a.m.
ABSOLOUTLEY AWESOME! MORE REVENGE! I DEFINETLY look forward to seeing part 2 . . . Person shorter than Carson! HA! I'm only around 5 foot myself . . .
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 11, 2012, 10:53 p.m.
HA really? I didn't know that. Now then, Part 2................. Onward through the snow to play Snow Seek.
We were all bustling in front of the little kid, worried. he was shivering violently, had no jacket on, and he was just dressed all wrong! Wearing a tank top, shorts, and sandals aren't really the choice for clothing out here in the winter time. Never mind Kami being nuts for going onto the lake and almost drowning himself; this kid is nuts for being dressed the way he is! "What are you doing out in the middle of a frozen lake at this time of night anyways kid? Shouldn't you be home or something?" I asked him straight up, and hoping for a straight answer. But the kid just shrugged and said "I lost my way, and i thought taking a short cut across that lake would get me home faster." "Do you live around here?" Tearoy inquired, as he continued to rub the kids arms to try to get him warmed. "Uh yes. I live on Kings Street. It's about 7 blocks or so from here. I'm the new kid at Dynito High school. the names Jake Williams." he explained further, but not looking any of us in the eye. Wait a sec, did he say he was in high school? And he's the new kid? Wow, and people always made fun of Carson for being the short in school. But this guy? Well let's just say that the kids are going to give Jake a harder time than Carson.
Kami nodded in thought, his blue eyes dimmed a bit. Then he took off his wet jacket, and wrapped it around the shivering boy. "Here. This'll keep you kind of warm till you get back to your house." Kami smiled, shaking his wet multicolored hair out a bit. "Thanks. I'll give it back to you tomorrow!" Jake smiled. The jacket was woah way big on him, and he looked like a toddler wearing it. But Jake just smiled, thanked Kami for rescuing him, thanked all of us for being kind, and he ran off on his way. Weird. We walked over back across the street to my house. "You sure you'll be ok Kami? I can give you my jacket so you won't get hypothermia or something." I offered as I walked up the porch steps. "Oh Kate I'll be fine." he insured me, though i could tell he was dreadfully cold. It didn't help that the snow was falling down harder either. Humph. Stubborn males. Taking off my jacket, I handed it to him anyways. "Put it on." "Kate I'm," "PUT IT ON OR I'LL CLOBBER YOU!" i growled, making my hand into a fist. Flinching and giving me an amused look, Kami put on my jacket. "Thanks" "Welcome." Tearoy just laughed and smiled at me. "See you tomorrow Kate. Remember that we're going to play Snow Seek tomorrow as well." he winked as he ran off with Kami, Jason, and Ray. I however, just nodded and opened the door to my house. and walked inside. Blasted cold. I hate winter with a passion, but the snow falling is just beautiful.
Parents weren't home, as usual. the house was dark, they left not lights on for me, as usual. My calico cat, Spot was sleeping on the couch, as usual. Nothing new here. Going into the kitchen and microwaving myself some Beeforoni, i had a quick dinner then i went upstairs to bed. The furnace was on, so that was good. Sleeping in a cold house is very uncomfortable in the winter. Ah well, it's time to sleep. The next morning, after the alarm clock went off, I hopped out of bed and got dressed. Today I was wearing a stripped shirt, blue jeans, and some white socks. Walking down the stairs, I made myself the usual breakfast of Waffles. I love waffles! After I ate, I put on my shoes and my jacket to get ready to walk to school. After I placed my backpack on my back, I went over to the door and pushed it open. But for some reason, it wouldn't open! Pushing harder against the door, I tried to open it again but it wouldn't budge! What in the world? Looking out the window I could see what my problem was. There was snow, lots of it! It was piled up to the windowsill! That meant that it had to be about 5 feet deep because that's how high the front windowsill was.
Hmmmm. I turned on the TV to tune into the weather. "Well this is a very snowy and cold weather Dynito has been having early this December. And what makes matter worse is, the snow looks like it's not going to stop anytime soon. Weather forecasts predict 9 to 12 more inches of snow to fall in Dynito this afternoon. Schools have been ordered to shut down until further notice. More updates will continue, right after these messages." YES! NO SCHOOL! WOOOO! I slammed down my backpack and raced to get my snowpants and snow gear. I wanted to go tell the others, maybe we could play Snow Seek earlier today! After I was dressed in my light blue snow pants, matching jacket, gloves, hat, scarf, and boots I opened the window to take off the screen. Since I couldn't get out the door I would have to climb out the window. And that's exactly what I did. It was still snowing outside, and blistering cold, but dressed in my snow gear I was nice and warm.
First I would stop at Carson's house to see how he was doing. But I didn't need to. He was coming to me! The little guy was dressed in his dark green snow pants, black jacket, dark blue scarf, grey hat, and black boots. "KATE! NO SCHOOL! Isn't that great?" He hollered as he stumbled through the snow up to me. "Yeah! You think Tearoy, Ray, and Jason know?" "Probably. Let's go see!" It took us about an hour to walk through the high piled snow to Tearoys house on Ginger Drive. The streets and intersections weren't shoveled out yet because the plows, obliviously, couldn't get through. We found Tearoy dressed in all black gear, shoveling out his house. We told him about the no school bit, and well he slammed down the shovel and went inside his house to ask his mom if he could go play with us. He got permission, then we all went to Rays, the Jason's house to get them to go play Snow Seek with us in the Dark Forest. The only problem when we arrived at Jason's house was that he had Jake, the little mini kid, with him.
"Hey guys! Jake wanted to know if he can hang out with us?" Jason yelled, as he came up to join us. "Um, Sure. I guess." Tearoy shrugged though he seemed uneasy. And i agreed with him. The last time some one hanged out with us,( Victoria) she betrayed and ended up making our lives a living heck. But what harm could this little guy do? He was shorter than Carson so he shouldn't be a threat. Or could he? Nahhhh. "Sure why not?" I said "Now let's go before we all get cold." Our group of now 6 members went trekking through the white white snow towards the Dark Forest. Where we would play Snow Seek. And i'm really interested in how little Jake will do. "OH by the way," Jake suddenly mentioned as we were walking, "If you guys don't mind there's a good friend of mine who likes to play. Be warned though he has a bit of a temper." OH sure why not? The more the merrier I guess. Besides, how bad of a temper could Jake's friend have? I bet he's another shorty. Maybe shorter than Jake himself.
this part was a little slow explaining and getting towards the plot line, but part 3 will be coming up later. How was this? It might have been a little short too sorry. I've been writing for an hour. Anyhow, how was it?
