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Topic: [74672] Revenge, is not so sweet.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 11:58 p.m.
The Conclusion............
It was now daylight. Clouds were in the air, and the light seemed to be tinted blue. Snow was gently falling still as me and my friends looked at our battle field. There was blood all over the snow, wrestle marks everywhere, and scuff marks on the pine tree bark from where Carson kicked off and totally flattened Leon. I guess that's how he got him off my back. Well, i'm just glad Leon is gone now. As a group, arms over each other shoulders, and smiles on our faces, we walked (or limped) out of the Dark Forest. Together. To the nearest clinic. The clinic we limped to was the Dynito City Hospital. Everyone just calls it the clinic.
There was a very nice nurse who attended to me. she wrapped my wounds in gauze, gave me aspirin for my headache, then i had to have my left ear stitched back into place. Yeah, pretty gross. Tearoys injury's were relatively minor, other than a serious rope burn on his right ankle. Jason, well he has to get a bulet removed from his skull. And Carson was getting a patch placed over his eye, and getting an IV put int his arm. He was majorly dehydrated. The also wrapped his neck in comfy cotton gauze to treat the burns he got from Leons headlock. Other than that, we all just had bumps, bruises, and sores. If your wondering about Ray, once we were all done we went to see him. He had to stay in the hospital for a while. Tat rib injury was dead serious. the bullet pierced through his ribs, broke 3 of them and almost his his heart. I'm personally glad he is ok. "hey Kate." He said to me. I just smiled and said "hey Ray."
It was a couple days later. Every one was still healing, but i had invited them over to my house for a celebration party. I have bean dip, movies, cartoons, and they all like my pet cat. I named him Spot. He was purring in Carson's lap as we watched "Billy and Mandys Big Boogie Adventure" on dvd. It was then that i decided to talk privatley to Carson. "Carson, come here for a second." I called to him from the kitchen. Carson got up from his comfy chair, and followed me outside. "Yeah Kate?" he asked. "I just wanted to say, thank you for saving my life. back there." I smiled, giving him a playful punch in his shoulder. He blushed "anytime Kate. I just couldn't let him hurt you." I grinned. Carson was so honest, and courageous. : Yeah but why were your eyes blue?" I asked, while taking a drink of my lemonade that i brought outside. "that's my little secret Kate." Carson winked. Well that wasn't the answer i was expecting. I guess Carson will always be, well different. "come on Kate, lets go back in." Carson smiled, his purple eyes twinkling at me, and his multicolored hair waving in the breeze. That was good enough for me.
All's well that ends well. Ray asked me out to the prom, i accepted. Carson, Tearoy, Jason and me have a closer friendship tie. Life seemed good now. At least that's what i hoped. And that is why Revenge, is not, so sweet.
Epilogue,
Meanwhile down in the Dark Forest, deep down in Darkness Canyon, a pair of red eyes glowed. The clouds over the mysterious forest turned black and grey. And a creepy, evil voice simply said "I will have, My, REVENGE!"
The End?
It was now daylight. Clouds were in the air, and the light seemed to be tinted blue. Snow was gently falling still as me and my friends looked at our battle field. There was blood all over the snow, wrestle marks everywhere, and scuff marks on the pine tree bark from where Carson kicked off and totally flattened Leon. I guess that's how he got him off my back. Well, i'm just glad Leon is gone now. As a group, arms over each other shoulders, and smiles on our faces, we walked (or limped) out of the Dark Forest. Together. To the nearest clinic. The clinic we limped to was the Dynito City Hospital. Everyone just calls it the clinic.
There was a very nice nurse who attended to me. she wrapped my wounds in gauze, gave me aspirin for my headache, then i had to have my left ear stitched back into place. Yeah, pretty gross. Tearoys injury's were relatively minor, other than a serious rope burn on his right ankle. Jason, well he has to get a bulet removed from his skull. And Carson was getting a patch placed over his eye, and getting an IV put int his arm. He was majorly dehydrated. The also wrapped his neck in comfy cotton gauze to treat the burns he got from Leons headlock. Other than that, we all just had bumps, bruises, and sores. If your wondering about Ray, once we were all done we went to see him. He had to stay in the hospital for a while. Tat rib injury was dead serious. the bullet pierced through his ribs, broke 3 of them and almost his his heart. I'm personally glad he is ok. "hey Kate." He said to me. I just smiled and said "hey Ray."
It was a couple days later. Every one was still healing, but i had invited them over to my house for a celebration party. I have bean dip, movies, cartoons, and they all like my pet cat. I named him Spot. He was purring in Carson's lap as we watched "Billy and Mandys Big Boogie Adventure" on dvd. It was then that i decided to talk privatley to Carson. "Carson, come here for a second." I called to him from the kitchen. Carson got up from his comfy chair, and followed me outside. "Yeah Kate?" he asked. "I just wanted to say, thank you for saving my life. back there." I smiled, giving him a playful punch in his shoulder. He blushed "anytime Kate. I just couldn't let him hurt you." I grinned. Carson was so honest, and courageous. : Yeah but why were your eyes blue?" I asked, while taking a drink of my lemonade that i brought outside. "that's my little secret Kate." Carson winked. Well that wasn't the answer i was expecting. I guess Carson will always be, well different. "come on Kate, lets go back in." Carson smiled, his purple eyes twinkling at me, and his multicolored hair waving in the breeze. That was good enough for me.
