Forum: empire-en
Board: [586] Off Topic
Topic: [74672] Revenge, is not so sweet.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 22, 2012, 9:47 p.m.
time for Part 9……………
Still crouching down behind the stalagmite, i tried to remain calm and silent. But those eyes, Leons eyes, felt like they were still there; giving me that angry, burning stare. I decided to take another look but nothing was there, just the darkness of the cave. Phew, i'm ok. i'm fine, and safe. "Found you Kate!" What the? DARN IT!! It's Jason. Curses, i have been caught. "Dang nabbit Jason! How did you find me?" I hollered, jumping out from behind the stalagmite. "I heard a sigh in here, and i knew it was yours because you always sigh heavily when your worried about something." Jason laughed, patting me on the shoulder. I smiled, Jason always knows how to make me feel better. "Come on Kate, you can help me find the others. And why did you sigh anyways?" Jason grinned, placing his hand on my shoulder. "oh nothing. I just was holding my breath so that it would be silent and i wouldn't get caught. I should have figured nothing would get passed you though. Plus, i couldn't hold the air in any longer." I explained.
"k, Kate. Now lets go find the others!" Jason roared, taking off into the darkness. I dashed off after him. Finding the others was pretty easy anyway. Tearoy was ducking behind some old cat tails in a dried up pond. Ray was just lying down on the ground, trying to camouflage with it, the moron. Carson, well that monkey boy was hanging upside down by his legs in a weeping willow tree. Lastly, we found that stalker, Leon, behind the very corner of the old abandoned bear cave that i hid in moments ago. Now a new feeling of creepiness hit me. He was right there the whole time? Oh my god that is so weird. "all right, I'll be it this time." Tearoy suddenly chipped in, after everyone was gathered again at the center of the Dark Forest. Geez, every time i want to be it, someone always ruins it. Plus Tearoy interrupted by thoughts about Leon. I shouldn't worry too much about that, but i just can't help it. I do not like being stalked. It's disturbing, and well dumb. I'm not that good looking anyway. "Kate hurry up! Tearoy's counting!" Carson whispered into my ear, making me jump out of my sneakers. "Oh, uh well let's go then!" I snarled, once again running off into the Dark Forest with Carson.
Sheesh bossy bossy bossy. I already knew that Tearoy was indeed counting. Ok i didn't but who cares? I am not going to wait until it's my turn to be It anymore! I am going to take my revenge on Ray now! The only problem is, which way did he go? He couldn't have gone far. As i was running, i noticed that Carson wasn't in front of me anymore. Well where did he go? I didn't hear him jump or anything, and i knew his legs were too short to run ahead of me. Ah well doesn't matter. I'm after Ray not Carson. switching directions, i headed north east to look for Ray.
Turns out, there was a kink in my plan again. Out of nowhere it started to rain. Hard. Great, there was not supposed to be any rain today. Well like i mentioned before it is the start of Rain Season. But the one time when i didn't want any rain, it rains. Now i can't possibly get a clear shot with my new pistol without misfiring and hitting someone else. After all i am no sniper or professional guns man. GRRRRRR! The rain was pouring like it did that night when i first tried to get my revenge. And frankly i didn't like it. I was sopping wet to the bone already, and i could barely see 3 feet in front of my face. "120! Here i some guys!" oh crap. Tearoys ready. Quickly leaping behind a big pine tree trunk, i rearranged myself so i wouldn't be seen. Like i would be seen anyways with all this blasted rain. And it didn't help that it was already freezing cold as well. Hopefully i won't get hypothermia. But i sure hope Ray gets it.
As i was crouching behind the trunk trying to get warm, i heard a weird moaning sound coming from the south east. "Uuuuuuugghhh." It almost sounds like Ray. so being the curious individual that i am, i got up from my hiding spot to investigate. Quietly tip toeing my way around sopping wet bushes and shrubs, i made my way to the south east direction. I didn't have to go very far. I only took 67 paces before i stepped on something soft and squishy. And i wasn't the mud. Whipping out my flashlight i turned it on to see what i stepped on. Hopefully it isn't dog or animal crap. as usual, i was wrong, but right about an earlier prediction. It was Ray that i had stepped on! He didn't look so good. Waving the light around and over him i discovered he was a bullet wound in his rib cage! And it wasn't from my gun either, trust me with this amount of rain i would not make a good shooter. But someone obviously was.
Wait a second, Ray is hurt! This will make the perfect opportunity to finish him off! Pulling out my silent pistol gun, i loaded the ammo into it and pointed it at point blank range on the side of Rays head. I touched the pistol to it, and placed my finger on the trigger. Tightening my grip on the trigger, i prepared to pull it. Say good bye Ray! Just as I was about to pull the trigger and was going to end Rays life, Ray let out the most pitiful and painful moan i have ever heard. It was a sad, exasperating, dry moan. "Uuuuuuuuggghhhh!!!" Then he coughed up some blood. A pang of guilt, and resentment went through me at that moment. what are you doing Kate, shake it off and pull the trigger! This is your moment of triumph! This is the moment where you can finally get your revenge, and it will be done and you'll never have to see Ray again. He'll be better off anyways.
Reaffirming my grip on the trigger, i prepared to pull it again. Time to die! But looking down at Rays condition, and seeing him suffer and cough up blood like that, i just couldn't do it! I can't! It's not right and inhumane! Kate you are so going to regret this. Pull the trigger, pull the trigger, pull the trigger! NO! I WILL NOT! Shut up you evil thoughts! Dropping my pistol, and the my only shot at a successful revenge on Ray, i pulled out Rays reflector patch from his pant pocket; Holding my flashlight up to it, i shined a big gigantic reflect beam out into the night. And i just waved it around like crazy in all directions, hoping Tearoy or the others would catch sight of it. While i was doing so i grabbed my gun off the ground and put it into my pocket. I didn't want the others to think i did this to Ray when i did not. Why was i doing this? I have no idea but it seemed like the right thing to do.