We were all bustling in front of the little kid, worried. he was shivering violently, had no jacket on, and he was just dressed all wrong! Wearing a tank top, shorts, and sandals aren't really the choice for clothing out here in the winter time. Never mind Kami being nuts for going onto the lake and almost drowning himself; this kid is nuts for being dressed the way he is! "What are you doing out in the middle of a frozen lake at this time of night anyways kid? Shouldn't you be home or something?" I asked him straight up, and hoping for a straight answer. But the kid just shrugged and said "I lost my way, and i thought taking a short cut across that lake would get me home faster." "Do you live around here?" Tearoy inquired, as he continued to rub the kids arms to try to get him warmed. "Uh yes. I live on Kings Street. It's about 7 blocks or so from here. I'm the new kid at Dynito High school. the names Jake Williams." he explained further, but not looking any of us in the eye. Wait a sec, did he say he was in high school? And he's the new kid? Wow, and people always made fun of Carson for being the short in school. But this guy? Well let's just say that the kids are going to give Jake a harder time than Carson.
Kami nodded in thought, his blue eyes dimmed a bit. Then he took off his wet jacket, and wrapped it around the shivering boy. "Here. This'll keep you kind of warm till you get back to your house." Kami smiled, shaking his wet multicolored hair out a bit. "Thanks. I'll give it back to you tomorrow!" Jake smiled. The jacket was woah way big on him, and he looked like a toddler wearing it. But Jake just smiled, thanked Kami for rescuing him, thanked all of us for being kind, and he ran off on his way. Weird. We walked over back across the street to my house. "You sure you'll be ok Kami? I can give you my jacket so you won't get hypothermia or something." I offered as I walked up the porch steps. "Oh Kate I'll be fine." he insured me, though i could tell he was dreadfully cold. It didn't help that the snow was falling down harder either. Humph. Stubborn males. Taking off my jacket, I handed it to him anyways. "Put it on." "Kate I'm," "PUT IT ON OR I'LL CLOBBER YOU!" i growled, making my hand into a fist. Flinching and giving me an amused look, Kami put on my jacket. "Thanks" "Welcome." Tearoy just laughed and smiled at me. "See you tomorrow Kate. Remember that we're going to play Snow Seek tomorrow as well." he winked as he ran off with Kami, Jason, and Ray. I however, just nodded and opened the door to my house. and walked inside. Blasted cold. I hate winter with a passion, but the snow falling is just beautiful.
Parents weren't home, as usual. the house was dark, they left not lights on for me, as usual. My calico cat, Spot was sleeping on the couch, as usual. Nothing new here. Going into the kitchen and microwaving myself some Beeforoni, i had a quick dinner then i went upstairs to bed. The furnace was on, so that was good. Sleeping in a cold house is very uncomfortable in the winter. Ah well, it's time to sleep. The next morning, after the alarm clock went off, I hopped out of bed and got dressed. Today I was wearing a stripped shirt, blue jeans, and some white socks. Walking down the stairs, I made myself the usual breakfast of Waffles. I love waffles! After I ate, I put on my shoes and my jacket to get ready to walk to school. After I placed my backpack on my back, I went over to the door and pushed it open. But for some reason, it wouldn't open! Pushing harder against the door, I tried to open it again but it wouldn't budge! What in the world? Looking out the window I could see what my problem was. There was snow, lots of it! It was piled up to the windowsill! That meant that it had to be about 5 feet deep because that's how high the front windowsill was.
Hmmmm. I turned on the TV to tune into the weather. "Well this is a very snowy and cold weather Dynito has been having early this December. And what makes matter worse is, the snow looks like it's not going to stop anytime soon. Weather forecasts predict 9 to 12 more inches of snow to fall in Dynito this afternoon. Schools have been ordered to shut down until further notice. More updates will continue, right after these messages." YES! NO SCHOOL! WOOOO! I slammed down my backpack and raced to get my snowpants and snow gear. I wanted to go tell the others, maybe we could play Snow Seek earlier today! After I was dressed in my light blue snow pants, matching jacket, gloves, hat, scarf, and boots I opened the window to take off the screen. Since I couldn't get out the door I would have to climb out the window. And that's exactly what I did. It was still snowing outside, and blistering cold, but dressed in my snow gear I was nice and warm.
First I would stop at Carson's house to see how he was doing. But I didn't need to. He was coming to me! The little guy was dressed in his dark green snow pants, black jacket, dark blue scarf, grey hat, and black boots. "KATE! NO SCHOOL! Isn't that great?" He hollered as he stumbled through the snow up to me. "Yeah! You think Tearoy, Ray, and Jason know?" "Probably. Let's go see!" It took us about an hour to walk through the high piled snow to Tearoys house on Ginger Drive. The streets and intersections weren't shoveled out yet because the plows, obliviously, couldn't get through. We found Tearoy dressed in all black gear, shoveling out his house. We told him about the no school bit, and well he slammed down the shovel and went inside his house to ask his mom if he could go play with us. He got permission, then we all went to Rays, the Jason's house to get them to go play Snow Seek with us in the Dark Forest. The only problem when we arrived at Jason's house was that he had Jake, the little mini kid, with him.
"Hey guys! Jake wanted to know if he can hang out with us?" Jason yelled, as he came up to join us. "Um, Sure. I guess." Tearoy shrugged though he seemed uneasy. And i agreed with him. The last time some one hanged out with us,( Victoria) she betrayed and ended up making our lives a living heck. But what harm could this little guy do? He was shorter than Carson so he shouldn't be a threat. Or could he? Nahhhh. "Sure why not?" I said "Now let's go before we all get cold." Our group of now 6 members went trekking through the white white snow towards the Dark Forest. Where we would play Snow Seek. And i'm really interested in how little Jake will do. "OH by the way," Jake suddenly mentioned as we were walking, "If you guys don't mind there's a good friend of mine who likes to play. Be warned though he has a bit of a temper." OH sure why not? The more the merrier I guess. Besides, how bad of a temper could Jake's friend have? I bet he's another shorty. Maybe shorter than Jake himself.
this part was a little slow explaining and getting towards the plot line, but part 3 will be coming up later. How was this? It might have been a little short too sorry. I've been writing for an hour. Anyhow, how was it?
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Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1]
:: Aug. 12, 2012, 3:58 a.m.
IT'S NOT SHORT! Compared to my story, it is LONG! GREAT SORY!!!!! And what height do you expect a 10 year old to be?
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huzaifa memon (INT1) [None]
:: Aug. 12, 2012, 6:28 a.m.
ITS AWSOME!!!! i totaly love it!!! this is by far the best story ever!!!!
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Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1]
:: Aug. 12, 2012, 6:29 a.m.
Agreed. I HATE WORD LIMITS!
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 12, 2012, 4:08 p.m.
Thanks 
part 3 will be coming later on today or so.
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king matt III [None]
:: Aug. 13, 2012, 8:41 a.m.
make it stop! i feel my eyes ripping our of thier sockets from reading so much. King domm i love the story, its incredible and incredibly long. after the madness continues i suggest switching to another story for a few months until people (like me who just started with the stories here) can catch up.
just a thought!
just a thought!
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doglider [None]
:: Aug. 13, 2012, 7:40 p.m.
Good story so far. Apparently they did not learn the lesson to be suspicious of random new people that seem to just crop up without any warning and want to join.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 12:14 a.m.
Yeah yeah, Now for part 3 ....................... Snow seek, no big deal. Forced to help a dead guy, BIG DEAL!
