Forum: empire-en
Board: [586] Off Topic
Topic: [74672] Revenge, is not so sweet.
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Unknown
:: May 12, 2012, 12:18 a.m.
please type more
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leah ash [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 12:25 p.m.
yeaa king doom do more xxx
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AmazingDobby888 [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 12:29 p.m.
u should not say your name + why do we care about your life
i live like that 2 but i dont boast
i live like that 2 but i dont boast
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leah ash [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 12:30 p.m.
lol dobby xxx
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 2:27 p.m.
DUDE !!! dobby he/she said in one of his previous posts that his/her name is NOT Kate McFlower.Tooter ! Dude that name is just CRAZY!
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 4:28 p.m.
sry but be sereousely now!!!
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leah ash [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 4:29 p.m.
yea in albastrel xxx
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Engard [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 5:21 p.m.
RIGHT MORE RIGHT MORE this is so coool and i also thought that it was real the first time to. I'm also righting a book to.
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PurplePancakes [None]
:: May 12, 2012, 11:50 p.m.
whens part 3
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 12:59 a.m.
Right now, Part 3
Did i say smooth as butter? I meant as thick as MUD. Right now Tearoy is explaining the rules of Dark Seek, and boy am i bored. "All right guys, here's the deal . To play Dark seek there are a few rules. First of all, when looking for other players, flashlights are not allowed. That is cheating and flashlights are for emergencies only. Second of all, you can only use your eyes, and other senses to find the other players. Thirdly, you can hide anywhere within the Dark Forest, but be aware or your surroundings. And don't go beyond the 4 Dead Trees. Rule four, the player whoever is it must count to 120. That gives players enough time to hide. Last but not least, be careful and have fun. Now who is it?"
"I want to be it!" Ray screamed. Fiddle sticks! this was NOT part of my plan. I wanted to be it! well, this throws a wrench in it. "Alright, Rays it. everyone go hide while Ray counts." Tearoy grinned, as he dashed off.
So Ray began the meaningless counting to 120. Humph, time to go hide i guess. My eye were already adjusted to the dark anyways; plus i have the best night vision out of all my friends. Turning around 180 degrees, i bolted into the Dark Forest. I bypassed the wide tree trunks, and just barely managed to dodge an oncoming bush. But what i didn't count on was tripping over a old tree root, and falling flat on my face in the mud. SPLAT! Bleah! Well my only pair of black short short, and my sweater, are ruined.
Gosh bless it! Ah well their only clothes. I'm just glad the knife covering didn't come off when i fell. I scrambled to my feet, and ran off again. This time a bit slower. The wind was blowing through my short brown hair, and it really felt refreshing against my face. Ah ha! There's my hiding place. See that big tall tree over there? It's trunk is just low enough for my to climb on it. Slowly walking over, i made my way to the wide purple tree trunk. Boy, this tree looks huge, but i bet i can climb it no problem. Carefully, gingerly i put my left sneaker onto the trunk. Seems safe. Time for the right sneaker. So far so good. I could see a purple vine just 3 feet above where i was standing. reaching up, i grabbed a hold of it. Uh oh. wait a second. that's not a purple vine! Vines don't move, or wiggle for that matter! IT"S A SNAKE! "hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisssssss!" and it doesn't seem too happy either. "AHHHHHH!!!! SNAKE!" i screamed, while i threw the snake on the ground. "Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssss!" HOLY MAMA! I got to get up this tree now!
Scrambling, i madly tried to dash up the tree. Not a very smart idea in the dark. BAM! ow, there goes my shin. BLAM! OW my ankle! WHAM! MY HEAD! Kate you idiot, calm down and slowly advance my the tree! Reaffirming my grip on the trunk, i looked at my surroundings. i spotted a branch about 5 feet up from my current position. Leaping up, i barley grabbed it, my feet dangling in the air. "Hiiiiiiiiiiiiisssss! It's still after me! Quickly, i pulled my self up, and jumped up onto another big branch. Man i'm glad i took those gymnastic lessons. I continued doing this until i didn't hear the snake no more. HA HA HA HA! Take that minion of mother nature!