In a couple of minutes, Tearoy was on the scene, and boy was he shocked. "How in the world did this happen Kate?!" He shouted at me. "i honestly have no idea Tea, i was hiding over there behind that tree when i heard a moan. I walked about 67 paces and boom i stumbled across him. it looks like a bullet wound. But i do not know where he got it from" i spilled the beans, even though i have a slight suspicion on who could have done it. "Well this is just great Kate. Now we have to call it quits. But the only problem is i have no idea where Jason, Carson, or Leon are. I looked everywhere but i found nothing. Tearoy sighed, carefully picking up Ray. Ray moaned when Tearoy did this, which made me flinch. But i was also getting worried. Jason and Carson were missing, and i have a hunch Leon might have something to do with it. I only know now that i have given up the chance to get revenge on ray. I was right there, and i could have done it but i didn't. I just think i have a bigger threat to deal with now.
"I'm going to look for Jason, Carson, and Leon. You take Ray out of here and to the nearest clinic, then come back for me ok?" I instructed Tearoy. Tearoy nodded in agreement, and we both went our separate ways. Tearoy with Ray on his back, and me with my gun.
Still crouching down behind the stalagmite, i tried to remain calm and silent. But those eyes, Leons eyes, felt like they were still there; giving me that angry, burning stare. I decided to take another look but nothing was there, just the darkness of the cave. Phew, i'm ok. i'm fine, and safe. "Found you Kate!" What the? DARN IT!! It's Jason. Curses, i have been caught. "Dang nabbit Jason! How did you find me?" I hollered, jumping out from behind the stalagmite. "I heard a sigh in here, and i knew it was yours because you always sigh heavily when your worried about something." Jason laughed, patting me on the shoulder. I smiled, Jason always knows how to make me feel better. "Come on Kate, you can help me find the others. And why did you sigh anyways?" Jason grinned, placing his hand on my shoulder. "oh nothing. I just was holding my breath so that it would be silent and i wouldn't get caught. I should have figured nothing would get passed you though. Plus, i couldn't hold the air in any longer." I explained.
"k, Kate. Now lets go find the others!" Jason roared, taking off into the darkness. I dashed off after him. Finding the others was pretty easy anyway. Tearoy was ducking behind some old cat tails in a dried up pond. Ray was just lying down on the ground, trying to camouflage with it, the moron. Carson, well that monkey boy was hanging upside down by his legs in a weeping willow tree. Lastly, we found that stalker, Leon, behind the very corner of the old abandoned bear cave that i hid in moments ago. Now a new feeling of creepiness hit me. He was right there the whole time? Oh my god that is so weird. "all right, I'll be it this time." Tearoy suddenly chipped in, after everyone was gathered again at the center of the Dark Forest. Geez, every time i want to be it, someone always ruins it. Plus Tearoy interrupted by thoughts about Leon. I shouldn't worry too much about that, but i just can't help it. I do not like being stalked. It's disturbing, and well dumb. I'm not that good looking anyway. "Kate hurry up! Tearoy's counting!" Carson whispered into my ear, making me jump out of my sneakers. "Oh, uh well let's go then!" I snarled, once again running off into the Dark Forest with Carson.
Sheesh bossy bossy bossy. I already knew that Tearoy was indeed counting. Ok i didn't but who cares? I am not going to wait until it's my turn to be It anymore! I am going to take my revenge on Ray now! The only problem is, which way did he go? He couldn't have gone far. As i was running, i noticed that Carson wasn't in front of me anymore. Well where did he go? I didn't hear him jump or anything, and i knew his legs were too short to run ahead of me. Ah well doesn't matter. I'm after Ray not Carson. switching directions, i headed north east to look for Ray.
Turns out, there was a kink in my plan again. Out of nowhere it started to rain. Hard. Great, there was not supposed to be any rain today. Well like i mentioned before it is the start of Rain Season. But the one time when i didn't want any rain, it rains. Now i can't possibly get a clear shot with my new pistol without misfiring and hitting someone else. After all i am no sniper or professional guns man. GRRRRRR! The rain was pouring like it did that night when i first tried to get my revenge. And frankly i didn't like it. I was sopping wet to the bone already, and i could barely see 3 feet in front of my face. "120! Here i some guys!" oh crap. Tearoys ready. Quickly leaping behind a big pine tree trunk, i rearranged myself so i wouldn't be seen. Like i would be seen anyways with all this blasted rain. And it didn't help that it was already freezing cold as well. Hopefully i won't get hypothermia. But i sure hope Ray gets it.
As i was crouching behind the trunk trying to get warm, i heard a weird moaning sound coming from the south east. "Uuuuuuugghhh." It almost sounds like Ray. so being the curious individual that i am, i got up from my hiding spot to investigate. Quietly tip toeing my way around sopping wet bushes and shrubs, i made my way to the south east direction. I didn't have to go very far. I only took 67 paces before i stepped on something soft and squishy. And i wasn't the mud. Whipping out my flashlight i turned it on to see what i stepped on. Hopefully it isn't dog or animal crap. as usual, i was wrong, but right about an earlier prediction. It was Ray that i had stepped on! He didn't look so good. Waving the light around and over him i discovered he was a bullet wound in his rib cage! And it wasn't from my gun either, trust me with this amount of rain i would not make a good shooter. But someone obviously was.