Did I say that Jakes friend was shorter than Jake himself? Well I was DEAD wrong! The guy was bigger than Tearoy! And more muscular for that matter. "Hey. Ryan how are you?" Jake told the big bad tall muscular guy. "Good Jake. Wow, you look like you found a healthy group of friends." Ryan answered as he shut the front door of his house. "Well um, nice to meet you Ryan. Want to come with us to play in the Dark Forest?" Tearoy managed to choke out (I bet he was shocked to see a guy that was bigger than him.) "Yeah sure. I have some time." So with that, our group of now 7 players went trekking towards the Dark Forest. Tearoy would explain the rules of Snow Seek there. It took us a long while (about 30 minutes) to walk from Ryans house on Hinder Street, though Central Park, and finally to the Dark Forest.
The trees were now sticks, so you couldn't tell the alive ones from the millions of dead ones. The purplish pine trees still had their needles since they were evergreens (though they were purple). One we stopped on a spot where the snow was shallow, Tearoy began to explain the rules. "Ok new comers, this is a new game I made up called Snow Seek. All you do is play hide and go seek in the Dark Forest here, only there is one slight difference. You have to hide in, on, above, or around the snow. It's different than Dark Seek where you hide in here at night because we can't play that since the temperatures drop below zero. Three people are It this time instead of one because of the restrained visibility. It would take forever for one person to find all the players. We count to 140, instead of 120 so you guys get 20 seconds more to hide. You cannot travel any farther than Dark Marsh all right? Now whose ready to play?"
We all said yes. Ray, Tearoy, and Ryan would be It, while the rest of us would hide. Great. Two giants would hunt us down. I am not looking forward to this. “You guys better hurry up and go hide before we begin counting!” Ray smirked, turning his back towards us along with Tearoy and Ryan. Reluctaltly, I myself turned around and ran into the snow dark Forest. Or at least tried to run. With this deep snow, and heavy snow gear, it’s a pain in the butt to run, jump or climb. That’s why I hide low in the snow instead of up high. Carson had been following me the whole way like always while Jason and Jake went off together. “Well I’m going to dig a hole in the snow and bury myself.” I told Carson, “Why don’t you go hide somewhere else that’s not near me?” Carson nodded but replyed “Yeah Kate I’ll go in a sec. But I wanted to tell you something first.” “Well hurry up and spit it out. I don’t want those 3 to find me right off the bat.” I growled, as I began to dig a hole in the deep snow. Carson bent down and helped me dig my hole while saying “It’s Kami, Kate. I think he’s getting a little restless now a days. He’s tired of not remembering who he is, and where he was from, how he got here and all that. So I was wondering if you wanted to take him out back to the museum later on to do some more digging. He could really use the help.”
I took the information in a little while and dug a little faster before I said “Um, I don’t know how to help the guy. Besides, why would he want me help?” But as always, the male didn’t listen to me and he just said “Great! So it’s settled! How about you two go at 4:00? Yeah that’ll work thanks Kate! And don’t mention a word to him!” “Wait! I didn’t say I was going to help!” I protested, shaking my fist at him. But like that Carson ran off and kicked off a pine tree, sending snow everywhere. He kicked back and forth between the two pine trees until I couldn’t see him anymore. Moron. I didn’t say I was going to help Kami out. Sheesh. I hate males. Anyways, I finished digging my hole in the snow and I jumped down into it. Then I proceeded to burry myself.
Heh, heh, heh. They'll never find me! "FOUND YOU KATE! HA HA HA!" GOSH #$%**!!!@$#%!!! RAWR! "HOW DID YOU FIND ME?!?!?" I roared, popping my head out of the snow. Ray laughed and smiled "i saw the tip of your fuzzy blue poof ball on top of your head sticking up out of the snow. Plus, your just easy to find anyways." Grrrrrrrr. Whatever. All males are the same. Bossy, pushy, stupid, and idiotic! And no it you readers are wondering, i am not a sexist. I just get really frustrated with them sometimes. But one, is different. "All right Ray. Let's just hurry up and find the others." I growled, running off with Ray to find the other people. They were easy to find as expected. Carson was up in the trees, Jason was lying down in the snow trying to camoflage with his all white snow gear, and little Jake was posing as a shrub.
"Onward to the second round!" Tearoy yelled, racing through the snow back to the entrance of the dark Forest. The big tree tunnel was still the entrance to the Dark Forest from when Kami did his "Albastrel Spark" move thing and totally exploded a hole in the huge fallen tree. So we played another round of Snow Seek, then we all went home to warm up. However, I had to meet Carson or Kami whichever one at the museum at 4:00 which is in like 30 minutes. Ah geez, I really don't want to go through with this. I have no idea how to even help the dead guy! But i might as well get it over and done with. Though I can tell you right now, I am not going to like it!!
Part 4 coming up next. It'll probably be later on to night or tomorrow though. I went to an awesome water park today. It was FUN! Though there was this slide that made you feel like you were free falling, that was SCARY!
Did I say that Jakes friend was shorter than Jake himself? Well I was DEAD wrong! The guy was bigger than Tearoy! And more muscular for that matter. "Hey. Ryan how are you?" Jake told the big bad tall muscular guy. "Good Jake. Wow, you look like you found a healthy group of friends." Ryan answered as he shut the front door of his house. "Well um, nice to meet you Ryan. Want to come with us to play in the Dark Forest?" Tearoy managed to choke out (I bet he was shocked to see a guy that was bigger than him.) "Yeah sure. I have some time." So with that, our group of now 7 players went trekking towards the Dark Forest. Tearoy would explain the rules of Snow Seek there. It took us a long while (about 30 minutes) to walk from Ryans house on Hinder Street, though Central Park, and finally to the Dark Forest.
The trees were now sticks, so you couldn't tell the alive ones from the millions of dead ones. The purplish pine trees still had their needles since they were evergreens (though they were purple). One we stopped on a spot where the snow was shallow, Tearoy began to explain the rules. "Ok new comers, this is a new game I made up called Snow Seek. All you do is play hide and go seek in the Dark Forest here, only there is one slight difference. You have to hide in, on, above, or around the snow. It's different than Dark Seek where you hide in here at night because we can't play that since the temperatures drop below zero. Three people are It this time instead of one because of the restrained visibility. It would take forever for one person to find all the players. We count to 140, instead of 120 so you guys get 20 seconds more to hide. You cannot travel any farther than Dark Marsh all right? Now whose ready to play?"