But i had a new problem now, i was way too high up! I hadn't noticed that i climbed up so much, i was at the top of the tree! And i HATE heights! Crap. Be cool Kate, look on the bright side. No one will ever find you up here. "ONE HUNDRED AND TWENTY! HERE I COME GUYS!" Oh finally Ray managed to count to 120! Boy is he slow. But he'll never find me here. Ha ha ha. "Hey Kate!" What in the name of Davy Jones? "Carson? What are you doing up here?! This is MY spot!" i hissed, seeing that an enemy had followed me. "Actually i was here before you Kate you you followed me." Carson giggled, while he sat like a bird on his branch just to the left of me. "I highly doubt that Carson. I got here first and you know it. Plus, how did you get up here? Your too short to climb." I hissed again. I kept a close eye out for Ray while i was at it. "Oh i have my ways Kate. heh heh, actually it was pretty easy. Now lets be quiet or else Ray will hear us" he smiled, giving me his stupid right eye wink. "I'll SHOW YOU WHAT QUIET IS!" I hollered, a little bit too loud. " I hear someone!" I heard Ray sing. Ok, now i'm listening to Carson, and keeping my mouth shut.
I looked over at Carson, he had a sly look in his eye. His purple eyes seemed to be glowing at me in the dark. Grabbing a vine (this time is was a vine, not a snake, which is good.), Carson swung downward from his branch. "Carson you idiot what are you doing?!" I whispered, looking at him while he swung down. "Going downward an upward!" i scarcely heard that. His vine shot upward into the sky, and i could see him in the moonlight. Doing a back flip, and then kicking off a tree he landed on a branch in an old tall Willow tree about 45 yards away from me. How on earth did he do that? And why? "FOUND YOU KATE! I KNOW YOUR UP THERE!" oh that's right. "DANG IT!" I growled, seeing that i have been spotted. "Come down here and help me find Carson and Tearoy." OOooooo i'll help him find something all right. His GRAVE!
Ok to fast forward a little bit, Tearoy was hiding in a mud ditch, and Carson, well we haven't found him yet. Oh never mind, i see him. "Carson! Get down from that pine tree!" I roared, feeling triumphant that i found the little brat. "K, Kate, coming!" and with that, Carson showed off again. He slid down the pine trees trunk, kicked off of it, and landed on his feet unharmed. That defys the laws of physics! His legs should be broken and mangled! "Cool move there Carson. Ok who's it now?" Tearoy applauded. Quickly i shouted "ME! I WANT TO BE IT!" And it was agreed. i turned around and pretended to count to 120 while the boys hide. When secretly, i kept my eyes oped, and saw exactly which direction they headed off to.
Carson went east, Tearoy north, and Ray south. Ah, Ray, your going to me mine now more than ever! Pulling out my mom's steak knife from my sweater, i took off the protective covering, revealing the shining blade, and chuckling to myself. Suddenly, i heard thunder. BOOM! followed by lighting. FLASH! it lit up the whole sky, and made a horrible cracking sound. Rain began to poor down in sheets. In a few seconds, i went from perfectly dry but muddy,to soaking dripping wet. Perfect. Now i will be cloaked from their vision. Heading south, with my moms knife, i began my hunt for Ray.
And, I will succeed. CRASH BOOM!
Part 4 coming up! And i'm sure you will be surprised he he he.
Did i say smooth as butter? I meant as thick as MUD. Right now Tearoy is explaining the rules of Dark Seek, and boy am i bored. "All right guys, here's the deal . To play Dark seek there are a few rules. First of all, when looking for other players, flashlights are not allowed. That is cheating and flashlights are for emergencies only. Second of all, you can only use your eyes, and other senses to find the other players. Thirdly, you can hide anywhere within the Dark Forest, but be aware or your surroundings. And don't go beyond the 4 Dead Trees. Rule four, the player whoever is it must count to 120. That gives players enough time to hide. Last but not least, be careful and have fun. Now who is it?"
