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Topic: [74672] Revenge, is not so sweet.
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doglider [None]
:: May 17, 2012, 2:31 a.m.
Keep writing..... and then tell me all the secrets that let you make awesome stories like this.
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nano121 [None]
:: May 17, 2012, 4:58 a.m.
awsome stories
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 17, 2012, 10:25 a.m.
OMG YOU ARE THE BEST I THINK YOU ARE BETTER THAN ALL AUTHOIRS IN MY COUNTRY ( I AM ROMAINIAN ) EX: ion creanga, mihai eminescu etC!!!!!!!!!! TELL MORE
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 17, 2012, 12:05 p.m.
writee morre.
love the story. but its a tad anoying how we have towait
have u written any other storys?
love the story. but its a tad anoying how we have towait
have u written any other storys?
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 17, 2012, 3:10 p.m.
cant wait! lol!
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 18, 2012, 11:57 a.m.
I'm so sorry to keep you guys waiting so long, i've been really busy with school. But the good news is, today is the last day, and i know i will have part 6 typed up after i get home today. so i am really sorry to keep you waiting. But i'll definitely be writing it today. I got to go, school bus is here. drats.
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hamzter247 [None]
:: May 18, 2012, 12:10 p.m.
King Dooooooom wrote: »I'm so sorry to keep you guys waiting so long, i've been really busy with school. But the good news is, today is the last day, and i know i will have part 6 typed up after i get home today. so i am really sorry to keep you waiting. But i'll definitely be writing it today. I got to go, school bus is here. drats.
this sucks im gunna have to wait the entire weekend for part 6. (i wont have internet)
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 18, 2012, 10:17 p.m.
nope you won't have to wait anymore, cause I'm going to write part 6 now! finally, i have time to write. so now lets begin! (at last. sheesh i hate my school for giving me so much work on the last week)
Part 6
This is unbelievable, unbelievable i tell you. Carson is alive, wide eyed and full of happyness, right in front of my face. "hey everyone! Good to see you! wow it's been awhile. I just got out of the hospital today. Boy am i glad to be out of that stinking place. I hate hospitals. They didn't give me enough ice cream." Carson vented, as he rubbed the back of his neck carefully. Tearoy, Jason, and ray then embraced Carson as though he was a lost puppy dog that's been on the streets for about a year and a half. Pathetic. "How in the blue blazes are you alive Carson!? I thought i sliced a fatal wound on the back of your neck! I saw it myself! And it was an accident, not on purpose." I snarled, giving Carson my threatening evil glare.
Carson remained silent. Then he just laughed and smiled at me. "Ha! i doubt that YOU were the one who gave me that awful cut. It was some random women in the Dark Forest, who didn't look like you at all to me. Of course it was raining, and that voice did sound very familiar. Plus, she said a completely random thing that i had no clue about. That women said This is for that comment you bastered. I mean really, ha ha ha ha that was the most weirdest thing i have ever heard in my entire life, and," Carson was beginning to explain, "Oh shut up Carson! I was the one who did it! I really did!" I interrupted, "Now how did you survive! That wound was again fatal, and no could have survived it. Now tell us how you LIVED!" I threatened him, as i picked him up by the collar of his yellow and blue stripped shirt.
"Ha, Kate you sure make me laugh. ok i'll tell you what happened that night," Carson began, " I was going to hide, as instructed by Tearoy and i knew you were It. I also knew it would be very hard to hide from your good eyes in the Dark Forest, for you have incredible night vision and that you knew the forest upwards, downwards, and sideways. So i made a plan. After you started to count, i quickly dashed eastward to the Dark Marsh, for that was a much trickier area to hide in. Slipping and slideing on the wet mud i ran, dodging bushes, trees, shrubs, and all sorts of things. Pretty soon, those objects got less and less, and i found i had come to an area filled with Oak trees. That's when it started to rain. It poured down like a waterfall watering a enchanted garden, but so hard that you could say the waterfall over watered the garden and drowned the plants. The mud became so slippery and slushy, i could barely scarcely keep my footing. Doing a baseball slide over to the biggest, fattest Oak Tree , i crouched down behind it. I knew no one would come over here to find me, and the terrain was much too wet for anyone to do so anyway."