We all said yes. Ray, Tearoy, and Ryan would be It, while the rest of us would hide. Great. Two giants would hunt us down. I am not looking forward to this. “You guys better hurry up and go hide before we begin counting!” Ray smirked, turning his back towards us along with Tearoy and Ryan. Reluctaltly, I myself turned around and ran into the snow dark Forest. Or at least tried to run. With this deep snow, and heavy snow gear, it’s a pain in the butt to run, jump or climb. That’s why I hide low in the snow instead of up high. Carson had been following me the whole way like always while Jason and Jake went off together. “Well I’m going to dig a hole in the snow and bury myself.” I told Carson, “Why don’t you go hide somewhere else that’s not near me?” Carson nodded but replyed “Yeah Kate I’ll go in a sec. But I wanted to tell you something first.” “Well hurry up and spit it out. I don’t want those 3 to find me right off the bat.” I growled, as I began to dig a hole in the deep snow. Carson bent down and helped me dig my hole while saying “It’s Kami, Kate. I think he’s getting a little restless now a days. He’s tired of not remembering who he is, and where he was from, how he got here and all that. So I was wondering if you wanted to take him out back to the museum later on to do some more digging. He could really use the help.”
I took the information in a little while and dug a little faster before I said “Um, I don’t know how to help the guy. Besides, why would he want me help?” But as always, the male didn’t listen to me and he just said “Great! So it’s settled! How about you two go at 4:00? Yeah that’ll work thanks Kate! And don’t mention a word to him!” “Wait! I didn’t say I was going to help!” I protested, shaking my fist at him. But like that Carson ran off and kicked off a pine tree, sending snow everywhere. He kicked back and forth between the two pine trees until I couldn’t see him anymore. Moron. I didn’t say I was going to help Kami out. Sheesh. I hate males. Anyways, I finished digging my hole in the snow and I jumped down into it. Then I proceeded to burry myself.
Heh, heh, heh. They'll never find me! "FOUND YOU KATE! HA HA HA!" GOSH #$%**!!!@$#%!!! RAWR! "HOW DID YOU FIND ME?!?!?" I roared, popping my head out of the snow. Ray laughed and smiled "i saw the tip of your fuzzy blue poof ball on top of your head sticking up out of the snow. Plus, your just easy to find anyways." Grrrrrrrr. Whatever. All males are the same. Bossy, pushy, stupid, and idiotic! And no it you readers are wondering, i am not a sexist. I just get really frustrated with them sometimes. But one, is different. "All right Ray. Let's just hurry up and find the others." I growled, running off with Ray to find the other people. They were easy to find as expected. Carson was up in the trees, Jason was lying down in the snow trying to camoflage with his all white snow gear, and little Jake was posing as a shrub.
"Onward to the second round!" Tearoy yelled, racing through the snow back to the entrance of the dark Forest. The big tree tunnel was still the entrance to the Dark Forest from when Kami did his "Albastrel Spark" move thing and totally exploded a hole in the huge fallen tree. So we played another round of Snow Seek, then we all went home to warm up. However, I had to meet Carson or Kami whichever one at the museum at 4:00 which is in like 30 minutes. Ah geez, I really don't want to go through with this. I have no idea how to even help the dead guy! But i might as well get it over and done with. Though I can tell you right now, I am not going to like it!!
Part 4 coming up next. It'll probably be later on to night or tomorrow though. I went to an awesome water park today. It was FUN! Though there was this slide that made you feel like you were free falling, that was SCARY!
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Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 8:44 a.m.
MYSTERY . . . What happens at the museum? Is Jake and his friend Ryan part of Leon's gang? Will I ever stop asking questions? I can tell you the answer to question three; NEVER.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 10:06 p.m.
Part 4, I learn something about Kami during a battle with Ninjas.
I opened the front door of my pink house and proceeded to walk outside into the wind and snow. It was colder than it was before when we were all playing Snow Seek. It had to be what, 14 degrees or so with a 10 mile an hour wind? So that made the grand temperature, counting wind chill, to be a grand total of 4 degrees. And walking in black jeans, boots, snow hat, gloves, and a heavy winter jacket things were still uncomfortable. At least I wasn’t wearing bulky snow pants. I started to make my way towards the museum. It was a long ways away from here. It was across from the Guns 4 Fun store, which was on Ruth-Way Intersection in downtown Dynito. It was about 5 miles from my house. Sigh. It’s going to be a long walk in weather like this. But I eventually made it to the entrance of the Dynito Museum. The building looks like the white house with grey granite steps. I walked up them and proceeded to wait under the roof which was held up by 6 gleaming white pillars. Or course, they just looked like white sticks with all the snow blowing around.
I was waiting for about 5 minutes when I heard a familiar voice coming up the steps. “ All right you restless spirit, this is the surprise location I was telling you about. Yeah I know you want to stay in there because it’s cold outside, but just try to have a good time ok? All right it’s up to you now.” Then I heard another familiar, but deeper, voice yelling “Huh? Hey wait a minute Carson! What are we doing at the museum?! You’re not in danger or anything! YOU TRICKED ME! COME BACK OUT HERE SO I CAN,” But then he noticed I was staring right at him. Kami blushed and mumbled “Oh. Uh, hey what’s up? Haven’t uh, seen you in a bit uh heh heh.” He was wearing a black jacket, dark green cargo pants, and a headband that went around his ears. I smiled a little to see how flustered he was. Carson sure does a good job of concealing things from people. “Hey Kami what’s up? How about we go inside? It’s cold out here and my butt is freezing!” Nodding his head, he walked up to the door and held it open for me. Then he followed me inside the museum.
Inside the museum, hardly anyone was there. The exhibits were still opened though. The brown and white triangular tile was still all shiny and spectacular, and there were lots of dinosaur skeletons still hanging. But I noticed that they had replaced the pterodactyl and the pterosaur with another skeleton that looked like a giant sized alligator next to the one that looked like a whale. “so what are we doing here Kate? Carson wouldn’t tell me a thing. He just said it’s a surprise Kami!” I turned around and looked at him. “Oh he said he wanted me to help you find out who you are, where you came from and all that bother by going here.” “Oh.” He replied, looking down on the floor. I sighed and took off my jacket andf my other snow things besides my boots. I implied that Kami do the same. Then we walked over to the racks where guests could hand up their jackets and things. Once we did that, we proceeded to walk up he steps to the upstairs exhibits. Upstairs, the museum had carpet instead of tile. And up here was the Egyptian Exhibit, the Japanese Exhibit, the Weather Exhibit and the Ancient Weapons Exhibit. Also instead of the walls being white, they were light blue.
“So where do you want to look first?” I asked Kami, while I ruffled by fluffy hot pink sweater. He shoved his hands into the pocket of his navy blue hoodie and shrugged. Well how about the Egypt Exhibit thing? We didn’t get to check out the whole thing last time.” Following orders, we entered the exhibit. It was deserted and no one was there except us. Hmm, I wonder why. Usually the museum was bustling with all kinds of people. I decided to try to see if Kami was Egyptian again. So, we walked over to the stone tablet in the far corner of the exhibit, and I told him to read it. “Hmm, It just says that a Pharaoh named Farah enslaved his people in order to create a system of underground tunneled below the city of Cario Egypt. These tunnels were used as a secret military force transport to battle the Romans. So nothing important there Kate.” Hmmm. He can still read hieroglyphics, but doesn’t seem to be so concerned about them. I am starting to think that Kami may not be Egyptian. Looking and looking around the exhibit for about an hour, I found nothing new that explained if Kami was Egyptian or not. Sigh. So confusing. So exiting that exhibit and crossing it off my list, I decided to check out the Japanese Exhibit with him.