"I want to be it!" Ray screamed. Fiddle sticks! this was NOT part of my plan. I wanted to be it! well, this throws a wrench in it. "Alright, Rays it. everyone go hide while Ray counts." Tearoy grinned, as he dashed off.
So Ray began the meaningless counting to 120. Humph, time to go hide i guess. My eye were already adjusted to the dark anyways; plus i have the best night vision out of all my friends. Turning around 180 degrees, i bolted into the Dark Forest. I bypassed the wide tree trunks, and just barely managed to dodge an oncoming bush. But what i didn't count on was tripping over a old tree root, and falling flat on my face in the mud. SPLAT! Bleah! Well my only pair of black short short, and my sweater, are ruined.
Gosh bless it! Ah well their only clothes. I'm just glad the knife covering didn't come off when i fell. I scrambled to my feet, and ran off again. This time a bit slower. The wind was blowing through my short brown hair, and it really felt refreshing against my face. Ah ha! There's my hiding place. See that big tall tree over there? It's trunk is just low enough for my to climb on it. Slowly walking over, i made my way to the wide purple tree trunk. Boy, this tree looks huge, but i bet i can climb it no problem. Carefully, gingerly i put my left sneaker onto the trunk. Seems safe. Time for the right sneaker. So far so good. I could see a purple vine just 3 feet above where i was standing. reaching up, i grabbed a hold of it. Uh oh. wait a second. that's not a purple vine! Vines don't move, or wiggle for that matter! IT"S A SNAKE! "hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisssssss!" and it doesn't seem too happy either. "AHHHHHH!!!! SNAKE!" i screamed, while i threw the snake on the ground. "Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssss!" HOLY MAMA! I got to get up this tree now!
Scrambling, i madly tried to dash up the tree. Not a very smart idea in the dark. BAM! ow, there goes my shin. BLAM! OW my ankle! WHAM! MY HEAD! Kate you idiot, calm down and slowly advance my the tree! Reaffirming my grip on the trunk, i looked at my surroundings. i spotted a branch about 5 feet up from my current position. Leaping up, i barley grabbed it, my feet dangling in the air. "Hiiiiiiiiiiiiisssss! It's still after me! Quickly, i pulled my self up, and jumped up onto another big branch. Man i'm glad i took those gymnastic lessons. I continued doing this until i didn't hear the snake no more. HA HA HA HA! Take that minion of mother nature!
But i had a new problem now, i was way too high up! I hadn't noticed that i climbed up so much, i was at the top of the tree! And i HATE heights! Crap. Be cool Kate, look on the bright side. No one will ever find you up here. "ONE HUNDRED AND TWENTY! HERE I COME GUYS!" Oh finally Ray managed to count to 120! Boy is he slow. But he'll never find me here. Ha ha ha. "Hey Kate!" What in the name of Davy Jones? "Carson? What are you doing up here?! This is MY spot!" i hissed, seeing that an enemy had followed me. "Actually i was here before you Kate you you followed me." Carson giggled, while he sat like a bird on his branch just to the left of me. "I highly doubt that Carson. I got here first and you know it. Plus, how did you get up here? Your too short to climb." I hissed again. I kept a close eye out for Ray while i was at it. "Oh i have my ways Kate. heh heh, actually it was pretty easy. Now lets be quiet or else Ray will hear us" he smiled, giving me his stupid right eye wink. "I'll SHOW YOU WHAT QUIET IS!" I hollered, a little bit too loud. " I hear someone!" I heard Ray sing. Ok, now i'm listening to Carson, and keeping my mouth shut.
I looked over at Carson, he had a sly look in his eye. His purple eyes seemed to be glowing at me in the dark. Grabbing a vine (this time is was a vine, not a snake, which is good.), Carson swung downward from his branch. "Carson you idiot what are you doing?!" I whispered, looking at him while he swung down. "Going downward an upward!" i scarcely heard that. His vine shot upward into the sky, and i could see him in the moonlight. Doing a back flip, and then kicking off a tree he landed on a branch in an old tall Willow tree about 45 yards away from me. How on earth did he do that? And why? "FOUND YOU KATE! I KNOW YOUR UP THERE!" oh that's right. "DANG IT!" I growled, seeing that i have been spotted. "Come down here and help me find Carson and Tearoy." OOooooo i'll help him find something all right. His GRAVE!