"I waited, and waited and waited. No one arrived. The rain was freezing cold on my back, and i was afraid i might get hypothermia. I then started to shiver, so i crouched down even lower, and hugged myself tightly to keep warm. Then, i could swear i could feel another presence , besides rain, coming my way. But i decided to ignore it. I didn't ignore it for long though. I felt a little bump on my back, and then i heard a girls voice yell This is for that comment you bastered! Like i mentioned earlier before. Anyway, I said what are you talking about?!; And i turned around to see who it was who said that horrible word. Suddenly WHAM! I felt something go through the back of my neck before i saw who that person was. I fell to the ground,and became unconscious. About an hour or so later i presumed, i awakened to find myself, buried in mud behind another Oak tree that was oh, what 50 paces from where i was at, but the funny thing was i was only buried up to my neck; for my head was still sticking out.
" That's when i felt extreme pain in the back of my neck. So extreme, i couldn't see, feel, or move anything. I couldn't get up, think, or even whimper for help it was so bad. So i must have lied there for hours, and soon it was past midnight. The main soon grew past extreme, it grew into immense pain. I swear with every heart beat it hurt. But once again out of no where, i here a voice, this time is was a mans, saying let me help you little guy, i'll get you home and to a hospital. You'll be just fine. i didn't see him, but i felt him pick me up, and throwing me over his shoulder. he was pretty tall from what i could feel, me legs weren't touching the ground so of course he was taller than me; but if i had to guess I'd say he was about 5' 5'' or so. While he was walking me out of the marsh, his steps and genital movements lulled me to sleep. The next thing i knew, i was in a hospital with a bandage around my neck, and my parents at my bedside cooing me and loving me all over; particularly glad to see me.
" But the man who rescued me was no where in sight. I haven't seen him again. But i really do thank him. He saved my life, i could have indeed died. Henceforth i went through 4 months of therapy for my neck movements and reaction times, walking, and all that bloody crap. So now here i am back with true friends, and ready to rock. I'm back to normal thanks to the therapy." Carson finished.
Everyone was in awe at Caron's amazing story of survival. Even i, I have to admit, was shocked and amazed at Carson right now. But then that quickly went away and it turned to anger. I kissed him for crying out loud! I thought he was dead! Now he's alive? But hey, at least I'm not a murderer, and everyone thought i was innocent and all. I am safe, haw haw haw. So the day continued. Carson was introduced to Leon, and we all hung out. Pretty soon it was time to go home but before everyone left Tearoy mentioned "Remember guys we're going back to the Dark Forest tomorrow to play Dark Seek again. And this time, so no one gets hurt, a flashlight is required. And everyone must bring a emergency reflective patch so if you get lost, just shine your flashlight on the patch and we'll be able to find you. Have a good night guys!".
Hmmm, back to the Dark Forest eh? Perfect. As i exited, i couldn't help noticing the expression on Leon's face. He had a sly look in his eye, and he was looking straight at me and Carson. Well we were walking home together, but i don't see how that's strange or awkward. He walked away, leaving me puzzled. Carson walked me to my house, and to be honest, i was glad he was alive and well. "see ya later Kate!" He smiled, as he ran off down the street. once again Dynito City was becoming quiet. I couldn't wait for tomorrow. I would get a second chance at revenge.
But strangely, it wasn't as strong as before. Whats happening here? Am i actually forgiving Ray for the trouble he caused me? no, i will not forgive. I'll still have me revenge. I entered my house, had dinner with my parents and went to bed. As i lied there, looking at the posters on my ceiling, i couldn't stop think about the look Leon gave me and Carson. What was he thinking? And what is he up to? I just have the strangest feeling, that tomorrow is going to go horribly wrong. I don't know why, but i can feel it. Something just doesn't feel right about Leon to me.
Part 7 coming up later. Was this worth the wait? Cause it took me about an hour to write it. How was it
? Prepare yourselves for the next part, cause it's going to pretty good.
Posts merged due to double posting - Bunzy
Part 6
This is unbelievable, unbelievable i tell you. Carson is alive, wide eyed and full of happyness, right in front of my face. "hey everyone! Good to see you! wow it's been awhile. I just got out of the hospital today. Boy am i glad to be out of that stinking place. I hate hospitals. They didn't give me enough ice cream." Carson vented, as he rubbed the back of his neck carefully. Tearoy, Jason, and ray then embraced Carson as though he was a lost puppy dog that's been on the streets for about a year and a half. Pathetic. "How in the blue blazes are you alive Carson!? I thought i sliced a fatal wound on the back of your neck! I saw it myself! And it was an accident, not on purpose." I snarled, giving Carson my threatening evil glare.
