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Topic: [74672] Revenge, is not so sweet.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 8, 2012, 8:47 p.m.
I am so MAD! So totally, freaking mad i could just explode my guts out right now. No not literally! What do you take me for? Some idiot or something? Sigh, sorry. I am just so mad that my best friend, Ray Monday, made fun of me in the school auditorium today. I told him not to say that comment out loud either, and i meant it! But no, he said it, and I ended up mortified. So mortified in fact, i ran out of the auditorium crying my eyes out. It's enough to make a girl do something drastic. Some thing like revenge. I crave revenge. I will have revenge. Vengeance will me mine! No one would make fun of me after i show them! I'll show them not to mess with me.
If you are wondering my name, its Kate. Kate Mc.Flower Tooter. DO NOT SAY ANYTHING ABOUT MY LAST NAME! I hate it. Its the reason Ray made fun of me in the first place. Right now i am standing in Hallway 12, just outside of the gym, by the lockers. Purple lockers to be exact. Anyway i was totally bashing my head on the lockers, and crying. Yeah, that's how bad the comment was. Why could this have happened to me? I am so depressed. "Kate? Are you ok?" Oh sweet God almighty! It's Carson! That little brat followed me here? HOW DARE HE!
I whirred around and looked down at Carson. "What do you want Shrimp?!" And when i called Carson a shrimp, i mean that literally. Carson is really short for his age; being a sophomore in high school and all. He's only like 4 foot 9, while i am a towering 5 feet 9, and the rest of my friends are 5' 10'' , 6' 3', and 5' 11'' . "I want to see if your ok Kate. You really have me worried. why did you run out of the gym like that?" he said, in that annoying little comforting friend voice of his. "I'm just fine, just leave me alone." I growled, resuming my head banging.
"Your no where near fine Kate. You need help, now how about if i talk to Ray.." That got me really peeved. "Ray? Ray?! there's no way in Satins house am i letting you talk to ray! You just stay out of this! And mind your own business you little pest! Now LEAVE!". Carson looked up sadly at me with his violet purple eyes. HE ran his hand through his short blond, blue and purple hair. "Ok Kate. If this is what you think is best. I'll stay out of your way. But try to feel better. Oh and remember Tearoy said to meet in the park at dark. Bring your black clothing!" With that, Carson left me. He is such a dork! He is so weird as well. What persons natural hair colors are blond, blue, and purple? I mean come one! that is not normal. He will pay for trying to calm me down. I'll show him, and the rest of my friends! I'm the only girl in the group and they always pick on me! revenge shall me mine.
Is was dusk. Five o clock in the afternoon to confirm it. I was getting ready for our group play date in the Dark Forest. Tearoy specifically instructed us to wear all black clothing, bring a flashlight for emergency reasons, and not to tell our parents where we were going. which was no problem for me since my parents work the night shift over at the Cookie Grill and Cafe. Stupid name for a restaurant if you ask me. So i'm now wearing my black short shorts, a long sleeved black sweater, and my favorite black sneakers. But instead of a flashlight, i'm bringing my mom's steak knife; safely covered of course. Don't ask about the knife, im not going to tell you everything. You have to see for yourself. Ha, now it's 5:30, and i'm going to be late to meet with my friends. Not that i want to see them anyway. they're all a bunch of testosterone filled males, with nothing better to do than pick on me.
So i hopped out of my room and ran down the stairs. The Knife was tucked neatly into my secret shirt compartment. Heh heh heh, good thing this is a thick wool shirt.
Prepare yourself boys, for i am coming to get you. Especially YOU Ray
This is part one. part two will come later. How do you like it so far?
If you are wondering my name, its Kate. Kate Mc.Flower Tooter. DO NOT SAY ANYTHING ABOUT MY LAST NAME! I hate it. Its the reason Ray made fun of me in the first place. Right now i am standing in Hallway 12, just outside of the gym, by the lockers. Purple lockers to be exact. Anyway i was totally bashing my head on the lockers, and crying. Yeah, that's how bad the comment was. Why could this have happened to me? I am so depressed. "Kate? Are you ok?" Oh sweet God almighty! It's Carson! That little brat followed me here? HOW DARE HE!