Ok to fast forward a little bit, Tearoy was hiding in a mud ditch, and Carson, well we haven't found him yet. Oh never mind, i see him. "Carson! Get down from that pine tree!" I roared, feeling triumphant that i found the little brat. "K, Kate, coming!" and with that, Carson showed off again. He slid down the pine trees trunk, kicked off of it, and landed on his feet unharmed. That defys the laws of physics! His legs should be broken and mangled! "Cool move there Carson. Ok who's it now?" Tearoy applauded. Quickly i shouted "ME! I WANT TO BE IT!" And it was agreed. i turned around and pretended to count to 120 while the boys hide. When secretly, i kept my eyes oped, and saw exactly which direction they headed off to.
Carson went east, Tearoy north, and Ray south. Ah, Ray, your going to me mine now more than ever! Pulling out my mom's steak knife from my sweater, i took off the protective covering, revealing the shining blade, and chuckling to myself. Suddenly, i heard thunder. BOOM! followed by lighting. FLASH! it lit up the whole sky, and made a horrible cracking sound. Rain began to poor down in sheets. In a few seconds, i went from perfectly dry but muddy,to soaking dripping wet. Perfect. Now i will be cloaked from their vision. Heading south, with my moms knife, i began my hunt for Ray.
And, I will succeed. CRASH BOOM!
Part 4 coming up! And i'm sure you will be surprised he he he.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 1 a.m.
what do you think? 
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doglider [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 2:22 a.m.
BEST TIME FILLER that I have found on the forums. I have been reading this thread in between sending the tax collector out or whatnot and it is epic! Write on, Kate McFlower Tooter!
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 4:44 a.m.
good job this is the way i want to kill some time !!! 
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 4:56 a.m.
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!!!!!
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 5:42 a.m.
i know:D:D:D:D
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 12:02 p.m.
i love the story. you have to write more:)
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PurplePancakes [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 12:52 p.m.
please write more
i am guessing that she isnt able to hurt or kill ray even though she has the chance
i am guessing that she isnt able to hurt or kill ray even though she has the chance
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 13, 2012, 6:08 p.m.
oh you shall see, I'm going to write later on today. right now i have to get off, i've been doing homework for 2 hrs on the computer. I just cam into check on things. Thanks for liking my story guys 
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 14, 2012, 6:01 p.m.
ur doing more today may 14? i shall check later.. (im in skool now) skipping gym...
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 14, 2012, 9:37 p.m.
Yep, it's time for part 4
The rain was pouring down in bucket loads now. So hard, i could barely see where i was going myself. It stung my skin, absolutely drenched my clothes, and my hair was all out of place. It didn't help much that the wind was like a giant dryer, but instead it was blowing the rain all over me, instead of drying me. What a rip off. I could just barely grasp the knife in my hand, let alone see it. And was i heading south? I seemed to have lost track with all this stupid rain in my face! I looked down at my watch (i'm so glad i spent the extra 50 bucks earlier this week to make it water proof), wow it's getting pretty late. 9:30 pm. Drats, my mom and dad are probably home by now. ah well this is more important. I'll just tell them i was hanging out in the park, or i could tell them that.......
Crick! What was that?! Someone stepped on a stick not too far from me. Ah, it must my my foe. Better go get a closer look. Careful to be quiet, i tiptoed the best i could on the slippery, slushy mud. Rounding the corner, and sliding behind another big purple pine tree, i peeked around it to look around. CRICK! The noise is a lot louder now. Crick! What is making that noise? Straining my eyes in the darkness, i could make out a blob looking shape. Wait, that's no blob.Yes it's so not a blob! It's a dark shadow straight in front of me about 30 to 40 paces! I bet its Ray, my target. Tip toeing even lighter on my toes, and really grasping my mom's knife, i slowley advanced towards the shadow.