Carson remained silent. Then he just laughed and smiled at me. "Ha! i doubt that YOU were the one who gave me that awful cut. It was some random women in the Dark Forest, who didn't look like you at all to me. Of course it was raining, and that voice did sound very familiar. Plus, she said a completely random thing that i had no clue about. That women said This is for that comment you bastered. I mean really, ha ha ha ha that was the most weirdest thing i have ever heard in my entire life, and," Carson was beginning to explain, "Oh shut up Carson! I was the one who did it! I really did!" I interrupted, "Now how did you survive! That wound was again fatal, and no could have survived it. Now tell us how you LIVED!" I threatened him, as i picked him up by the collar of his yellow and blue stripped shirt.
"Ha, Kate you sure make me laugh. ok i'll tell you what happened that night," Carson began, " I was going to hide, as instructed by Tearoy and i knew you were It. I also knew it would be very hard to hide from your good eyes in the Dark Forest, for you have incredible night vision and that you knew the forest upwards, downwards, and sideways. So i made a plan. After you started to count, i quickly dashed eastward to the Dark Marsh, for that was a much trickier area to hide in. Slipping and slideing on the wet mud i ran, dodging bushes, trees, shrubs, and all sorts of things. Pretty soon, those objects got less and less, and i found i had come to an area filled with Oak trees. That's when it started to rain. It poured down like a waterfall watering a enchanted garden, but so hard that you could say the waterfall over watered the garden and drowned the plants. The mud became so slippery and slushy, i could barely scarcely keep my footing. Doing a baseball slide over to the biggest, fattest Oak Tree , i crouched down behind it. I knew no one would come over here to find me, and the terrain was much too wet for anyone to do so anyway."
"I waited, and waited and waited. No one arrived. The rain was freezing cold on my back, and i was afraid i might get hypothermia. I then started to shiver, so i crouched down even lower, and hugged myself tightly to keep warm. Then, i could swear i could feel another presence , besides rain, coming my way. But i decided to ignore it. I didn't ignore it for long though. I felt a little bump on my back, and then i heard a girls voice yell This is for that comment you bastered! Like i mentioned earlier before. Anyway, I said what are you talking about?!; And i turned around to see who it was who said that horrible word. Suddenly WHAM! I felt something go through the back of my neck before i saw who that person was. I fell to the ground,and became unconscious. About an hour or so later i presumed, i awakened to find myself, buried in mud behind another Oak tree that was oh, what 50 paces from where i was at, but the funny thing was i was only buried up to my neck; for my head was still sticking out.
" That's when i felt extreme pain in the back of my neck. So extreme, i couldn't see, feel, or move anything. I couldn't get up, think, or even whimper for help it was so bad. So i must have lied there for hours, and soon it was past midnight. The main soon grew past extreme, it grew into immense pain. I swear with every heart beat it hurt. But once again out of no where, i here a voice, this time is was a mans, saying let me help you little guy, i'll get you home and to a hospital. You'll be just fine. i didn't see him, but i felt him pick me up, and throwing me over his shoulder. he was pretty tall from what i could feel, me legs weren't touching the ground so of course he was taller than me; but if i had to guess I'd say he was about 5' 5'' or so. While he was walking me out of the marsh, his steps and genital movements lulled me to sleep. The next thing i knew, i was in a hospital with a bandage around my neck, and my parents at my bedside cooing me and loving me all over; particularly glad to see me.
" But the man who rescued me was no where in sight. I haven't seen him again. But i really do thank him. He saved my life, i could have indeed died. Henceforth i went through 4 months of therapy for my neck movements and reaction times, walking, and all that bloody crap. So now here i am back with true friends, and ready to rock. I'm back to normal thanks to the therapy." Carson finished.