I whirred around and looked down at Carson. "What do you want Shrimp?!" And when i called Carson a shrimp, i mean that literally. Carson is really short for his age; being a sophomore in high school and all. He's only like 4 foot 9, while i am a towering 5 feet 9, and the rest of my friends are 5' 10'' , 6' 3', and 5' 11'' . "I want to see if your ok Kate. You really have me worried. why did you run out of the gym like that?" he said, in that annoying little comforting friend voice of his. "I'm just fine, just leave me alone." I growled, resuming my head banging.
"Your no where near fine Kate. You need help, now how about if i talk to Ray.." That got me really peeved. "Ray? Ray?! there's no way in Satins house am i letting you talk to ray! You just stay out of this! And mind your own business you little pest! Now LEAVE!". Carson looked up sadly at me with his violet purple eyes. HE ran his hand through his short blond, blue and purple hair. "Ok Kate. If this is what you think is best. I'll stay out of your way. But try to feel better. Oh and remember Tearoy said to meet in the park at dark. Bring your black clothing!" With that, Carson left me. He is such a dork! He is so weird as well. What persons natural hair colors are blond, blue, and purple? I mean come one! that is not normal. He will pay for trying to calm me down. I'll show him, and the rest of my friends! I'm the only girl in the group and they always pick on me! revenge shall me mine.
Is was dusk. Five o clock in the afternoon to confirm it. I was getting ready for our group play date in the Dark Forest. Tearoy specifically instructed us to wear all black clothing, bring a flashlight for emergency reasons, and not to tell our parents where we were going. which was no problem for me since my parents work the night shift over at the Cookie Grill and Cafe. Stupid name for a restaurant if you ask me. So i'm now wearing my black short shorts, a long sleeved black sweater, and my favorite black sneakers. But instead of a flashlight, i'm bringing my mom's steak knife; safely covered of course. Don't ask about the knife, im not going to tell you everything. You have to see for yourself. Ha, now it's 5:30, and i'm going to be late to meet with my friends. Not that i want to see them anyway. they're all a bunch of testosterone filled males, with nothing better to do than pick on me.
So i hopped out of my room and ran down the stairs. The Knife was tucked neatly into my secret shirt compartment. Heh heh heh, good thing this is a thick wool shirt.
Prepare yourself boys, for i am coming to get you. Especially YOU Ray
This is part one. part two will come later. How do you like it so far?
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xl5box [None]
:: May 8, 2012, 9:03 p.m.
I like it you should copy right :P Exciting even though I can predict whats gonna happen.
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Unknown
:: May 8, 2012, 9:07 p.m.
Please right more
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 9, 2012, 2:40 p.m.
I never knew that u were a girl! Anyways : Nice , Can't wait for part 2 ! 
. How old r u ?
. How old r u ? [1356746]
King Avalon 2 [None]
:: May 9, 2012, 6:51 p.m.
uuuummmm is this FOR real? PEOPLE CAN B CRUEL
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 9, 2012, 7:57 p.m.
I never knew that u were a girl! Anyways : Nice , Can't wait for part 2 !
ha ha ha! well, my name is definitely not Kate Mc. Flower tooter
Maaaayyyyybbbbeee i am a female, maybe I'm a male (i am one or the other, i am not both cause that would be creepy and wrong). I shall not reveal! haw haw haw. Anyways, I'm 16 and a sophomore in high school. [1356749]
King Avalon 2 [None]
:: May 9, 2012, 8 p.m.
Well, that was awkward
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 9, 2012, 9:06 p.m.
Here is part 2
I slipped out into the night. Dynito City was really quiet at this time of evening. In case you didn't catch what my city was called, its pronounce Die-Night-Oh. Got it? Good, now may i continue? The trees were casting long black shadows as the sun set behind the tall blue Tye Mountains. They were called the Tye mountains because just as the sun begins to set, those mountains cast beautiful colors into the sky. Now then, the air was cold, chilling me to the bone. Man, i should have known not to wear short shorts. Maybe ill go back to my house to get some pants. Nah, too late to do that now. I'm already rounding Elm's Street, just a few more blocks and ill be at Central Park.