Wait a second, Ray is hurt! This will make the perfect opportunity to finish him off! Pulling out my silent pistol gun, i loaded the ammo into it and pointed it at point blank range on the side of Rays head. I touched the pistol to it, and placed my finger on the trigger. Tightening my grip on the trigger, i prepared to pull it. Say good bye Ray! Just as I was about to pull the trigger and was going to end Rays life, Ray let out the most pitiful and painful moan i have ever heard. It was a sad, exasperating, dry moan. "Uuuuuuuuggghhhh!!!" Then he coughed up some blood. A pang of guilt, and resentment went through me at that moment. what are you doing Kate, shake it off and pull the trigger! This is your moment of triumph! This is the moment where you can finally get your revenge, and it will be done and you'll never have to see Ray again. He'll be better off anyways.
Reaffirming my grip on the trigger, i prepared to pull it again. Time to die! But looking down at Rays condition, and seeing him suffer and cough up blood like that, i just couldn't do it! I can't! It's not right and inhumane! Kate you are so going to regret this. Pull the trigger, pull the trigger, pull the trigger! NO! I WILL NOT! Shut up you evil thoughts! Dropping my pistol, and the my only shot at a successful revenge on Ray, i pulled out Rays reflector patch from his pant pocket; Holding my flashlight up to it, i shined a big gigantic reflect beam out into the night. And i just waved it around like crazy in all directions, hoping Tearoy or the others would catch sight of it. While i was doing so i grabbed my gun off the ground and put it into my pocket. I didn't want the others to think i did this to Ray when i did not. Why was i doing this? I have no idea but it seemed like the right thing to do.
In a couple of minutes, Tearoy was on the scene, and boy was he shocked. "How in the world did this happen Kate?!" He shouted at me. "i honestly have no idea Tea, i was hiding over there behind that tree when i heard a moan. I walked about 67 paces and boom i stumbled across him. it looks like a bullet wound. But i do not know where he got it from" i spilled the beans, even though i have a slight suspicion on who could have done it. "Well this is just great Kate. Now we have to call it quits. But the only problem is i have no idea where Jason, Carson, or Leon are. I looked everywhere but i found nothing. Tearoy sighed, carefully picking up Ray. Ray moaned when Tearoy did this, which made me flinch. But i was also getting worried. Jason and Carson were missing, and i have a hunch Leon might have something to do with it. I only know now that i have given up the chance to get revenge on ray. I was right there, and i could have done it but i didn't. I just think i have a bigger threat to deal with now.
"I'm going to look for Jason, Carson, and Leon. You take Ray out of here and to the nearest clinic, then come back for me ok?" I instructed Tearoy. Tearoy nodded in agreement, and we both went our separate ways. Tearoy with Ray on his back, and me with my gun.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 22, 2012, 9:48 p.m.
how's that for a plot twist? >=) What did you think? Part 10 arriving next. 
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doglider [None]
:: May 22, 2012, 11:31 p.m.
Write it write it write it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 12:17 a.m.
write more. soon:)
why do u hilight revenge like that?
why do u hilight revenge like that?
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 2:07 a.m.
well i worked it out to where i can write one part a day in my spare time. It takes me a while to write it, about an hour or so. I'm just glad that people like it, and after i finish up this story I'll get to writing another one. But part 10 will be coming up sometime tomorrow.and i'll tell why i wrote about revenge when the story is finished. Which won't be for a while i think. One thing at a time.
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nano121 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 2:51 a.m.
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 4:04 a.m.
COME ON ALREADY!! Write it!!. I think leon or tearoy injured ray! !! !
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 4:13 a.m.
WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!! leon is a demon !!! I KNEW THAT LEON WOULD KILL RAy but carson and jason i just cant wait for the next part ( 10)
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 10:37 a.m.
albastrel6 wrote: »WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!! leon is a demon !!! I KNEW THAT LEON WOULD KILL RAy but carson and jason i just cant wait for the next part ( 10)
totally agree
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PurplePancakes [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 12:41 p.m.
i was right, he did try to kill ray
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nano121 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 3:43 p.m.
are we all sure he did it.....
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 3:46 p.m.
yep we are !!!!
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nano121 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 3:57 p.m.
im predicting its ote him it would be to abvious
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 5:10 p.m.
you are preblablabla and some blablablabla
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 6:08 p.m.
Hey Doooooooom when's part 10 ? How much more time XD Can't wait!
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 9:09 p.m.
how much longer must we wait for part 10?
hurry hurry hurry
hurry hurry hurry
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leah ash [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 9:13 p.m.
I soooo love this babee xxxxx
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 10:24 p.m.
uh, heh heh PART 10
I was running like a mad women going for some shopping deals in the mall through the Dark Forest. The rain had turned to snow, and the wet slippery mud was starting to freeze. But it was still wet. I gripped my pistol with all my might, and looking every which way this way and that way to find out where Jason and Carson were. I had a terrible feeling of dread that Leon must have done something to them. that stalker. He was the one who must have shot Ray in his rib, for that was clearly a gun wound. I don't know but rays condidtion was surely bad since he was coughing up blood. Boy do i feel bad for Tearoy, he has to carry that coughing puking mess all the way back to downtown Dynito to the clinic. And the clinic was a long way too, but knowing how fast Tearoy runs, and how long and tall he is, he should be there in about 10 minutes.