Everyone was in awe at Caron's amazing story of survival. Even i, I have to admit, was shocked and amazed at Carson right now. But then that quickly went away and it turned to anger. I kissed him for crying out loud! I thought he was dead! Now he's alive? But hey, at least I'm not a murderer, and everyone thought i was innocent and all. I am safe, haw haw haw. So the day continued. Carson was introduced to Leon, and we all hung out. Pretty soon it was time to go home but before everyone left Tearoy mentioned "Remember guys we're going back to the Dark Forest tomorrow to play Dark Seek again. And this time, so no one gets hurt, a flashlight is required. And everyone must bring a emergency reflective patch so if you get lost, just shine your flashlight on the patch and we'll be able to find you. Have a good night guys!".
Hmmm, back to the Dark Forest eh? Perfect. As i exited, i couldn't help noticing the expression on Leon's face. He had a sly look in his eye, and he was looking straight at me and Carson. Well we were walking home together, but i don't see how that's strange or awkward. He walked away, leaving me puzzled. Carson walked me to my house, and to be honest, i was glad he was alive and well. "see ya later Kate!" He smiled, as he ran off down the street. once again Dynito City was becoming quiet. I couldn't wait for tomorrow. I would get a second chance at revenge.
But strangely, it wasn't as strong as before. Whats happening here? Am i actually forgiving Ray for the trouble he caused me? no, i will not forgive. I'll still have me revenge. I entered my house, had dinner with my parents and went to bed. As i lied there, looking at the posters on my ceiling, i couldn't stop think about the look Leon gave me and Carson. What was he thinking? And what is he up to? I just have the strangest feeling, that tomorrow is going to go horribly wrong. I don't know why, but i can feel it. Something just doesn't feel right about Leon to me.
Part 7 coming up later. Was this worth the wait? Cause it took me about an hour to write it. How was it
? Prepare yourselves for the next part, cause it's going to pretty good.Posts merged due to double posting - Bunzy
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nano121 [None]
:: May 19, 2012, 2:21 a.m.
agreed with dark zoran for once .maybe dont even go
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 19, 2012, 2:44 a.m.
i do actually have a gun at my house. it's a shotgun as well. It's my brothers.
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doglider [None]
:: May 19, 2012, 3:11 a.m.
Now tell me those secrets....
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 19, 2012, 3:33 a.m.
Awesome !!!!!! WOW! worth the wait!
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 19, 2012, 4:57 a.m.
Woooooooooooooooow it is cooooooool !!!! Bring more
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flashstriker [None]
:: May 20, 2012, 11:56 a.m.
must say your friends are werid lol
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Unknown
:: May 20, 2012, 1:59 p.m.
Will you hurry up and wright more
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 20, 2012, 4:22 p.m.
ok, it is time for Part 7......
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNGGGG! SMASH! stupid alarm clock.Waking me up this early in the morning. Oh yeah, i forgot i had set it to wake me up at 6:00 yesterday night before i went to bed (i forgot to mention that.) Well it's tomorrow, and it's a Saturday morning. and i love Saturdays. No school, no homework, and best of all, no parents. Both of my parents worked at the Cookie Grill and Cafe today. But that's not all, they worked the double overtime shift as well. HA HA HA HA HA HA! Anyways, getting up out of my bed i jumped over to my pink dresser. I then proceeded to pull out my long navy blue sweatpants, and my favorite Girls Rule t-shirt. I also pulled out my other woman things, like my bra for instance, but you probably didn't want to know that. Once i was dressed, i ran down the stairs and made a piping hot breakfast of Waffles. I poured a mountain of maple syrup over my delectable waffles, and began to scarf them down one at a time. Taking my first bite, i realized that whoops, i forgot the milk. Still chewing my bite of waffle, i went over to the fridge and poured some milk into my blue flower plastic cup. then i went back to the table and gobbled the rest of my breakfast down. I was on a mission today. And i couldn't risk running into my friends. You'll see what i mean once i get out of the house.
Putting on my light blue jacket, i grabbed my wallet, and ran out the front door, carefully shutting it behind me. I then hauled butt down my street, and turned left at the corner of Jordan Drive. If you are wondering, i was making my way to the weapon and arsenal store. Or as they call it Gun's for Fun, not a very good name for a weapon store if you ask me; but again, Dynito City has the weirdest names for businesses in the whole country anyway. Running down 5 more blocks, and turning right on the busy intersection of Ruth Way, i still had 10 blocks down this intersection before i got to Gun's for Fun. Hopefully i wouldn't run into any familiar faces.