Walking over there, out of the corner of my eye I swear I could have sworn seeing a guy dressed in all black in the shadows. But I decided not to worry about it. The Japanese exhibit was so boring, it even made Kami yawn. There were just fancy silk robes, stuff about samurais, weapons that they used, blah blah blah. Plus, the room was all dark and dimly lit with yellow paper lanterns. I tried to get Kami to read the ancient Japanese writing. He squinted at it, and managed to read a couple lines, but nothing more than that. Hmm, so he can read Egyptian, and a little bit of Japanese. But he seemed extremely bored out of his gourd. He had that look in his blue eyes that said “Can we get out of here please?” “Het Kami I have an idea.” “What?” He growled as we left the exhibit. “How about we go to the ancient weapons exhibit?” I suggested, walking towards it. His eyes lit up a bit and he tilted his head. “all right. Then can we take a break? We’ve been looking at stuff for two hours now!” Entering the exhibit I could see this one was better lit, and had grey walls.
The walls were covered with every weapon you could imagine, both modern and ancient. Just rows and rows of guns, swords, daggers, pistols, you name it! “WOW!” Me and Kami gasped. But before we could look around, I felt someone tap me on the shoulder. “I’m afraid your time is up miss.” Whirling around in surprise, I came face to face (if you could believe me) with a Ninja! He was wearing all black, and he had his mask pulled up over his mouth and nose to where only his eyes were showing. Around his forehead was a golden headband that was in the shape of a dragon. It must be a museum guard. I think.
I opened the front door of my pink house and proceeded to walk outside into the wind and snow. It was colder than it was before when we were all playing Snow Seek. It had to be what, 14 degrees or so with a 10 mile an hour wind? So that made the grand temperature, counting wind chill, to be a grand total of 4 degrees. And walking in black jeans, boots, snow hat, gloves, and a heavy winter jacket things were still uncomfortable. At least I wasn’t wearing bulky snow pants. I started to make my way towards the museum. It was a long ways away from here. It was across from the Guns 4 Fun store, which was on Ruth-Way Intersection in downtown Dynito. It was about 5 miles from my house. Sigh. It’s going to be a long walk in weather like this. But I eventually made it to the entrance of the Dynito Museum. The building looks like the white house with grey granite steps. I walked up them and proceeded to wait under the roof which was held up by 6 gleaming white pillars. Or course, they just looked like white sticks with all the snow blowing around.
I was waiting for about 5 minutes when I heard a familiar voice coming up the steps. “ All right you restless spirit, this is the surprise location I was telling you about. Yeah I know you want to stay in there because it’s cold outside, but just try to have a good time ok? All right it’s up to you now.” Then I heard another familiar, but deeper, voice yelling “Huh? Hey wait a minute Carson! What are we doing at the museum?! You’re not in danger or anything! YOU TRICKED ME! COME BACK OUT HERE SO I CAN,” But then he noticed I was staring right at him. Kami blushed and mumbled “Oh. Uh, hey what’s up? Haven’t uh, seen you in a bit uh heh heh.” He was wearing a black jacket, dark green cargo pants, and a headband that went around his ears. I smiled a little to see how flustered he was. Carson sure does a good job of concealing things from people. “Hey Kami what’s up? How about we go inside? It’s cold out here and my butt is freezing!” Nodding his head, he walked up to the door and held it open for me. Then he followed me inside the museum.
Inside the museum, hardly anyone was there. The exhibits were still opened though. The brown and white triangular tile was still all shiny and spectacular, and there were lots of dinosaur skeletons still hanging. But I noticed that they had replaced the pterodactyl and the pterosaur with another skeleton that looked like a giant sized alligator next to the one that looked like a whale. “so what are we doing here Kate? Carson wouldn’t tell me a thing. He just said it’s a surprise Kami!” I turned around and looked at him. “Oh he said he wanted me to help you find out who you are, where you came from and all that bother by going here.” “Oh.” He replied, looking down on the floor. I sighed and took off my jacket andf my other snow things besides my boots. I implied that Kami do the same. Then we walked over to the racks where guests could hand up their jackets and things. Once we did that, we proceeded to walk up he steps to the upstairs exhibits. Upstairs, the museum had carpet instead of tile. And up here was the Egyptian Exhibit, the Japanese Exhibit, the Weather Exhibit and the Ancient Weapons Exhibit. Also instead of the walls being white, they were light blue.
“So where do you want to look first?” I asked Kami, while I ruffled by fluffy hot pink sweater. He shoved his hands into the pocket of his navy blue hoodie and shrugged. Well how about the Egypt Exhibit thing? We didn’t get to check out the whole thing last time.” Following orders, we entered the exhibit. It was deserted and no one was there except us. Hmm, I wonder why. Usually the museum was bustling with all kinds of people. I decided to try to see if Kami was Egyptian again. So, we walked over to the stone tablet in the far corner of the exhibit, and I told him to read it. “Hmm, It just says that a Pharaoh named Farah enslaved his people in order to create a system of underground tunneled below the city of Cario Egypt. These tunnels were used as a secret military force transport to battle the Romans. So nothing important there Kate.” Hmmm. He can still read hieroglyphics, but doesn’t seem to be so concerned about them. I am starting to think that Kami may not be Egyptian. Looking and looking around the exhibit for about an hour, I found nothing new that explained if Kami was Egyptian or not. Sigh. So confusing. So exiting that exhibit and crossing it off my list, I decided to check out the Japanese Exhibit with him.
Walking over there, out of the corner of my eye I swear I could have sworn seeing a guy dressed in all black in the shadows. But I decided not to worry about it. The Japanese exhibit was so boring, it even made Kami yawn. There were just fancy silk robes, stuff about samurais, weapons that they used, blah blah blah. Plus, the room was all dark and dimly lit with yellow paper lanterns. I tried to get Kami to read the ancient Japanese writing. He squinted at it, and managed to read a couple lines, but nothing more than that. Hmm, so he can read Egyptian, and a little bit of Japanese. But he seemed extremely bored out of his gourd. He had that look in his blue eyes that said “Can we get out of here please?” “Het Kami I have an idea.” “What?” He growled as we left the exhibit. “How about we go to the ancient weapons exhibit?” I suggested, walking towards it. His eyes lit up a bit and he tilted his head. “all right. Then can we take a break? We’ve been looking at stuff for two hours now!” Entering the exhibit I could see this one was better lit, and had grey walls.
The walls were covered with every weapon you could imagine, both modern and ancient. Just rows and rows of guns, swords, daggers, pistols, you name it! “WOW!” Me and Kami gasped. But before we could look around, I felt someone tap me on the shoulder. “I’m afraid your time is up miss.” Whirling around in surprise, I came face to face (if you could believe me) with a Ninja! He was wearing all black, and he had his mask pulled up over his mouth and nose to where only his eyes were showing. Around his forehead was a golden headband that was in the shape of a dragon. It must be a museum guard. I think.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 10:17 p.m.