Kicking up rocks, i broke into a run. Not because i was in a hurry, it was just really cold. Running would keep me awake anyways to do the deed. My shoes pounded on the street, echoing off the seemingly lifeless houses. Clouds were gathering in the sky, hmmm there could be a good chance of rain. Good. Then i could do it quietly, and I'll be cloaked. Ah, Central park. I could tell from the huge new sign they put up a week ago. Plus, the tall pine trees really gave it away. I strolled past the park playground equipment. Red slide, blue swing set, orange marry go round, sand box, nothing really new here. Following the white sidewalk, turned indigo by the setting sun, i made my way to the edge of the park. That's where Tearoy told me to meet earlier.
Speaking of Tearoy, the giant cam lumbering toward me. "hey Kate! What's shaking girl?" he smiled, picking me up my the waist, and twirling me around and around. "You know i hate that!" I muttered, but i let him finish anyway. When he finally decided to put me down, he got straight to business. "it's about time you showed up. Carson, Ray, Jason, and i have been waiting for what seems an eternity for you to get here. Did you bring a flashlight?" Curses, no i did not. I didn't want to anyways.
"My mom wouldn't let me borrow it. She needed to look for her missing earring." Wow,that was the lamest lie ever. Surprisingly, he bought it. "Well that's ok Kate. Carson brought his, and so did Jason. i have mine right here in my pocket. See?" grinning, Tearoy pulled out his favorite red flashlight. What a doofus. "come on girl, we haven't got all night. let's go meet up with the others!" Tearoy exclaimed while he grabbed my arm, and proceeded to drag me.
Ever tried to walk with the green giant? Well that's exactly how i felt with Tearoy. He's the one who's the towering 6' 3'', and boy does he walk fast. talk about taking the express train. But the kind where you're not in first class. Instead, you're in the way back cargo hold, where it is all bumpy and everything is moved or dragged, because you couldn't cough up the money for good tickets. If that's true, then I'm definitely in the cargo hold. "Slow down ya big brute! and let go of my arm!" i howled at him. I was really tempted to bite my arm off like a trapped coyote, but Tearoy release his grip before i could do that. "we're already here silly. Sheesh, are you in a mood or something?" Mood? MOOD?! I'll show him what mood i am in! No Kate, don't use the knife on him. He's not worth it.
"Oh, im just feeling a little you know, grumpy." i replied, giving my best fake smile. Just then i felt someone bump on my shoulder. It was Carson. "about time you got here Kate! Are you feeling better?" He asked me, while he gave me another playful fist bump on the shoulder. "yeah, i guess Carson. Now could you stand next to Tearoy instead of next to me please? I need some space." i retorted, giving him my glare i gave him earlier. "no problem Kate." Carson grinned and he moved next to Tearoy. God, about time walked away from me. I looked over at Ray for a second. He just looked back at me and winked. His red hair waving in the slight breeze.
Jesus do i hate him right now. His red hair reminds me of the devil, and his blue eyes are too sparkly. He's "interested" in me if you know what i mean. He asked me to the prom, but i refused. He's a disgusting man! One time he tried to eat jello through his nose. That was so gross. No one can eat jello through their nose! It's not possible! It defy the laws of physics! He plays too much video games too; thinks the whole world is just like Halo 3 or Resident evil. Maybe that's why he acts like a 3 year old. I bet now your thinking, geez this girls friends are weird. Well your right. Carson and Tearoy however, i make exceptions to.
Anyways, even when i threaten little twerp Carson he's still in a good mood. Look at him, all twinkle eyed and happy. It makes me sick. his violet purple eyes disgust me. But he is cute. Shut up Kate he is so not cute. "uh Kate did you hear what i said?" a voice put of nowhere said. I got startled, but i felt better knowing that voice was only Jason's. I looked over at him. "Uhh, no i didn't. Could you repeat please?" "I said we're playing hide and go seek in the Dark forest, so let's go. Tearoy, Ray, and Carson are already ahead by 30 paces" Jason laughed, running off to catch up with the others. Uhhg, it's just like him to be so immature. Breaking into a run again, i managed to catch up to Carson, Tearoy, and Jason in no time at all.
But Carson soon fell behind. "Wait! We Kay's have short legs!" boy that was lame. If you must know, that was Caron's last name, Kay. "catch up then Mr. Kay, Don't fall behind!" I yelled over my shoulder, and i just kept running. Suddenly, things got a lot darker. Huge dead trees were looming up ahead. Carson finally managed to catch up with me and the others, just as things went pitch black. Probably because the sun had finally set, and we were surrounded by tall dead trees, and there were clouds still in the sky. Good thing they brought flashlights.