Luckily, i didn't. I had arrived at Gun's for Fun, and i walked inside. I began to browse the silent guns section, and found the gun i have been wanting to buy since my last attempt at revenge. The Silent Killer 4000. A pistol so silent, you cannot even hear the person pull the trigger. This is what i wanted for tonight's game of Dark Seek. That way, i'll get Ray and no one will know a thing. It's the perfect scenario, if nothing goes wrong anyways. walking up to the cashier, i paid for the gun with the money i had been saving up. "Aren't you a little young to buy this?" The Cashier asked me once he finished the transaction and handed me my purchase. "Nope, I'm really 23 years old but I'm short for my age" i lied, winking at him. so I once again got away with something, and i jsut walked out the door of the shop. But that's when i spotted trouble coming. I could see someone walking toward me. Oh no! It's Leon! But what's he coming up here for? Did he follow me? Ah that's nonsense, his parents probably work here or something. That didn't seem to be the case though.
Taking action, i dove into the conveniently place bushes behind me to get out of Leon's sight before he would see me. I remained perfectly still, daring not to move an inch as Leon walked past the bushes and into the store. What is he up to? And what was he doing here at this hour? Strange. I thought i was the only 16 year old up at this hour. Well it is 7:00 in the morning, so maybe Caron's up, or Tearoy, maybe even Jason. But i wouldn't think Leon would be. After all he looks like he's about 1 year older than all of us, so he should be sleeping in till noon i would think. Anyway, Leon ended up walking out of the store an hour later; and i was feeling very cramped in the bushes. But as he was walking out, i noticed he had bought something. His purchase bag was the same size as mine from what i could observe. He looked around, to make sure he wasn't being watched. But i was watching him.
Leon is acting so strange. For some reason i'm thinking he is a bigger threat than Ray right now. Nah, i must be crazy. Writing something on a locker is way more bad than going into a gun store and buying something, then looking around suspiciously. Wait, that doesn't sound quite right. Ah well i'll sort through my thoughts later. Right now i got to get out of these stupid bushes, I think i feel a spider crawling on me. Once Leon was out of sight and walking down Ruth Way again, i leaped out of the bushes, scaring an old women in the process.
"AAAAAIIIIEEE!! PURSE NAPPER!" she screamed in an old horse voice. "Calm down lady! I don't want your purse!" i tried to say to her. But that didn't work out so well. WHAM! She whacked me with her, very heavy i might add, blue purse right on my left rib. "YEOW! Lady please i don't want your," WHAM! another hit. ok then, now would be the time to run! Dashing off down the street, i barely managed to avoid a third hit from the old lady and her purse. Man that was nuts! Note to self, never jump out of the bushes, in public, again.
I didn't realize that i had ran right past Leon. And well he was staring at me weird again when i glanced over my shoulder. Hmmm, i need to loose him. I know, the pet store at the corner of Ruth Way and Parker street. That'll get him off my back. I just don't trust him. Keeping my pace, i ran straight down Ruth way, and crossed the intersection to Parker Street. The pet store was just to my left. So i decided to walk the rest of the way. A couple minutes later, i was in the pet store (or Pet's Mart). I browsed all of the animals. I still had some money left over, so why not get a cat? My parents won't mind too much if i get one. I think. So for the next 30 minutes i inspected the kitties that were up for adoption.
Finally i found the purfect one. (get i? Purfect? ha ha ha i crack my self up.) It was a calico cat, with an orange spot around it's eye. "can i help you miss?" a voice behind me said. I turned around, expecting to see Leon or something. But it was just an employee. "Yeah, can i see that calico cat please? the one with the orange spot around its eye." i smiled, pointing to the cat i wanted. "sure little missy." the employee grinned, and she let me into the adoption room to see the cat. Right away when she let the cat out, i knew it would make a great pet. And it was a boy cat too. "Can i adopt him?" i asked the lady, as i held the little cat in my arms. "Sure miss." and with that, i paid the rest of my allowance for Mr. cat, and the supplies he would need.