Part 4 section 2,
“Um, ok Mr. Museam guard, quit the act and if you want us to leave we can.” Just then, behind him outside the exhibit entrance, I found out that this ninja wasn’t a guard. More ninjas wearing all black came crawling, back flipping, front flipping, and walking towards us! Wait a second, aren’t ninjas extinct though? Growling Kami turned around and said “Leave her alone!” “I’m afraid not young man. I am under strict orders from the boss to eliminate you. My pay check is getting docked by the hour. So how about we finish this quickly?” With that, the ninja leader man pulled out a long gleaming sword, and sung it at me! I ducked avoiding the blade, and I kicked the man in his knee. Then I turned around and ran deeper in the exhibit. “OW! GET HER!” He bellowed, hopping down on one foot while pointing at me. All the ninja people cam rushing forward, blades gleaming, and some had little things that looked like clock gears. “KAMI LET’S GET OUT OF HERE!” I bellowed, avoiding another blade which was thrown by one of the ninjas.
Up ahead, Kami was wrestling with the ninja leader. Then, KA BAM! The leader threw Kami across the entire exhibit towards the sword room. I heard a sickening CRASH! From the room, and then a horrid thud. OH MY GOD! “KAMI!” I yelled, turning around to look back at the sword display room. Big mistake Kate. SLASH! I felt massive pain in coming from my right shoulder blade. Looking on the floor I could see blood dripping down, and I felt some air on my back (probably because something cut open my pink sweater). Turning around, I could see my attacker was the leader ninja. The tip of his sword had blood on it. My blood. He took another swing, but despite the pain, I did a shoulder roll to the left, letting the blade hit harmlessly past me. Then I had to dodge to the right to avoid another ninja’s blade. But another ninja impaled me in my right leg. “GAHHH!” I ended up rolling towards the wall, and hitting the back of my head. “HA HA HA! WE GOT HER NOW!” The leader ninja bellowed, walking towards me. How did they get here anyways? And who were they working for? “SOMEONE HELP!” I yelled again, hoping somebody would hear me. And I was right. For out of nowhere, just as I was about to get sliced by the ninja leader, Kami burst out of the sword room, and tackled him straight to the ground.
“You’re not getting anyone!” He growled, kicking the leader off to the side. I noticed that he had something strapped around his waist. And dangling down were holsters for swords. Hmmm? “I suggest that you back off, before I have to take action.” Kami threatened, glaring at the ninja leader. Getting up off the ground and holding his eye the leader growled back “I suggest you back off before I have to kill you!” That got Kami going, and he reached into his sword holster. Only there wasn’t just one holster for a sword, there were four holsters for four swords! The ninja leader starred at Kami for a second. I did as well. Why did Kami have four swords?. He held the two in his right hand, one with a white handle with a red stripe, and the other with a green handle and a blue diamond pattern. And he held the other two in his left hand, one was all white with a dark blue navy stripe, and the other was yellow with a red square looking patturn. Kami growled. “You’re going to regret this!”
“ Ha! Interesting. I'm surprise you can even manage that. Anyways, You’re the one who’s going to regret this!” the leader growled, pulling out his own sword. Well I found out something about Kami. Apparently he can handle four swords. Hmmmm. that And what was going to happen next between the weird ninja leader, and all of a sudden sword expert Kami?
part 5 coming up later. How was this part? I divided it into two sections for easy reading. I hope. And note, i based the sword style for Kami off of another thing i've seen ,but i made it different. I might edit it later(which i did). So hopefully no one gets mad at me for this. But i'm making things different. Tell me if you have complaints, idea, or suggestions, or if i should re write anything. I'm feeling really uneasy about this right now. So how was this? I'm really nervous about it. Wrote for 2 hours. Yep yep. So hopefully it's not too bad.
“Um, ok Mr. Museam guard, quit the act and if you want us to leave we can.” Just then, behind him outside the exhibit entrance, I found out that this ninja wasn’t a guard. More ninjas wearing all black came crawling, back flipping, front flipping, and walking towards us! Wait a second, aren’t ninjas extinct though? Growling Kami turned around and said “Leave her alone!” “I’m afraid not young man. I am under strict orders from the boss to eliminate you. My pay check is getting docked by the hour. So how about we finish this quickly?” With that, the ninja leader man pulled out a long gleaming sword, and sung it at me! I ducked avoiding the blade, and I kicked the man in his knee. Then I turned around and ran deeper in the exhibit. “OW! GET HER!” He bellowed, hopping down on one foot while pointing at me. All the ninja people cam rushing forward, blades gleaming, and some had little things that looked like clock gears. “KAMI LET’S GET OUT OF HERE!” I bellowed, avoiding another blade which was thrown by one of the ninjas.
Up ahead, Kami was wrestling with the ninja leader. Then, KA BAM! The leader threw Kami across the entire exhibit towards the sword room. I heard a sickening CRASH! From the room, and then a horrid thud. OH MY GOD! “KAMI!” I yelled, turning around to look back at the sword display room. Big mistake Kate. SLASH! I felt massive pain in coming from my right shoulder blade. Looking on the floor I could see blood dripping down, and I felt some air on my back (probably because something cut open my pink sweater). Turning around, I could see my attacker was the leader ninja. The tip of his sword had blood on it. My blood. He took another swing, but despite the pain, I did a shoulder roll to the left, letting the blade hit harmlessly past me. Then I had to dodge to the right to avoid another ninja’s blade. But another ninja impaled me in my right leg. “GAHHH!” I ended up rolling towards the wall, and hitting the back of my head. “HA HA HA! WE GOT HER NOW!” The leader ninja bellowed, walking towards me. How did they get here anyways? And who were they working for? “SOMEONE HELP!” I yelled again, hoping somebody would hear me. And I was right. For out of nowhere, just as I was about to get sliced by the ninja leader, Kami burst out of the sword room, and tackled him straight to the ground.
“You’re not getting anyone!” He growled, kicking the leader off to the side. I noticed that he had something strapped around his waist. And dangling down were holsters for swords. Hmmm? “I suggest that you back off, before I have to take action.” Kami threatened, glaring at the ninja leader. Getting up off the ground and holding his eye the leader growled back “I suggest you back off before I have to kill you!” That got Kami going, and he reached into his sword holster. Only there wasn’t just one holster for a sword, there were four holsters for four swords! The ninja leader starred at Kami for a second. I did as well. Why did Kami have four swords?. He held the two in his right hand, one with a white handle with a red stripe, and the other with a green handle and a blue diamond pattern. And he held the other two in his left hand, one was all white with a dark blue navy stripe, and the other was yellow with a red square looking patturn. Kami growled. “You’re going to regret this!”