All's well that ends well. Ray asked me out to the prom, i accepted. Carson, Tearoy, Jason and me have a closer friendship tie. Life seemed good now. At least that's what i hoped. And that is why Revenge, is not, so sweet.
Epilogue,
Meanwhile down in the Dark Forest, deep down in Darkness Canyon, a pair of red eyes glowed. The clouds over the mysterious forest turned black and grey. And a creepy, evil voice simply said "I will have, My, REVENGE!"
The End?
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 12:03 a.m.
Taaaaaaaaaaaa Daaaaaa! it is finished! I worked a total of 3 hours typing all 3 parts. Part 10, 11 , and part 12 aka the conclusion. I hope you guys enjoyed that! I'll start another story soon sometime. Man, that was fun writing it. 
all the characters will return in another story, that i will write later on. Thanks for reading!
:P
all the characters will return in another story, that i will write later on. Thanks for reading!
:P [1358551]
doglider [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 12:07 a.m.
Please start writing that new story soon and provide a link!
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Unknown
:: May 24, 2012, 12:31 a.m.
Well you killed Leon in self defense, so that is legal
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 2:25 a.m.
yes it is.
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nano121 [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 3:40 a.m.
King Dooooooom wrote: »The Conclusion............
"I will have, My, REVENGE!"
The End?
i loved the end
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 4:25 a.m.
Omg i was just with the face in the monitor !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow i think i know why carson had blue eyes and why he was taller !!! He had a ,,pharaoh" spirit in him !!!
i just cant wait for the next story !!!!
8:D:thumbsup:
i just cant wait for the next story !!!!
8:D:thumbsup:
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leah ash [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 6:22 a.m.
That was great king doom bravo! Lol xxxx
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PurplePancakes [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 9:09 a.m.
nice
wish it kept on going but there is nothing else to talk about
like when they fight, that was really interesting
wish it kept on going but there is nothing else to talk about
like when they fight, that was really interesting
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 11:29 a.m.
love the story:)
great work.
great work.
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 12:16 p.m.
what's the next story's title ?
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Aldreni-Warrior [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 12:31 p.m.
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The Part:4 is really good
The Part:4 is really good
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 1:42 p.m.
thanks
Revenge, Cry for Mercy will be the next one.
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what's the next story's title ?
Revenge, Cry for Mercy will be the next one.
Posts merged due to double posting, please READ the board rules - Bunzy
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 2:05 p.m.
Wow cool i love the title !!!
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KingMcNugget [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 3:04 p.m.
albastrel6 wrote: »Omg i was just with the face in the monitor !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow i think i know why carson had blue eyes and why he was taller !!! He had a ,,pharaoh" spirit in him !!!
i just cant wait for the next story !!!!
8:D:thumbsup:
I think your right albastrel6 that sounds exactly right!!! Hmmmmmmm suspicious!
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 3:23 p.m.
lolololololololol
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Baby Grape [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 5:20 p.m.
this is the best story i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thx :):):):):):):)
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 24, 2012, 8:49 p.m.
thanks
ha ha ha ha ha well Carson doesn't look like Yugi. Carsons hair is you know, flat and shaggy with the bottom if it being blond, on top of that is blue, then comes the purple. But good observation skills albastrel!
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ha ha ha ha ha well Carson doesn't look like Yugi. Carsons hair is you know, flat and shaggy with the bottom if it being blond, on top of that is blue, then comes the purple. But good observation skills albastrel!
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 25, 2012, 4:59 p.m.
know what carson description looks like YUGI !!!! but the eyes ok i will still have to think oh and today i am watching pyramids of light WITH POPCORN WOOOOOOOOHOOOOOO!!! oh and king mccnugget you can watch the movie on this site it is full no parts or something and it is in english but it has romainian subtitles so it is your choice here is the link :
http://www.deseneanime.ro/tag/yu-gi-oh-all-
episodes/
.
AS YOU CAN SEE JUST TWO PARTS HOPE YOU LIKE IT ( SRY FOR SUBTITLES )
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blahblahblah rules !!!
Oh my god !!!!!!!!!!111 carson is yami i saw now ( yami from [email protected] monster) sry for bad word omg
thx and your good description made me found out
and king dooooooom you can enter mt alliance well it isnt mine but i sended you an invitation
http://www.deseneanime.ro/tag/yu-gi-oh-all-
episodes/
.
AS YOU CAN SEE JUST TWO PARTS HOPE YOU LIKE IT ( SRY FOR SUBTITLES )
Posts merged due to double posting, please READ the board rules - Bunzy
blahblahblah rules !!!
Oh my god !!!!!!!!!!111 carson is yami i saw now ( yami from [email protected] monster) sry for bad word omg
thx and your good description made me found out
and king dooooooom you can enter mt alliance well it isnt mine but i sended you an invitation
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 25, 2012, 10:06 p.m.
ok, i did that. and hopefully Revenge Cry for Mercy will be as good as this one, i'm working on part 2 for later on.