Walking out of the store with my new companion, i headed for home. It was 1:00 in the afternoon now, and i hadn't realized that i had spent all morning in Pet's Mart. Oh well, now i can make preparations for tonight's Dark Seek game. Still i can't help but wonder what Leon bought in the Gun's for Fun store. i just keep thinking he bought the same gun i did. Kate stop your worrying, right now you got to get home, play with your new cat for a while, and just relax till night fall. That's what i did. So now it was 5:30 pm and the sun was setting. once again i dressed in all black, but this time i wore long black jeans. It was cold tonight after all. The thermometer only read 32 degrees. Making last minute preps, i slipped on my black sneakers, put my flashlight and reflector patch in my left jean pocket, and slipped my new gun (with ammo of course) into my right jean pocket.
Afterwards, i left a note for my parents petted my new cat good bye, and i headed out the door and into the night. This time i would not fail, this time i would succeed, and this time i would be careful when i would get my revenge. I do not want to injure Carson or anyone else, besides Ray. but something just kept bothering me.
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNGGGG! SMASH! stupid alarm clock.Waking me up this early in the morning. Oh yeah, i forgot i had set it to wake me up at 6:00 yesterday night before i went to bed (i forgot to mention that.) Well it's tomorrow, and it's a Saturday morning. and i love Saturdays. No school, no homework, and best of all, no parents. Both of my parents worked at the Cookie Grill and Cafe today. But that's not all, they worked the double overtime shift as well. HA HA HA HA HA HA! Anyways, getting up out of my bed i jumped over to my pink dresser. I then proceeded to pull out my long navy blue sweatpants, and my favorite Girls Rule t-shirt. I also pulled out my other woman things, like my bra for instance, but you probably didn't want to know that. Once i was dressed, i ran down the stairs and made a piping hot breakfast of Waffles. I poured a mountain of maple syrup over my delectable waffles, and began to scarf them down one at a time. Taking my first bite, i realized that whoops, i forgot the milk. Still chewing my bite of waffle, i went over to the fridge and poured some milk into my blue flower plastic cup. then i went back to the table and gobbled the rest of my breakfast down. I was on a mission today. And i couldn't risk running into my friends. You'll see what i mean once i get out of the house.
Putting on my light blue jacket, i grabbed my wallet, and ran out the front door, carefully shutting it behind me. I then hauled butt down my street, and turned left at the corner of Jordan Drive. If you are wondering, i was making my way to the weapon and arsenal store. Or as they call it Gun's for Fun, not a very good name for a weapon store if you ask me; but again, Dynito City has the weirdest names for businesses in the whole country anyway. Running down 5 more blocks, and turning right on the busy intersection of Ruth Way, i still had 10 blocks down this intersection before i got to Gun's for Fun. Hopefully i wouldn't run into any familiar faces.
Luckily, i didn't. I had arrived at Gun's for Fun, and i walked inside. I began to browse the silent guns section, and found the gun i have been wanting to buy since my last attempt at revenge. The Silent Killer 4000. A pistol so silent, you cannot even hear the person pull the trigger. This is what i wanted for tonight's game of Dark Seek. That way, i'll get Ray and no one will know a thing. It's the perfect scenario, if nothing goes wrong anyways. walking up to the cashier, i paid for the gun with the money i had been saving up. "Aren't you a little young to buy this?" The Cashier asked me once he finished the transaction and handed me my purchase. "Nope, I'm really 23 years old but I'm short for my age" i lied, winking at him. so I once again got away with something, and i jsut walked out the door of the shop. But that's when i spotted trouble coming. I could see someone walking toward me. Oh no! It's Leon! But what's he coming up here for? Did he follow me? Ah that's nonsense, his parents probably work here or something. That didn't seem to be the case though.
Taking action, i dove into the conveniently place bushes behind me to get out of Leon's sight before he would see me. I remained perfectly still, daring not to move an inch as Leon walked past the bushes and into the store. What is he up to? And what was he doing here at this hour? Strange. I thought i was the only 16 year old up at this hour. Well it is 7:00 in the morning, so maybe Caron's up, or Tearoy, maybe even Jason. But i wouldn't think Leon would be. After all he looks like he's about 1 year older than all of us, so he should be sleeping in till noon i would think. Anyway, Leon ended up walking out of the store an hour later; and i was feeling very cramped in the bushes. But as he was walking out, i noticed he had bought something. His purchase bag was the same size as mine from what i could observe. He looked around, to make sure he wasn't being watched. But i was watching him.