I don't know if i told you this, but the Dark Forest is one scary place. And we were only at the entrance to it. Ah well, doesn't matter to me. This is the perfect place to get my revenge. As long that little brat Carson stays out of the way, along with Tearoy and Jason; things would run as smooth as butter.
part 3 soon to come. how was that?
I slipped out into the night. Dynito City was really quiet at this time of evening. In case you didn't catch what my city was called, its pronounce Die-Night-Oh. Got it? Good, now may i continue? The trees were casting long black shadows as the sun set behind the tall blue Tye Mountains. They were called the Tye mountains because just as the sun begins to set, those mountains cast beautiful colors into the sky. Now then, the air was cold, chilling me to the bone. Man, i should have known not to wear short shorts. Maybe ill go back to my house to get some pants. Nah, too late to do that now. I'm already rounding Elm's Street, just a few more blocks and ill be at Central Park.
Kicking up rocks, i broke into a run. Not because i was in a hurry, it was just really cold. Running would keep me awake anyways to do the deed. My shoes pounded on the street, echoing off the seemingly lifeless houses. Clouds were gathering in the sky, hmmm there could be a good chance of rain. Good. Then i could do it quietly, and I'll be cloaked. Ah, Central park. I could tell from the huge new sign they put up a week ago. Plus, the tall pine trees really gave it away. I strolled past the park playground equipment. Red slide, blue swing set, orange marry go round, sand box, nothing really new here. Following the white sidewalk, turned indigo by the setting sun, i made my way to the edge of the park. That's where Tearoy told me to meet earlier.
Speaking of Tearoy, the giant cam lumbering toward me. "hey Kate! What's shaking girl?" he smiled, picking me up my the waist, and twirling me around and around. "You know i hate that!" I muttered, but i let him finish anyway. When he finally decided to put me down, he got straight to business. "it's about time you showed up. Carson, Ray, Jason, and i have been waiting for what seems an eternity for you to get here. Did you bring a flashlight?" Curses, no i did not. I didn't want to anyways.
"My mom wouldn't let me borrow it. She needed to look for her missing earring." Wow,that was the lamest lie ever. Surprisingly, he bought it. "Well that's ok Kate. Carson brought his, and so did Jason. i have mine right here in my pocket. See?" grinning, Tearoy pulled out his favorite red flashlight. What a doofus. "come on girl, we haven't got all night. let's go meet up with the others!" Tearoy exclaimed while he grabbed my arm, and proceeded to drag me.
Ever tried to walk with the green giant? Well that's exactly how i felt with Tearoy. He's the one who's the towering 6' 3'', and boy does he walk fast. talk about taking the express train. But the kind where you're not in first class. Instead, you're in the way back cargo hold, where it is all bumpy and everything is moved or dragged, because you couldn't cough up the money for good tickets. If that's true, then I'm definitely in the cargo hold. "Slow down ya big brute! and let go of my arm!" i howled at him. I was really tempted to bite my arm off like a trapped coyote, but Tearoy release his grip before i could do that. "we're already here silly. Sheesh, are you in a mood or something?" Mood? MOOD?! I'll show him what mood i am in! No Kate, don't use the knife on him. He's not worth it.
"Oh, im just feeling a little you know, grumpy." i replied, giving my best fake smile. Just then i felt someone bump on my shoulder. It was Carson. "about time you got here Kate! Are you feeling better?" He asked me, while he gave me another playful fist bump on the shoulder. "yeah, i guess Carson. Now could you stand next to Tearoy instead of next to me please? I need some space." i retorted, giving him my glare i gave him earlier. "no problem Kate." Carson grinned and he moved next to Tearoy. God, about time walked away from me. I looked over at Ray for a second. He just looked back at me and winked. His red hair waving in the slight breeze.
