Forum: empire-en
Board: [586] Off Topic
Topic: [75789] story
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SvetovnaSila [None]
:: Aug. 14, 2012, 1:21 p.m.
heh, then I will write a story XD
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pink spartan900 [None]
:: Aug. 17, 2012, 5:05 p.m.
part 10 i think tomorrrow xx
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pink spartan900 [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 2:08 p.m.
chapter 9
after 2 weeks of constant work designing and making a better and more advanced armoury, Ryan, Sarah and Jimmy set of to find the ship, when they arrived at its destination there stood a MASSIVE ship as big as 12 olympic staduims!
"what the ****, how do we get in there then... its massive" exclaimed ryan.
"theres a door there... dumbass!" laughed sarah.
they all paused for some seconds.
"come on then we dont have all day!" shouted ryan.
they all creeped inside.
"everyone turn on invisibility mode on your nanosuits, i can see a group of hybrids"
in an instant they became invisible, they followed the map to a the core door, sarah took hold of the handle..
"5....4....3....2..........1!"
sorry so short today guys in a rush
xx
after 2 weeks of constant work designing and making a better and more advanced armoury, Ryan, Sarah and Jimmy set of to find the ship, when they arrived at its destination there stood a MASSIVE ship as big as 12 olympic staduims!
"what the ****, how do we get in there then... its massive" exclaimed ryan.
"theres a door there... dumbass!" laughed sarah.
they all paused for some seconds.
"come on then we dont have all day!" shouted ryan.
they all creeped inside.
"everyone turn on invisibility mode on your nanosuits, i can see a group of hybrids"
in an instant they became invisible, they followed the map to a the core door, sarah took hold of the handle..
"5....4....3....2..........1!"
sorry so short today guys in a rush
xx [1377490]
La Fire [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 3:03 p.m.
hey you didnt put any xxx on your last post
aw well it won't fit in if you put them there
aw well it won't fit in if you put them there
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double dol [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 3:40 p.m.
it's a good story, i am waiting for part 10 :thumbsup:
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pink spartan900 [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 4:59 p.m.
double dol wrote: »it's a good story, i am waiting for part 10 :thumbsup:
good to hear either later or tomorrow xx
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Luke Fierysword [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 5:26 p.m.
I like it...hungry for more! 
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huzaifa memon (INT1) [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 6:32 p.m.
I want more!!!
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pink spartan900 [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 7:03 p.m.
ok guys soon xxx
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double dol [None]
:: Aug. 18, 2012, 7:47 p.m.
guess i have to wait until tommorrow 
but, then :):thumbsup:
but, then :):thumbsup: [1378054]
KingMcNugget [None]
:: Aug. 19, 2012, 9:08 p.m.
Seems boring not as good as doom's story's I like his better your parts are to short.X(
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pink spartan900 [None]
:: Aug. 20, 2012, 8:56 a.m.
calm down! xx
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bobbysbro [None]
:: Aug. 20, 2012, 9:52 a.m.
nice well done
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pugsley2 [None]
:: Aug. 20, 2012, 10:21 a.m.
wOw.. two thumbs up.. want more.. 
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huzaifa memon (INT1) [None]
:: Aug. 20, 2012, 7:06 p.m.
the storys good... but as king mcnugget said its not as good as DOOOMS but its good
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the unknown [None]
:: Aug. 21, 2012, 8:25 a.m.
please continue the story, its getting good and your leaving us hanging.
it is to much time.
it is to much time.
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pugsley2 [None]
:: Aug. 23, 2012, 10:11 a.m.
the unknown wrote: »please continue the story, its getting good and your leaving us hanging.
it is to much time.
absolutely..
still waiting in vain.. 
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double dol [None]
:: Aug. 25, 2012, 9 a.m.
still no other part
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Unknown
:: Aug. 25, 2012, 9:32 a.m.
you are super right i hate the mafia game haven't tried the others
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king matt III [None]
:: Sept. 22, 2012, 3:52 p.m.
hey this is one of the many stories that have just stopped (don't be offended i have 2 stories of my own in the same situation), just wondering if you were coming back to this soon or not?