Suddenly I heard something wiz past my left ear. WHOOSH! CRAP! It's was a bullet, cause it made a PING sound on the pine tree in front of me. Quickly taking action, i ducked behind another big tree stump. I'm glad the Dark Forest i abundant with them. Gripping my own gun, i carefully took a peek around the stump. No one was there. But i bet the guy who tried to shoot me was a hunter. Oh wait a second, there are barely any game in the Dark Forest, plus the hunters in town are weenies. They would be too scared to come all the way out here to hunt. They would only get owls anyways. Huh, must have been a bug. But i was so sure it was a bullet. Carelessly standing up, i decided to move on. What a bad move. SMACK! "GAH!" i screamed, realizing that i had been hit in the ear with something. That hit made me automatically fall to the ground. THUD! Geez, boy do i have poor reaction time. And a lack of good judgement to go along with it. Holding my hand up to my left ear, i felt some liquid on it. That could only mean one thing, i was bleeding. God dang it! Putting my hand back down on my pants i wiped it off. Wait a second, i felt something else up there. Once again putting my hand back up to my left ear, i felt another object in it. OW! it hurts to touch it! Ok Kate, slowly pull that object, whatever it is, out of your ear.
Soon i managed to painfully pull the obstruction out from behind my ear. I dared not to turn my flashlight on, fearing that the person who shot me would be there. But from what i could make out in the bloody darkness, i found out that the object was an oval round shape. Of course Kate you dummy. what come's out of guns? Bullets come out of guns. That bastard shot me in the ear! I better keep this for evidence. Just then, another shot whooshed by me, this time right above my head. Splinters of wood cam off of the tree in front of the stump i was hiding behind. That it, who is trying to shoot me like a wild animal?! Taking another look i managed to make something else out in the darkness. I squinted my eye to reveal the shape of a man. But not one man. Two MEN! And they were coming my way!
Doing an army crawl on my belly, i crawled my way behind the pine tree that was in front of me. I stood up, the i once again gripped my gun in my hand. The men were coming closer, but as they were i realized that one of the men seemed to be stumbling along with the taller man. I better keep dead quiet now, or else they might hear me. Or worse, see me! Crunch, crunch, crunch went the sound of feet. The feet slowly made their way to the stump i was just at. Squinting my eyes again through the darkness and the now falling snow, i could now see the men more clearly. The taller man was inspecting the stump. He seemed to be wearing a jacket.the littler man was struggling, and seemed to be kicking and grunting. Why was he struggling? Wait a second. I strained my eyes with all my will, hoping to make even more detail out to why the small one was struggling.
The fuzzy black shadows were becoming clear now, and not i can defintly identify the men. CLICK! The tall man turned on his flash light to get a closer inspection of the stump. That was a fatal mistake, for he just reveled his identity to me. It was LEON! And i should have guessed who the smaller one was; it was CARSON! And he was in trouble! But i'm going to be in even worse trouble if i let that light shine on me. It's time to climb. Reaching my hand carefully up to the nearest branch above me, i quietly pulled myself up to it. Then i reached for the one above the branch i was on. I did this until i was right above Leon and Carson. I'm surprised that pine needles didn't rain down, and that bozo didn't hear me climbing up the tree. Of course it is a huge pine tree with an enormous trunk so yeah that probably muted some of the noise. Plus my sneakers have super grip on the soles.
"She's not here! But i clearly see the evidence that i successfully shot her. There is blood all over this stump, and a trail leads over to that pine tree." Leon laughed evilly. Ok, i am really glad i climber up the tree. Hopefully there's no blood dripping down. "Let me go Leon!" Carson gasped, once again thrashing out with his little legs. "Quiet you fool! I have you hostage for a reason. I won't let you go for nothing And so help me if you kick me with your legs again, i'll shoot you right here! Right now!" Leon threatened, pointing a GUN to Carsons head! A gun! I knew he bought something in the Guns for Fun store! I was also right about the kind, for the gun he had was the Silent Master 4000! No wonder i couldn't hear the shots he fired. "i don't understand what you want with Kate." Carson growled, struggling in Leon's tight grip but careful not to thrash his legs out again; though i could tell he really wanted to.
"You don't understand twerp. I want revenge on her for calling me that name! Just because my last name is Neon doesn't mean that i am the Neon lights! Leon Neon are your lights too bright? Ha! Well she made a really big mistake. And i need you to lure her here so i can subdue her got it? I know she fancy's you Carson." Leon wickedly explained, giving Carson an extra squeeze around his neck, making him gasp for air. Hmm, well this seems familiar. Wait a minute, it is so familiar to me right now. I reacted in a similar way when Ray called me a name. For land sakes i can't remember what he called me but i remember how i reacted. I wanted to kill him and have revenge. But now i realized that revenge is a blood thirsty monster. It will eat you up and nag at your soul till you get it.
I learned however, to forgive so i conquered my inner darkness for revenge. Leon however, was just beginning. And he had kidnapped Carson and totally blew his plan for i heard the whole thing. I remained in the tree though, i dared not to move or stir for Leon remained there, spewing out the rest of the things he did. " Oh Carson you are such a fool. You fell right into my trap when i shot Jason to distract you so i could use you as bait for my genius plan!" Leon lamented. Wow he is a blow hard. He said he shot Jason too? Aw man, i got to find him! Then I'll save Carson.
Carson just growled and bared his teeth. That to me looked cute.I just love the way Carson tries to defend himself. "You just leave Kate alone! I will not let you hurt her for your own selfish personal gain!" Carson defended again thrashing about with his legs. "Stop squirming twerp!" Leon shouted, loading his gun with a click click, and getting a even tighter grip around Carsons throat. With that, Leon dragged Carson away back into the Dark Forest, turning off his flash light in the process. Phew, he didn't see me. At least i hope not. Suddenly something grabbed my leg and a voice whispered harshly "FOUND YOU!" "OH MY GOD!" I yelled hoping that voice didn't belong to Leon!