Now that i am closer, i can make out the shape of a person, crouching behind that big oak tree. Heh, heh, heh, i have you now! The object stirred, i paused in my tracks. But it settled again and i continued advancing. I'm now right behind it. Raising my knife to the sky, i prepared to strike. "THIS IS FOR THAT COMMENT YOUxxxxxxxxx" I yelled at the top of my lungs (sorry i used that word, but hey, i was mad at the guy so he deserved to be called that!) "what?" The object started to say, sorry its too late for apologies now Ray! Striking down with the long, sharp, knife in my hand, i clearly struck a big blow to the back of the objects neck. The object fell down to the mud.
Ha ha ha ha! I did it! I got my revenge! Pulling out Tearoys flashlight(which i managed to pick pocket from him while he wasn't looking) i turned it on to admire my doing. Wait a second, that's not Ray! oh no. Holy sweet mother of GOD! I DIDN'T! OH MY GOOD LORD WHAT HAVE I DONE?! THAT'S NOT RAY! THAT IS SO NOT RAY! I dropped my mom's knife from my hand, in shock. Despair, horror, regret, guilt, and all the other feelings i could think of. "My God, i...........i.....................i.............. CARSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAVE I DONE TO YOU!?!?!?"
Lying there on the ground, covered in crimson colored blood, lay Carson. I could clearly see the wound i gave him on the back of his neck from the knife. His eyes were closed. Lifeless. "Oh Carson, the one person that i didn't want revenge on. I...... i am a MURDERER!!" i exclaimed, trying to hold tears back from my eyes. But i couldn't. Crouching down near near his body, i started to bawl my eyes out. "WHY?!?!? WHY GOD! WHY DID I DO THIS?" The rain had cleared now, and the moon was showing again. But i didn't care. I kept on crying. it was that moment that i realized my fatal mistake. A miscalculation. Standing up i examined my location. This is the Dark Marshland, located in the Dark Forest, but directly..................................................... EAST of the center. And who did i say went EAST earlier? Carson. Went East. I cannot believe this! Why didn't i foresee it earlier? The wet wet mud, the slippery and slushiness? The Oak trees?! I MISCALCULATED!!!
"Kate? Carson? Where are you? it's time to go home now, Ray and Jason already went off. Where are you guys?" TEAROY'S VOICE! and he's coming this way..... FAST! Ok Kate calm down. Your a murderer now, so why not get rid of the body? Yeah, no evidence, means no punishment. No punishment, means Kate Mc Flower tooter is safe! Itsn't that what murderers do anyways? So grabbing a hold of Caron's bloody hand, I struggled to drag him off into the Marsh. Now wheres a good place to put a dead person? Hmm, quicksand? No too dangerous besides, marshes don't have quicksand. I think. I got it! I'll put him behind that big gigantic Oak tree, and bury him with mud. I quickly sped up my pace to a quick job, and dragged Carson, what was left of him, behind the tree.
I then proceeded to give him a proper burial. By that i meant slopping a whole bunch of mud over him. But i left his head out, just in case he needed air. Don't ask me why i thought that at the time. But that's when i did the most embarrassing thing that I have never admitted till this day. I, well I, umm, I, aw for get it. I bent over and kissed little Carson on the cheek. "I didn't mean to take it out on you Carson. I'm so sorry. Rest in Peace little guy." With those little words said, i ran off to find Tearoy, leaving that bloody knife behind, still stuck in the mud when i let it go.
"There you are Kate! I've been looking for you forever. Ray and Jason already left an hour ago, and my parents are so going to ground me cause i'm so late. Where's Carson?" Tearoy asked me. That struck a pin into my heart. "Um, he left for home already. He told me so. Only i am left. So let's just go home ok? And who cares if you get grounded? I have bigger problems!" i blurted out that lie as fast as i could. "Bigger problems? Like what?" Tearoy asked again, this time he looked confused. "Um, NOTHING! I JUST GOT TO GO TEAROY! see you tomorrow buddy!" I grinned, dashing off as fast as my legs could carry me.
