Forum: empire-en
Board: [942] US Migration Content - Community
Topic: [279878] poem 2
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lostsoul [None]
:: March 23, 2015, 4:25 p.m.
An Empty Shell
Why is it I cant feel love am I just a empty shell inside. Is there nothing in me. Am I so lost that all there is of me is the hate that others have given me. I try to be kind and I try to show love but I cant feel love so I don't know how to show it . Am I nothing but a shell in side . Have I hid my self so long that I have became what I hate. am I blind to the world for I can not see how to love. I may have all I ever waned but with out love what do I really have . Am I only a shell in side.
( once more fill free to give me honest feedback)
Why is it I cant feel love am I just a empty shell inside. Is there nothing in me. Am I so lost that all there is of me is the hate that others have given me. I try to be kind and I try to show love but I cant feel love so I don't know how to show it . Am I nothing but a shell in side . Have I hid my self so long that I have became what I hate. am I blind to the world for I can not see how to love. I may have all I ever waned but with out love what do I really have . Am I only a shell in side.
( once more fill free to give me honest feedback)
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yo_man [None]
:: March 30, 2015, 1:53 a.m.
I love this poem really good. You should be a poet
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yo_man [None]
:: March 30, 2015, 2:07 a.m.
here is a poem i made up not as good but my friends like it
I miss being a kid able to get away trouble was not a big deal now that im older responsibility i must deal No more toys and cries I must learn I must live as i am no longer a kid. Now that im grown up my dreams, hope's and passions i once had are secondary to my children
I miss being a kid able to get away trouble was not a big deal now that im older responsibility i must deal No more toys and cries I must learn I must live as i am no longer a kid. Now that im grown up my dreams, hope's and passions i once had are secondary to my children
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LADY EVA (US1) [None]
:: March 30, 2015, 5:14 a.m.
wow!
nice work as usual lostsoul. great poem.
so yo man is a poet too.
we have some poets in our forum. next time we might get a poem contest or something. keep up the good work guys.
nice work as usual lostsoul. great poem.
so yo man is a poet too.
we have some poets in our forum. next time we might get a poem contest or something. keep up the good work guys.
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CM Margo [None]
:: March 30, 2015, 1:01 p.m.
we have some poets in our forum. next time we might get a poem contest or something. keep up the good work guys.
So true! Nice idea Eva
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Another great poem lostsoul!
~CM Margo
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lostsoul [None]
:: March 31, 2015, 3:26 a.m.
thank you all who posted ..... and here a nother one .. a bit grim.
HELL
Why is life always like this? It's covered in a dense fog of pain and grief. Death is all around us. Why must this be? Why must life feel like this? Is this a test of god or of the devil, or does he just not care? Does he want to hurt me? Does he want to see me cry? Or is it out of his control? Must I live a life of pain on earth to have a place in heaven? Or am I in hell right now, paying for something I have already done? Only time will tell. But what if I have no time left? Is it too late to save this one soul? Is there nothing I can do to ease this pain? Why is this life always like this?
HELL
Why is life always like this? It's covered in a dense fog of pain and grief. Death is all around us. Why must this be? Why must life feel like this? Is this a test of god or of the devil, or does he just not care? Does he want to hurt me? Does he want to see me cry? Or is it out of his control? Must I live a life of pain on earth to have a place in heaven? Or am I in hell right now, paying for something I have already done? Only time will tell. But what if I have no time left? Is it too late to save this one soul? Is there nothing I can do to ease this pain? Why is this life always like this?
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lostsoul [None]
:: March 31, 2015, 3:47 a.m.
i look forward to the contest ...... and good poem yo
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lord reginald [None]
:: April 2, 2015, 3:21 a.m.
You write like Shakespere!
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lostsoul [None]
:: April 2, 2015, 4:51 a.m.
lord reginald ... thank you very much ... that means a ton to me... but i doubt i could compare to him
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justinjones (US1) [None]
:: June 10, 2015, 8:31 p.m.
bro you just need to continue doing what you do best i mean continue writing poems i write poems to sometimes when i'm board, depressed and feel a little lonely when my girlfriend left me i write poems i'm just saying you should continue doing your best .
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funnybunny0486 [None]
:: June 16, 2015, 3:02 p.m.
lost soul...... deep, and awesome, keep writing poems and keep posting them.
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Count Leone [None]
:: July 21, 2015, 9:55 p.m.
I could never right a poem like that, I could right a story, not a poem though.