Forum: empire-en

Board: [587] Alliance introductions & searches

Topic: [114796] My alliance

[-114796] REBORN OISIN [None] :: Dec. 18, 2014, 8:27 p.m.

Our alliance is good its name is lightning land if you wish to join contact me,REBORN OISIN

[1901840] Unknown :: Dec. 18, 2014, 8:29 p.m.

Good luck recruiting

[1902433] Cyclone14 (INT1) [INT1] :: Dec. 20, 2014, 10:26 p.m.

Let me give you a few tips on how to recruit - this thread doesn't shout "JOIN" to me.

Don't title the thread "My alliance." Title it the name of the alliance in question; "Lightning Land."

Give more information. How many members it has, how many spaces for members it has, what world it's in, what upgrades it has . . . So on, so forth.

Add more length, colour and general excitement to the page. Add sub-headings, fonts, sizes, as if you were writing an essay.

Following these, I wish you luck with your recruiting.