"Your weird Kate! Very, very weird." i heard Tearoy yell back to me. But i didn't care. I am a murderer now. And strangely, i felt sorry for Carson, but my feeling for revenge stayed with me. I still wanted it. No Kate stop it! That's enough! You just shut up you stupid revenge feeling! I don't want you any more! I arrived at home shortly after 10:00. My parents must have thought i was in bed for they weren't up. SO i threw off my clothes, and leaped into my nice soft bed. But i wasn't settled. The thought of Carson, bloody and lifeless, was still in my mind. The thought of him, buried in mud behind a tree disturbed my. And it did. For weeks, and weeks, and weeks on end. A month had passed, and i was still uneasy. Tearoy, Ray, and Jason kept pestering me about where Carson was. But i said he moved away, and of course they bought it. For now anyways. I am going to be forever haunted my whole entire life! Forever. At least until i get into a car accident and go into a comma. But right now, i'll still be haunted.
And to think, all of this started because of Rays stupid comment. And i let it bother me to the point of revenge. Revenge that totally backfired in the end. I ended up, killing my best friend Carson, who i said was a brat. But now i take it back. I wish he was here, right now, instead of in that big place in the sky. That stupid comment was, that i wished never would have bothered me was this "Make your speech Kate Mc Flower POOTER! If you don't gas us up with your farts first!". It just proves the point that Revenge, is NOT so sweet.
The rain was pouring down in bucket loads now. So hard, i could barely see where i was going myself. It stung my skin, absolutely drenched my clothes, and my hair was all out of place. It didn't help much that the wind was like a giant dryer, but instead it was blowing the rain all over me, instead of drying me. What a rip off. I could just barely grasp the knife in my hand, let alone see it. And was i heading south? I seemed to have lost track with all this stupid rain in my face! I looked down at my watch (i'm so glad i spent the extra 50 bucks earlier this week to make it water proof), wow it's getting pretty late. 9:30 pm. Drats, my mom and dad are probably home by now. ah well this is more important. I'll just tell them i was hanging out in the park, or i could tell them that.......
Crick! What was that?! Someone stepped on a stick not too far from me. Ah, it must my my foe. Better go get a closer look. Careful to be quiet, i tiptoed the best i could on the slippery, slushy mud. Rounding the corner, and sliding behind another big purple pine tree, i peeked around it to look around. CRICK! The noise is a lot louder now. Crick! What is making that noise? Straining my eyes in the darkness, i could make out a blob looking shape. Wait, that's no blob.Yes it's so not a blob! It's a dark shadow straight in front of me about 30 to 40 paces! I bet its Ray, my target. Tip toeing even lighter on my toes, and really grasping my mom's knife, i slowley advanced towards the shadow.
Now that i am closer, i can make out the shape of a person, crouching behind that big oak tree. Heh, heh, heh, i have you now! The object stirred, i paused in my tracks. But it settled again and i continued advancing. I'm now right behind it. Raising my knife to the sky, i prepared to strike. "THIS IS FOR THAT COMMENT YOUxxxxxxxxx" I yelled at the top of my lungs (sorry i used that word, but hey, i was mad at the guy so he deserved to be called that!) "what?" The object started to say, sorry its too late for apologies now Ray! Striking down with the long, sharp, knife in my hand, i clearly struck a big blow to the back of the objects neck. The object fell down to the mud.
Ha ha ha ha! I did it! I got my revenge! Pulling out Tearoys flashlight(which i managed to pick pocket from him while he wasn't looking) i turned it on to admire my doing. Wait a second, that's not Ray! oh no. Holy sweet mother of GOD! I DIDN'T! OH MY GOOD LORD WHAT HAVE I DONE?! THAT'S NOT RAY! THAT IS SO NOT RAY! I dropped my mom's knife from my hand, in shock. Despair, horror, regret, guilt, and all the other feelings i could think of. "My God, i...........i.....................i.............. CARSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAVE I DONE TO YOU!?!?!?"