“ Ha! Interesting. I'm surprise you can even manage that. Anyways, You’re the one who’s going to regret this!” the leader growled, pulling out his own sword. Well I found out something about Kami. Apparently he can handle four swords. Hmmmm. that And what was going to happen next between the weird ninja leader, and all of a sudden sword expert Kami?
part 5 coming up later. How was this part? I divided it into two sections for easy reading. I hope. And note, i based the sword style for Kami off of another thing i've seen ,but i made it different. I might edit it later(which i did). So hopefully no one gets mad at me for this. But i'm making things different. Tell me if you have complaints, idea, or suggestions, or if i should re write anything. I'm feeling really uneasy about this right now. So how was this? I'm really nervous about it. Wrote for 2 hours. Yep yep. So hopefully it's not too bad.
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KingMcNugget [None]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 10:42 p.m.
part 5 coming up later. How was this part? I divided it into two sections for easy reading. I hope. And note, i based the sword style for Kami off of another thing i've seen ,but i made it different. I might edit it later. So hopefully no one gets mad at me for this. But i'm making things different. Tell me if you have complaints, idea, or suggestions, or if i should re write anything. I'm feeling really uneasy about this right now. So how was this? I'm really nervous about it. Wrote for 2 hours. Yep yep. So hopefully it's not too bad.[/QUOTE']
I KNOW!!! You got is fromZORO your favorite sword master character aka this guy
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doglider [None]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 10:44 p.m.
This part was pretty good. Who are these ninjas and who are they working for? Maybe Kami will sprout an extra pair of arms whenever he has 4 swords?
On a different note (c) I've started my own story: http://en.board.goodgamestudios.com/empire/showthread.php?29770-The-Hunter
On a different note (c) I've started my own story: http://en.board.goodgamestudios.com/empire/showthread.php?29770-The-Hunter
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 11:10 p.m.
KING DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM will write tomarrow.
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Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1]
:: Aug. 15, 2012, 5:59 a.m.
MORE ORE MOREEEE!!!!!!! Awesome!!!
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 16, 2012, 5:34 p.m.
Part 5...................... section 1 a Twist of Events.
So here I am bleeding in the corner of the Ancient Weapons Exhibit watching the events unfold between a tall ninja leader dude, and Kami who appeared out of nowhere handling 4 swords at once. This ought to be interesting, or deadly. Charging at him, the ninja leader tried a downward swooping movement with his swords. However, Kami easily blocked that by crossing all four of his blades in front of him in an X shape. CLANG! Sparks went flying as the swords clashed with one another. “Hmmm. An easy block. But let’s see how you handle this!” The Ninja growled, raising his sword up for another attack. This time he swiped to the left of Kami, but Kami retaliated by swinging the two swords in his right hand. CLANG! The blades crashed together again. “GRRRRR! ANOTHER EASY BLOCK! But now I’m going for the full attack!” The Ninja leader began swiping his blade back and forth, and up and down, but Kami just blocked them all. CLANG! CLANG! CLANG! CLANG! Geez! What do they want to do? Kill themselves?
Things started to really act up when another ninja started to help the leader attack Kami. Now Kami was trying to fend off two people attacking him at once. But he was doing a pretty good job of it. He hasn’t gotten hit once. SLASH! I spoke too soon. Wait a second, that’s not Kamis blood. Looking closer in between the clashing blades, I could see the leader had been hit in the leg by one of Kami’s swords. As the battle raged, the leader tried to throw those little gear shapes at Kami. He tossed them to what seemed like towards Kami’s head, but like a baseball player Kami just hit them back at the Ninja Leader. He ducked, and the gear things flew past him, and instead hit the glass display case of arrow heads. SMASH! CLANG! The leader, with the help of his little ninja friend, managed to hit one of Kami’s swords out of his left hand. While the sword rotated in the air (it was the green one with the blue diamond pattern) Kami (I don’t know how) caught it in his mouth in mid rotation. “I’ve just about had it with you!” he growled, clenching his teeth together down on the swords handle.
Doing a back flip and barely dodging the leader’s assistants sword, Kami landed on his feet and raised the three swords in his hands up in the air. He tilted his head sideways to where the blade of the sword in his mouth was tilting left diagonally. Starring, the leader laughed “HA! What are you going to do? Throw your swords at me? Please. I think it’s time to finish you off!” Then he made a fatal mistake. He charged right at Kami, running at full speed with his sword pointed upward ready to slash him. Or so he thought. Suddenly there was a blue glow around all of Kami’s swords. And just as the leader was about to strike him, Kami yelled through gritted teeth “Albastrel SLASH!” and just like that, SLASH! Kami swung the three swords down, and at the same time charged sideways the leader . It made kind of a mark. That looked like this Attachment not found. across the ninja leaders chest. It ripped his uniform, And blood splatted everywhere. Falling to the ground with a sickening thud, all the other ninjas gasped. There was silence for a long time, before Kami put away his four swords into their holsters with a SHINK sound.
He turned around and glared menacingly at the other ninjas. Just like that, all the ninjas screamed and ran out of the exhibit. Walking over Kami rolled over the ninja leader and slapped him across the face. “YOU KILLED HIM AND YOUR NOW SLAPPPING HIM?!?” I roared, getting up off the ground and walking over. Kami smiled “No, I’m doing that to wake him up.” As usual, he was right. The ninja leaders eyes flung open, and he screamed “WHAT ARE YOU?! GET AWAY FROM ME!” but as he tried to scoot, he couldn’t go anywhere. “Fat chance. Now you’re going to tell us who you are, and who you’re working for or, I might have to cut you up some more.” Kami threatened, stepping on the ninja leaders chest. I don't think that Kami should have done that, for the mark that he made on the guys chest bled even more.
"AGGHH! OK OK OK! Just get off and i'll tell you everything!" Getting off Kami crossed his arms over his chest and growled menacingly as the ninja began to explain. "My names Robert J Cutthroat and i am employed for this guy named Whiteford. That's all i'm allowed to tell you! So, could, could you please leave me alone!" I looked at Kami for a second, then I sent him a look saying "Please show this guy mercy, or i'll kill you." He thought for a second, then growled at Robert "All right. I'll show you some mercy. But if i ever catch sight of you again, you better believe that i'll do more than that little cut on your chest. Now get outta here." I couldn't say that cut was little, but you know, whatever. Whimpering, Cutthroat picked up the remains of his torn uniform and used it as a gaze to try to stop the massive bleeding at he left. Once he did, I took the opportunity to yell at Kami "How did you even do that? Are you nuts?! What's wrong with you huh?" He starred at me for a long time before he shrugged "I don't know Kate. I really don't. But for some reason, these swords look familiar somehow."
I was going to yell more before I stopped myself. Did he say those swords looked familiar to him? Suddenly I was struck with an idea. "Hey Kami," "What?" "Do you think that maybe you were a swordsmen? I mean did you see how you handled those swords with the ninjas? Or how you did that slash thing with Robert? I think we might have found the first clue to who you are!" There was silence again before a bright smile went across Kami's face. "You really think so?" "I'm pretty sure. Now come on, let's get out of this museum before security comes to kick us out. We also have to find out who this Whiteford is." Just as I said that who do you think we heard? That's right. Museum security. "Let's go!" "Someone is up there!" Looking at each other, me and Kami quickly made an exit. Only there was one problem, I was still bleeding so wouldn't I leave a blood trail?