Leon is acting so strange. For some reason i'm thinking he is a bigger threat than Ray right now. Nah, i must be crazy. Writing something on a locker is way more bad than going into a gun store and buying something, then looking around suspiciously. Wait, that doesn't sound quite right. Ah well i'll sort through my thoughts later. Right now i got to get out of these stupid bushes, I think i feel a spider crawling on me. Once Leon was out of sight and walking down Ruth Way again, i leaped out of the bushes, scaring an old women in the process.
"AAAAAIIIIEEE!! PURSE NAPPER!" she screamed in an old horse voice. "Calm down lady! I don't want your purse!" i tried to say to her. But that didn't work out so well. WHAM! She whacked me with her, very heavy i might add, blue purse right on my left rib. "YEOW! Lady please i don't want your," WHAM! another hit. ok then, now would be the time to run! Dashing off down the street, i barely managed to avoid a third hit from the old lady and her purse. Man that was nuts! Note to self, never jump out of the bushes, in public, again.
I didn't realize that i had ran right past Leon. And well he was staring at me weird again when i glanced over my shoulder. Hmmm, i need to loose him. I know, the pet store at the corner of Ruth Way and Parker street. That'll get him off my back. I just don't trust him. Keeping my pace, i ran straight down Ruth way, and crossed the intersection to Parker Street. The pet store was just to my left. So i decided to walk the rest of the way. A couple minutes later, i was in the pet store (or Pet's Mart). I browsed all of the animals. I still had some money left over, so why not get a cat? My parents won't mind too much if i get one. I think. So for the next 30 minutes i inspected the kitties that were up for adoption.
Finally i found the purfect one. (get i? Purfect? ha ha ha i crack my self up.) It was a calico cat, with an orange spot around it's eye. "can i help you miss?" a voice behind me said. I turned around, expecting to see Leon or something. But it was just an employee. "Yeah, can i see that calico cat please? the one with the orange spot around its eye." i smiled, pointing to the cat i wanted. "sure little missy." the employee grinned, and she let me into the adoption room to see the cat. Right away when she let the cat out, i knew it would make a great pet. And it was a boy cat too. "Can i adopt him?" i asked the lady, as i held the little cat in my arms. "Sure miss." and with that, i paid the rest of my allowance for Mr. cat, and the supplies he would need.
Walking out of the store with my new companion, i headed for home. It was 1:00 in the afternoon now, and i hadn't realized that i had spent all morning in Pet's Mart. Oh well, now i can make preparations for tonight's Dark Seek game. Still i can't help but wonder what Leon bought in the Gun's for Fun store. i just keep thinking he bought the same gun i did. Kate stop your worrying, right now you got to get home, play with your new cat for a while, and just relax till night fall. That's what i did. So now it was 5:30 pm and the sun was setting. once again i dressed in all black, but this time i wore long black jeans. It was cold tonight after all. The thermometer only read 32 degrees. Making last minute preps, i slipped on my black sneakers, put my flashlight and reflector patch in my left jean pocket, and slipped my new gun (with ammo of course) into my right jean pocket.
Afterwards, i left a note for my parents petted my new cat good bye, and i headed out the door and into the night. This time i would not fail, this time i would succeed, and this time i would be careful when i would get my revenge. I do not want to injure Carson or anyone else, besides Ray. but something just kept bothering me.
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King Dooooooom [None]
:: May 20, 2012, 4:35 p.m.
that part may have been a little boring to you readers. But i'm just building up the climax that's coming up in part 8 later on today. So sorry if that was boring, and if again you have any issues or questions, ill clear them up. 
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albastrel6 [None]
:: May 20, 2012, 4:59 p.m.
k and it wasn't boring cant wait for part 8 !!!! i wonder what did leon bought in gun for fun store ???
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Unknown
:: May 20, 2012, 5:01 p.m.
be extra careful with that Leon fellow, first, trust your instincts, second, don't go near him, third, if you are going to take down Ray, make sure that you draw him in a place where no one is around, then take him down.
Are you dumb, he bought a gun.
albastrel6 wrote: »k and it wasn't boring cant wait for part 8 !!!! i wonder what did leon bought in gun for fun store ???
Are you dumb, he bought a gun.
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VenomousViper (IN1) [None]
:: May 20, 2012, 7:05 p.m.
Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! interesssssssting!