Lying there on the ground, covered in crimson colored blood, lay Carson. I could clearly see the wound i gave him on the back of his neck from the knife. His eyes were closed. Lifeless. "Oh Carson, the one person that i didn't want revenge on. I...... i am a MURDERER!!" i exclaimed, trying to hold tears back from my eyes. But i couldn't. Crouching down near near his body, i started to bawl my eyes out. "WHY?!?!? WHY GOD! WHY DID I DO THIS?" The rain had cleared now, and the moon was showing again. But i didn't care. I kept on crying. it was that moment that i realized my fatal mistake. A miscalculation. Standing up i examined my location. This is the Dark Marshland, located in the Dark Forest, but directly..................................................... EAST of the center. And who did i say went EAST earlier? Carson. Went East. I cannot believe this! Why didn't i foresee it earlier? The wet wet mud, the slippery and slushiness? The Oak trees?! I MISCALCULATED!!!
"Kate? Carson? Where are you? it's time to go home now, Ray and Jason already went off. Where are you guys?" TEAROY'S VOICE! and he's coming this way..... FAST! Ok Kate calm down. Your a murderer now, so why not get rid of the body? Yeah, no evidence, means no punishment. No punishment, means Kate Mc Flower tooter is safe! Itsn't that what murderers do anyways? So grabbing a hold of Caron's bloody hand, I struggled to drag him off into the Marsh. Now wheres a good place to put a dead person? Hmm, quicksand? No too dangerous besides, marshes don't have quicksand. I think. I got it! I'll put him behind that big gigantic Oak tree, and bury him with mud. I quickly sped up my pace to a quick job, and dragged Carson, what was left of him, behind the tree.
I then proceeded to give him a proper burial. By that i meant slopping a whole bunch of mud over him. But i left his head out, just in case he needed air. Don't ask me why i thought that at the time. But that's when i did the most embarrassing thing that I have never admitted till this day. I, well I, umm, I, aw for get it. I bent over and kissed little Carson on the cheek. "I didn't mean to take it out on you Carson. I'm so sorry. Rest in Peace little guy." With those little words said, i ran off to find Tearoy, leaving that bloody knife behind, still stuck in the mud when i let it go.
"There you are Kate! I've been looking for you forever. Ray and Jason already left an hour ago, and my parents are so going to ground me cause i'm so late. Where's Carson?" Tearoy asked me. That struck a pin into my heart. "Um, he left for home already. He told me so. Only i am left. So let's just go home ok? And who cares if you get grounded? I have bigger problems!" i blurted out that lie as fast as i could. "Bigger problems? Like what?" Tearoy asked again, this time he looked confused. "Um, NOTHING! I JUST GOT TO GO TEAROY! see you tomorrow buddy!" I grinned, dashing off as fast as my legs could carry me.
"Your weird Kate! Very, very weird." i heard Tearoy yell back to me. But i didn't care. I am a murderer now. And strangely, i felt sorry for Carson, but my feeling for revenge stayed with me. I still wanted it. No Kate stop it! That's enough! You just shut up you stupid revenge feeling! I don't want you any more! I arrived at home shortly after 10:00. My parents must have thought i was in bed for they weren't up. SO i threw off my clothes, and leaped into my nice soft bed. But i wasn't settled. The thought of Carson, bloody and lifeless, was still in my mind. The thought of him, buried in mud behind a tree disturbed my. And it did. For weeks, and weeks, and weeks on end. A month had passed, and i was still uneasy. Tearoy, Ray, and Jason kept pestering me about where Carson was. But i said he moved away, and of course they bought it. For now anyways. I am going to be forever haunted my whole entire life! Forever. At least until i get into a car accident and go into a comma. But right now, i'll still be haunted.
And to think, all of this started because of Rays stupid comment. And i let it bother me to the point of revenge. Revenge that totally backfired in the end. I ended up, killing my best friend Carson, who i said was a brat. But now i take it back. I wish he was here, right now, instead of in that big place in the sky. That stupid comment was, that i wished never would have bothered me was this "Make your speech Kate Mc Flower POOTER! If you don't gas us up with your farts first!". It just proves the point that Revenge, is NOT so sweet.