PART 10I was running like a mad women going for some shopping deals in the mall through the Dark Forest. The rain had turned to snow, and the wet slippery mud was starting to freeze. But it was still wet. I gripped my pistol with all my might, and looking every which way this way and that way to find out where Jason and Carson were. I had a terrible feeling of dread that Leon must have done something to them. that stalker. He was the one who must have shot Ray in his rib, for that was clearly a gun wound. I don't know but rays condidtion was surely bad since he was coughing up blood. Boy do i feel bad for Tearoy, he has to carry that coughing puking mess all the way back to downtown Dynito to the clinic. And the clinic was a long way too, but knowing how fast Tearoy runs, and how long and tall he is, he should be there in about 10 minutes.
Suddenly I heard something wiz past my left ear. WHOOSH! CRAP! It's was a bullet, cause it made a PING sound on the pine tree in front of me. Quickly taking action, i ducked behind another big tree stump. I'm glad the Dark Forest i abundant with them. Gripping my own gun, i carefully took a peek around the stump. No one was there. But i bet the guy who tried to shoot me was a hunter. Oh wait a second, there are barely any game in the Dark Forest, plus the hunters in town are weenies. They would be too scared to come all the way out here to hunt. They would only get owls anyways. Huh, must have been a bug. But i was so sure it was a bullet. Carelessly standing up, i decided to move on. What a bad move. SMACK! "GAH!" i screamed, realizing that i had been hit in the ear with something. That hit made me automatically fall to the ground. THUD! Geez, boy do i have poor reaction time. And a lack of good judgement to go along with it. Holding my hand up to my left ear, i felt some liquid on it. That could only mean one thing, i was bleeding. God dang it! Putting my hand back down on my pants i wiped it off. Wait a second, i felt something else up there. Once again putting my hand back up to my left ear, i felt another object in it. OW! it hurts to touch it! Ok Kate, slowly pull that object, whatever it is, out of your ear.
Soon i managed to painfully pull the obstruction out from behind my ear. I dared not to turn my flashlight on, fearing that the person who shot me would be there. But from what i could make out in the bloody darkness, i found out that the object was an oval round shape. Of course Kate you dummy. what come's out of guns? Bullets come out of guns. That bastard shot me in the ear! I better keep this for evidence. Just then, another shot whooshed by me, this time right above my head. Splinters of wood cam off of the tree in front of the stump i was hiding behind. That it, who is trying to shoot me like a wild animal?! Taking another look i managed to make something else out in the darkness. I squinted my eye to reveal the shape of a man. But not one man. Two MEN! And they were coming my way!
Doing an army crawl on my belly, i crawled my way behind the pine tree that was in front of me. I stood up, the i once again gripped my gun in my hand. The men were coming closer, but as they were i realized that one of the men seemed to be stumbling along with the taller man. I better keep dead quiet now, or else they might hear me. Or worse, see me! Crunch, crunch, crunch went the sound of feet. The feet slowly made their way to the stump i was just at. Squinting my eyes again through the darkness and the now falling snow, i could now see the men more clearly. The taller man was inspecting the stump. He seemed to be wearing a jacket.the littler man was struggling, and seemed to be kicking and grunting. Why was he struggling? Wait a second. I strained my eyes with all my will, hoping to make even more detail out to why the small one was struggling.
The fuzzy black shadows were becoming clear now, and not i can defintly identify the men. CLICK! The tall man turned on his flash light to get a closer inspection of the stump. That was a fatal mistake, for he just reveled his identity to me. It was LEON! And i should have guessed who the smaller one was; it was CARSON! And he was in trouble! But i'm going to be in even worse trouble if i let that light shine on me. It's time to climb. Reaching my hand carefully up to the nearest branch above me, i quietly pulled myself up to it. Then i reached for the one above the branch i was on. I did this until i was right above Leon and Carson. I'm surprised that pine needles didn't rain down, and that bozo didn't hear me climbing up the tree. Of course it is a huge pine tree with an enormous trunk so yeah that probably muted some of the noise. Plus my sneakers have super grip on the soles.
"She's not here! But i clearly see the evidence that i successfully shot her. There is blood all over this stump, and a trail leads over to that pine tree." Leon laughed evilly. Ok, i am really glad i climber up the tree. Hopefully there's no blood dripping down. "Let me go Leon!" Carson gasped, once again thrashing out with his little legs. "Quiet you fool! I have you hostage for a reason. I won't let you go for nothing And so help me if you kick me with your legs again, i'll shoot you right here! Right now!" Leon threatened, pointing a GUN to Carsons head! A gun! I knew he bought something in the Guns for Fun store! I was also right about the kind, for the gun he had was the Silent Master 4000! No wonder i couldn't hear the shots he fired. "i don't understand what you want with Kate." Carson growled, struggling in Leon's tight grip but careful not to thrash his legs out again; though i could tell he really wanted to.
"You don't understand twerp. I want revenge on her for calling me that name! Just because my last name is Neon doesn't mean that i am the Neon lights! Leon Neon are your lights too bright? Ha! Well she made a really big mistake. And i need you to lure her here so i can subdue her got it? I know she fancy's you Carson." Leon wickedly explained, giving Carson an extra squeeze around his neck, making him gasp for air. Hmm, well this seems familiar. Wait a minute, it is so familiar to me right now. I reacted in a similar way when Ray called me a name. For land sakes i can't remember what he called me but i remember how i reacted. I wanted to kill him and have revenge. But now i realized that revenge is a blood thirsty monster. It will eat you up and nag at your soul till you get it.