Jesus do i hate him right now. His red hair reminds me of the devil, and his blue eyes are too sparkly. He's "interested" in me if you know what i mean. He asked me to the prom, but i refused. He's a disgusting man! One time he tried to eat jello through his nose. That was so gross. No one can eat jello through their nose! It's not possible! It defy the laws of physics! He plays too much video games too; thinks the whole world is just like Halo 3 or Resident evil. Maybe that's why he acts like a 3 year old. I bet now your thinking, geez this girls friends are weird. Well your right. Carson and Tearoy however, i make exceptions to.
Anyways, even when i threaten little twerp Carson he's still in a good mood. Look at him, all twinkle eyed and happy. It makes me sick. his violet purple eyes disgust me. But he is cute. Shut up Kate he is so not cute. "uh Kate did you hear what i said?" a voice put of nowhere said. I got startled, but i felt better knowing that voice was only Jason's. I looked over at him. "Uhh, no i didn't. Could you repeat please?" "I said we're playing hide and go seek in the Dark forest, so let's go. Tearoy, Ray, and Carson are already ahead by 30 paces" Jason laughed, running off to catch up with the others. Uhhg, it's just like him to be so immature. Breaking into a run again, i managed to catch up to Carson, Tearoy, and Jason in no time at all.
But Carson soon fell behind. "Wait! We Kay's have short legs!" boy that was lame. If you must know, that was Caron's last name, Kay. "catch up then Mr. Kay, Don't fall behind!" I yelled over my shoulder, and i just kept running. Suddenly, things got a lot darker. Huge dead trees were looming up ahead. Carson finally managed to catch up with me and the others, just as things went pitch black. Probably because the sun had finally set, and we were surrounded by tall dead trees, and there were clouds still in the sky. Good thing they brought flashlights.
I don't know if i told you this, but the Dark Forest is one scary place. And we were only at the entrance to it. Ah well, doesn't matter to me. This is the perfect place to get my revenge. As long that little brat Carson stays out of the way, along with Tearoy and Jason; things would run as smooth as butter.
part 3 soon to come. how was that?
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KingMcNugget [None]
:: May 9, 2012, 11:53 p.m.
ah I see But I still know how you got the characters! TRUST ME I KNOW YOU LIKE A BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plus I've seen you write this before. BUT I LIKE IT! IT'S GOOD WHERE'S MY BUTTER!???? I want to slaughter some idoctic morons.
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 10, 2012, 11:20 a.m.
WOW lol that was funny !!! But the first time i taugh that was real but then i readed the comments lol !!!! however i hope you will post a part 3 !!!!
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KingMcNugget [None]
:: May 10, 2012, 11:28 a.m.
OOOO Again, Nice story!!!! I LOVE IT!
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xl5box [None]
:: May 10, 2012, 11:29 a.m.
Nice going can't wait for part 3
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 10, 2012, 3:56 p.m.
BTW u can make ur sig's like McNugget and Doom on this site:D have fun!
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bobbysbro [None]
:: May 10, 2012, 4:52 p.m.
albastrel6 wrote: »WOW lol that was funny !!! But the first time i taugh that was real but then i readed the comments lol !!!! however i hope you will post a part 3
so did i lol
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 10, 2012, 8:35 p.m.
BTW u can make ur sig's like McNugget and Doom on this sitehttp://gickr.com
NOOOOOOO!!!! HOW DID YOU KNOW?! WHYYYYYYY WHYYYY DID YOU REVEAL IT?!?!?! WHYYYYYYYY???!?!? ah well, other peeps can do it as well. Have fun peeps.............................................................................................................................................. WHY?!?!?!??!?!??!?!??!!??!?!?!?!??!
by the way, part 3 will be coming up soon, i have a concert tonight so i don't have time to write it right now, but its coming
. I like to write. I'm doing a violin solo [1356787]
Luke Fierysword [None]
:: May 10, 2012, 10:33 p.m.
Good luck with the solo and i found the story pretty funny (can't wait for part 3).
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 11, 2012, 11:21 a.m.
ummm king doom you can see giickr.com right at yout photos so ????
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PurplePancakes [None]
:: May 11, 2012, 11:48 a.m.
good stories, but i think ur a boy because u like yugioh (how ever u spell it) and girls dont really play games
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 11, 2012, 10:30 p.m.
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leah ash [None]
:: May 11, 2012, 10:35 p.m.
Yea I'm a girl and not to be rude but I don't even know what that is.. Xxxx