Just then I felt a little tingle on the back of my injured shoulder. Then the pain vanished, and looking behind me i wasn't bleeding anymore! Oh wait I get it. Looking ahead, I saw Kami wink at me as he continued to run down the hall. We were heading towards the back staircase entrance. Sigh, I don't know about that boy. OH and he still has the four swords huh? Yep. They were still in their holsters on that blue cotton waist belt thing. Well, on the bright side today I found something out about Kami the spirit. He might have been a swordsmen. And as long as we don't get caught by those security guys, or run into more ninjas, this might have been not such a bad day. Except for the injury's. That hurt.
So here I am bleeding in the corner of the Ancient Weapons Exhibit watching the events unfold between a tall ninja leader dude, and Kami who appeared out of nowhere handling 4 swords at once. This ought to be interesting, or deadly. Charging at him, the ninja leader tried a downward swooping movement with his swords. However, Kami easily blocked that by crossing all four of his blades in front of him in an X shape. CLANG! Sparks went flying as the swords clashed with one another. “Hmmm. An easy block. But let’s see how you handle this!” The Ninja growled, raising his sword up for another attack. This time he swiped to the left of Kami, but Kami retaliated by swinging the two swords in his right hand. CLANG! The blades crashed together again. “GRRRRR! ANOTHER EASY BLOCK! But now I’m going for the full attack!” The Ninja leader began swiping his blade back and forth, and up and down, but Kami just blocked them all. CLANG! CLANG! CLANG! CLANG! Geez! What do they want to do? Kill themselves?
Things started to really act up when another ninja started to help the leader attack Kami. Now Kami was trying to fend off two people attacking him at once. But he was doing a pretty good job of it. He hasn’t gotten hit once. SLASH! I spoke too soon. Wait a second, that’s not Kamis blood. Looking closer in between the clashing blades, I could see the leader had been hit in the leg by one of Kami’s swords. As the battle raged, the leader tried to throw those little gear shapes at Kami. He tossed them to what seemed like towards Kami’s head, but like a baseball player Kami just hit them back at the Ninja Leader. He ducked, and the gear things flew past him, and instead hit the glass display case of arrow heads. SMASH! CLANG! The leader, with the help of his little ninja friend, managed to hit one of Kami’s swords out of his left hand. While the sword rotated in the air (it was the green one with the blue diamond pattern) Kami (I don’t know how) caught it in his mouth in mid rotation. “I’ve just about had it with you!” he growled, clenching his teeth together down on the swords handle.
Doing a back flip and barely dodging the leader’s assistants sword, Kami landed on his feet and raised the three swords in his hands up in the air. He tilted his head sideways to where the blade of the sword in his mouth was tilting left diagonally. Starring, the leader laughed “HA! What are you going to do? Throw your swords at me? Please. I think it’s time to finish you off!” Then he made a fatal mistake. He charged right at Kami, running at full speed with his sword pointed upward ready to slash him. Or so he thought. Suddenly there was a blue glow around all of Kami’s swords. And just as the leader was about to strike him, Kami yelled through gritted teeth “Albastrel SLASH!” and just like that, SLASH! Kami swung the three swords down, and at the same time charged sideways the leader . It made kind of a mark. That looked like this Attachment not found. across the ninja leaders chest. It ripped his uniform, And blood splatted everywhere. Falling to the ground with a sickening thud, all the other ninjas gasped. There was silence for a long time, before Kami put away his four swords into their holsters with a SHINK sound.
He turned around and glared menacingly at the other ninjas. Just like that, all the ninjas screamed and ran out of the exhibit. Walking over Kami rolled over the ninja leader and slapped him across the face. “YOU KILLED HIM AND YOUR NOW SLAPPPING HIM?!?” I roared, getting up off the ground and walking over. Kami smiled “No, I’m doing that to wake him up.” As usual, he was right. The ninja leaders eyes flung open, and he screamed “WHAT ARE YOU?! GET AWAY FROM ME!” but as he tried to scoot, he couldn’t go anywhere. “Fat chance. Now you’re going to tell us who you are, and who you’re working for or, I might have to cut you up some more.” Kami threatened, stepping on the ninja leaders chest. I don't think that Kami should have done that, for the mark that he made on the guys chest bled even more.
"AGGHH! OK OK OK! Just get off and i'll tell you everything!" Getting off Kami crossed his arms over his chest and growled menacingly as the ninja began to explain. "My names Robert J Cutthroat and i am employed for this guy named Whiteford. That's all i'm allowed to tell you! So, could, could you please leave me alone!" I looked at Kami for a second, then I sent him a look saying "Please show this guy mercy, or i'll kill you." He thought for a second, then growled at Robert "All right. I'll show you some mercy. But if i ever catch sight of you again, you better believe that i'll do more than that little cut on your chest. Now get outta here." I couldn't say that cut was little, but you know, whatever. Whimpering, Cutthroat picked up the remains of his torn uniform and used it as a gaze to try to stop the massive bleeding at he left. Once he did, I took the opportunity to yell at Kami "How did you even do that? Are you nuts?! What's wrong with you huh?" He starred at me for a long time before he shrugged "I don't know Kate. I really don't. But for some reason, these swords look familiar somehow."
I was going to yell more before I stopped myself. Did he say those swords looked familiar to him? Suddenly I was struck with an idea. "Hey Kami," "What?" "Do you think that maybe you were a swordsmen? I mean did you see how you handled those swords with the ninjas? Or how you did that slash thing with Robert? I think we might have found the first clue to who you are!" There was silence again before a bright smile went across Kami's face. "You really think so?" "I'm pretty sure. Now come on, let's get out of this museum before security comes to kick us out. We also have to find out who this Whiteford is." Just as I said that who do you think we heard? That's right. Museum security. "Let's go!" "Someone is up there!" Looking at each other, me and Kami quickly made an exit. Only there was one problem, I was still bleeding so wouldn't I leave a blood trail?
Just then I felt a little tingle on the back of my injured shoulder. Then the pain vanished, and looking behind me i wasn't bleeding anymore! Oh wait I get it. Looking ahead, I saw Kami wink at me as he continued to run down the hall. We were heading towards the back staircase entrance. Sigh, I don't know about that boy. OH and he still has the four swords huh? Yep. They were still in their holsters on that blue cotton waist belt thing. Well, on the bright side today I found something out about Kami the spirit. He might have been a swordsmen. And as long as we don't get caught by those security guys, or run into more ninjas, this might have been not such a bad day. Except for the injury's. That hurt.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 2:10 a.m.
All right here. I'm getting ever closer to school and i know i am not going to be able to finish this in about 2 days. So, do you peeps want me to continue this or not? I need a straight answer. I spend a lot of my time writing for you peeps, and do you even like it or not? Sorry if i'm doubting myself again.
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Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 2:47 a.m.
We love it! Don't we, guys? If we didn't, you wouldn't have even finished Revenge, is not so sweet.