I learned however, to forgive so i conquered my inner darkness for revenge. Leon however, was just beginning. And he had kidnapped Carson and totally blew his plan for i heard the whole thing. I remained in the tree though, i dared not to move or stir for Leon remained there, spewing out the rest of the things he did. " Oh Carson you are such a fool. You fell right into my trap when i shot Jason to distract you so i could use you as bait for my genius plan!" Leon lamented. Wow he is a blow hard. He said he shot Jason too? Aw man, i got to find him! Then I'll save Carson.
Carson just growled and bared his teeth. That to me looked cute.I just love the way Carson tries to defend himself. "You just leave Kate alone! I will not let you hurt her for your own selfish personal gain!" Carson defended again thrashing about with his legs. "Stop squirming twerp!" Leon shouted, loading his gun with a click click, and getting a even tighter grip around Carsons throat. With that, Leon dragged Carson away back into the Dark Forest, turning off his flash light in the process. Phew, he didn't see me. At least i hope not. Suddenly something grabbed my leg and a voice whispered harshly "FOUND YOU!" "OH MY GOD!" I yelled hoping that voice didn't belong to Leon!
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 11:28 p.m.
alright guys, i'm going to give you a double whammy, Part 11.................
"let go of my foot! Let go of my foot! Let go of my foot!" I whimpered, shaking my foot like a rabid squirrel to try to shake the purser off. "Calm down Kate! It's me Tearoy!" Oh thank Poseidon! It's not Leon! "Tearoy you ding a ling! You scared me to death!" i growled, letting the giant pluck me down from the tree. "Well you almost kicked me in my nose!" Tearoy retorted, as he set me down gently on the ground. That;s when he noticed i was bleeding, because he felt it. "Kate what happened to you ear?" Tearoy gasped in a concerned voice. "Leon shot me." i simply replied as we both started to run through the dark Forest again. That's so i told him Leon's plan and what he was trying to do, and how he kidnapped Carson. "that snake!" Tearoy snarled, "that dirty rotten betrayer! We have got to save Carson now! And find Jason! I just can't believe that Leon was the one who shot Ray and Jason, if he did anyway."
"Trust me Tea, he did. I saw the gun. It's the same kind as mine." i admitted between pants. "yours? what do you mean?" Tearoy wondered as he turned his head for a second to look at me before jumping over a fallen tree trunk that was in his path. "I bought a gun to kill Ray. I wanted to get my revenge on him, but i didn't shoot him that's for sure Tea. I was going to when i found him lying there on the ground. Something stopped me though, it was the feeling of forgiveness. I don't want revenge anymore on Ray. I realized that what i was doing was really wrong. Plus i didn't want to kill the guy since he was in so much pain. But i will get revenge again on Leon if he does something to Carson!" I admitted, feeling a rush of hot embarrassment air coming onto my face.
Tearoy remained silent for a few paces. Then he sighed "Well i forgive you Kate. I knew you wouldn't do something that drastic. Its a little shock to my system though. That, or this blasted cold snow blowing in my face. But we don't have time for arguments and regrets right now, we have a friend to save." I realized just then what a great group of true friends i had. And i thought they all hated me, and were against me. I was such a fool. I didn't have time for regrets or feeling guilty right now. Like Tearoy said, we have a friend to save! Once again at that moment, Tearoy suddenly yelped. "YYYYYYYYAAAA!!!!!" I stopped in my tracks and whirled around. Tearoy was now 20 feet in the air! Dangling from his foot. "KATE GET ME DOWN!" Tearoy shouted, trying to see what had caught him by the foot. "I'm coming Tearoy!" I yelled back at him, as i raced forward to help him. Something stopped me though. While i was running towards Tearoy, i bumped into something. "Hello Kate!" Son of a BISCUIT its LEON! "Time for you to die!" Leon laughed, pulling out his gun. "Kate watch out!" Tearoy warned. But i didn't need his warning.
Quickly dodging to the right, i barely managed to avoid Leons bullet shot. "Come here you life wrecker!" Leon laughed again, firing yet another shot. I dodged again, this time to the left, and avoided it. That's when i had time to reach into my pants pocket, and pull out my gun that i had replaced there eariler (forgot to mention it, but oh well now's not the time.) I pointed it right at him. Leon stared at me for a moment. Then said "Ha! a stand off eh? You trying to go up against me? Well this ought to be easy." He grinned, revealing his spiky teeth. That was a bit creepy. "What have you done with Carson?!" I demanded, still keeping the gun on Leon as he stared to walk circles around me. "Oh that little brat? He's no of no use to me anymore. So i subdued him." He grinned, showing his weird spiky teeth again.
"You WHAT?!" I yelled. "I subdued him. Killed him you might say. He's gone Kate, just like you will be!" Leon smirked. I weakened for a second. Little Carson, dead? No he's lying! Leon released another shot, but this time i didn't dodge it. I felt it enter my left arm. "AAARRGGHHH!!" I yelped, falling down t my knees. "Kate!" Tearoy yelled helplessly from his position. Leon just laughed. "Direct hit. Now time for another blow!" He bragged, loading up for another shot. That's when i got him though. Firing my own gun, i managed to shoot him in his leg. "YEOW!" Leon growled, stumbling backwards. Man this gun really is deadly, i didn't even know i fired it!
"You little immature girl!" Leon roared, as he flung himself on top of my. "KATE!" Tearoy yelled again. Rolling in the snow, me and Leon were now locked in a battle fighting to the death brawl. I punched him in the face, he punched my nose. I bit him on his neck, he whopped my bad ear. Dust was flying, snow was flung, snarls were heard, biting noises, catastrophic tumbling, my gun went flying. It was a mess. Both me and Leon were beating each other to a pulp. Finally, he face planted me into the snow with a SLAM noise. the blow nearly broke my jaw! He was on my back, pinning me helplessly to the ground. "You have breathed your last breath Kate!" Leon panted, blood trickling down from his face (though i couldn't see it). I heard him pull out the gun, and felt him put it to the back of my head.
Well, Kate, you had a good run. I prepared myself for death. I didn't need to though. WHAM! Something had knocked Leon off of my back. I crawled forward, and pressed my back upward on a fallen tree trunk. what had knocked Leon off me? The answer came to me just then. For i saw Leon fighting with someone. And that someone, was Carson! Carson was growling, and shouting and snarling as he fought Leon. There was punching, and kicking, threats, roars, yelps. Leon fired his gun again, but Carson once again did an amazing stunt. He performed a back flip, jumping high into the air. While still in the air he turned himself right side up again, and landed perfectly on his feet in front on me.
He glanced at me for a second. But when he did something about him looked different. His eyes were now blue? And shining? His multicolored hair was the same, but his eyes were now blue and he looked a little taller than before. Ok then........... that's pretty cool! Continuing the assault, Carson charged at Leon, jumped, and gave him a Hail Mary kick to the face. Now that was super special awesome!I hadn't realized how light it has gotten outside, but i didn't care. The snow was lighter, and now i could see where i could shoot. Picking up the pistol that had gotten knocked out of my hand during the brawl, i aimed straight at the rope that i could now see, that was holding Tearoy. I shot. Tearoy imminently fell down to the ground. Once he got up he said "we better help Carson!" With that he joined Carson in the assault against Leon.
Trust me, you do not want to get socked in the face my Tearoy. He really packs a punch. Literally. With one blow from Tearoys mighty fist, Leon went soaring backward and tumbled down the hill behind him, screaming in pain all the way. I tried to get up to help, but i was too weak. That's when i felt someone help me up. It was neither Tearoy nor Carson. It was Jason! "Let me help you Kate." he smiled gently putting my arm around his shoulder. He then lead me over to where the battle was still going on. Leon had put a big blow to Carson's left eye, and now he was yelling in pain. Tearoy backed Carson up by giving Leon another fist of fury!
Carson then came back with a vengeance. When Leon tried to punch him again, Carson grabbed his hand, twisted it, that he hurled Leon over his lead and slammed him down to the ground; he finished off the move by picking him up, giving Leona a kick to the crouch, and a powerful head butt right on Leons forehead. Tearoy then gave him a punch to the ribs.
Ok this fight has gone long enough. Pulling out my gun again, i took aim at Leons head. I pulled the trigger. Leon got one shocked look on his face. He gasped for a second, gave me a angry, burning stare, before stumbling backwards down Darkness Canyon; which was a a very deep canyon in the Dark Forest that i'm glad was there at the time. I was also happy that neither Tearoy or Carson fell down it. All we heard was a thud. No one spoke for a couple minutes. Soon Tearoy and Carson came up to join me and Jason. Carson's eyes were sparkling( even though his left was badly injured), and now they were back violet purple and he was his normal height.
"Well done Kate!" He winked, giving me the thumbs up. Ah little Carson. Your voice maybe a little high, and you may have colored hair, unusual purple eyes (even though they changed to blue for some odd reason), but you saved my life.
"let go of my foot! Let go of my foot! Let go of my foot!" I whimpered, shaking my foot like a rabid squirrel to try to shake the purser off. "Calm down Kate! It's me Tearoy!" Oh thank Poseidon! It's not Leon! "Tearoy you ding a ling! You scared me to death!" i growled, letting the giant pluck me down from the tree. "Well you almost kicked me in my nose!" Tearoy retorted, as he set me down gently on the ground. That;s when he noticed i was bleeding, because he felt it. "Kate what happened to you ear?" Tearoy gasped in a concerned voice. "Leon shot me." i simply replied as we both started to run through the dark Forest again. That's so i told him Leon's plan and what he was trying to do, and how he kidnapped Carson. "that snake!" Tearoy snarled, "that dirty rotten betrayer! We have got to save Carson now! And find Jason! I just can't believe that Leon was the one who shot Ray and Jason, if he did anyway."
"Trust me Tea, he did. I saw the gun. It's the same kind as mine." i admitted between pants. "yours? what do you mean?" Tearoy wondered as he turned his head for a second to look at me before jumping over a fallen tree trunk that was in his path. "I bought a gun to kill Ray. I wanted to get my revenge on him, but i didn't shoot him that's for sure Tea. I was going to when i found him lying there on the ground. Something stopped me though, it was the feeling of forgiveness. I don't want revenge anymore on Ray. I realized that what i was doing was really wrong. Plus i didn't want to kill the guy since he was in so much pain. But i will get revenge again on Leon if he does something to Carson!" I admitted, feeling a rush of hot embarrassment air coming onto my face.
Tearoy remained silent for a few paces. Then he sighed "Well i forgive you Kate. I knew you wouldn't do something that drastic. Its a little shock to my system though. That, or this blasted cold snow blowing in my face. But we don't have time for arguments and regrets right now, we have a friend to save." I realized just then what a great group of true friends i had. And i thought they all hated me, and were against me. I was such a fool. I didn't have time for regrets or feeling guilty right now. Like Tearoy said, we have a friend to save! Once again at that moment, Tearoy suddenly yelped. "YYYYYYYYAAAA!!!!!" I stopped in my tracks and whirled around. Tearoy was now 20 feet in the air! Dangling from his foot. "KATE GET ME DOWN!" Tearoy shouted, trying to see what had caught him by the foot. "I'm coming Tearoy!" I yelled back at him, as i raced forward to help him. Something stopped me though. While i was running towards Tearoy, i bumped into something. "Hello Kate!" Son of a BISCUIT its LEON! "Time for you to die!" Leon laughed, pulling out his gun. "Kate watch out!" Tearoy warned. But i didn't need his warning.
Quickly dodging to the right, i barely managed to avoid Leons bullet shot. "Come here you life wrecker!" Leon laughed again, firing yet another shot. I dodged again, this time to the left, and avoided it. That's when i had time to reach into my pants pocket, and pull out my gun that i had replaced there eariler (forgot to mention it, but oh well now's not the time.) I pointed it right at him. Leon stared at me for a moment. Then said "Ha! a stand off eh? You trying to go up against me? Well this ought to be easy." He grinned, revealing his spiky teeth. That was a bit creepy. "What have you done with Carson?!" I demanded, still keeping the gun on Leon as he stared to walk circles around me. "Oh that little brat? He's no of no use to me anymore. So i subdued him." He grinned, showing his weird spiky teeth again.
"You WHAT?!" I yelled. "I subdued him. Killed him you might say. He's gone Kate, just like you will be!" Leon smirked. I weakened for a second. Little Carson, dead? No he's lying! Leon released another shot, but this time i didn't dodge it. I felt it enter my left arm. "AAARRGGHHH!!" I yelped, falling down t my knees. "Kate!" Tearoy yelled helplessly from his position. Leon just laughed. "Direct hit. Now time for another blow!" He bragged, loading up for another shot. That's when i got him though. Firing my own gun, i managed to shoot him in his leg. "YEOW!" Leon growled, stumbling backwards. Man this gun really is deadly, i didn't even know i fired it!
"You little immature girl!" Leon roared, as he flung himself on top of my. "KATE!" Tearoy yelled again. Rolling in the snow, me and Leon were now locked in a battle fighting to the death brawl. I punched him in the face, he punched my nose. I bit him on his neck, he whopped my bad ear. Dust was flying, snow was flung, snarls were heard, biting noises, catastrophic tumbling, my gun went flying. It was a mess. Both me and Leon were beating each other to a pulp. Finally, he face planted me into the snow with a SLAM noise. the blow nearly broke my jaw! He was on my back, pinning me helplessly to the ground. "You have breathed your last breath Kate!" Leon panted, blood trickling down from his face (though i couldn't see it). I heard him pull out the gun, and felt him put it to the back of my head.
Well, Kate, you had a good run. I prepared myself for death. I didn't need to though. WHAM! Something had knocked Leon off of my back. I crawled forward, and pressed my back upward on a fallen tree trunk. what had knocked Leon off me? The answer came to me just then. For i saw Leon fighting with someone. And that someone, was Carson! Carson was growling, and shouting and snarling as he fought Leon. There was punching, and kicking, threats, roars, yelps. Leon fired his gun again, but Carson once again did an amazing stunt. He performed a back flip, jumping high into the air. While still in the air he turned himself right side up again, and landed perfectly on his feet in front on me.
He glanced at me for a second. But when he did something about him looked different. His eyes were now blue? And shining? His multicolored hair was the same, but his eyes were now blue and he looked a little taller than before. Ok then........... that's pretty cool! Continuing the assault, Carson charged at Leon, jumped, and gave him a Hail Mary kick to the face. Now that was super special awesome!I hadn't realized how light it has gotten outside, but i didn't care. The snow was lighter, and now i could see where i could shoot. Picking up the pistol that had gotten knocked out of my hand during the brawl, i aimed straight at the rope that i could now see, that was holding Tearoy. I shot. Tearoy imminently fell down to the ground. Once he got up he said "we better help Carson!" With that he joined Carson in the assault against Leon.
Trust me, you do not want to get socked in the face my Tearoy. He really packs a punch. Literally. With one blow from Tearoys mighty fist, Leon went soaring backward and tumbled down the hill behind him, screaming in pain all the way. I tried to get up to help, but i was too weak. That's when i felt someone help me up. It was neither Tearoy nor Carson. It was Jason! "Let me help you Kate." he smiled gently putting my arm around his shoulder. He then lead me over to where the battle was still going on. Leon had put a big blow to Carson's left eye, and now he was yelling in pain. Tearoy backed Carson up by giving Leon another fist of fury!
Carson then came back with a vengeance. When Leon tried to punch him again, Carson grabbed his hand, twisted it, that he hurled Leon over his lead and slammed him down to the ground; he finished off the move by picking him up, giving Leona a kick to the crouch, and a powerful head butt right on Leons forehead. Tearoy then gave him a punch to the ribs.
Ok this fight has gone long enough. Pulling out my gun again, i took aim at Leons head. I pulled the trigger. Leon got one shocked look on his face. He gasped for a second, gave me a angry, burning stare, before stumbling backwards down Darkness Canyon; which was a a very deep canyon in the Dark Forest that i'm glad was there at the time. I was also happy that neither Tearoy or Carson fell down it. All we heard was a thud. No one spoke for a couple minutes. Soon Tearoy and Carson came up to join me and Jason. Carson's eyes were sparkling( even though his left was badly injured), and now they were back violet purple and he was his normal height.
"Well done Kate!" He winked, giving me the thumbs up. Ah little Carson. Your voice maybe a little high, and you may have colored hair, unusual purple eyes (even though they changed to blue for some odd reason), but you saved my life.
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doglider [None]
:: May 23, 2012, 11:52 p.m.
oh dear. Is this the end? Pleases write more ASAP.